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* Harry: Dethryl went out of his way to write Ginny into the story, so does that mean it'll be Harry/Ginny? He's dated Tracy and Padma, kissed Daphne, and is the crush-object of Laine Slater. Will Harry wind up with any of them? Harry/Pansy?
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* Harry: Dethryl went out of his way to write Ginny into the story, so does that mean it'll be Harry/Ginny? He's dated Tracy (Y3) and Padma, Padma (Y4), kissed Daphne, Daphne (Y3, though to be fair, she kissed him), and is the crush-object of Laine Slater. Will Harry wind up with any of them? Harry/Pansy?Harry/Pansy?
** Harry and Laine get together in Y5, but things are more than slightly volatile because [[spoiler: Harry gives her Slytherin's locket for Christmas and she starts wearing it all the time.]]
** Harry and Pansy get a LOT closer in Y6 when she tries to help him get over [[spoiler: Laine's death.]]
** Harry and Laine get together in Y5, but things are more than slightly volatile because [[spoiler: Harry gives her Slytherin's locket for Christmas and she starts wearing it all the time.]]
** Harry and Pansy get a LOT closer in Y6 when she tries to help him get over [[spoiler: Laine's death.]]
*** Astoria gets a LOT more visibility in Y6, so this is entirely plausible.
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* Snape's love for Lily will with be a) learnt of the same way it was in cannon, canon, b) learnt of sooner or c) Harry will never find out - maybe Snape will tell him he was friends with Lily but his friendship with Harry will mean he doesn't say anymore for some reason.
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* The plot was largely the same until the end of Y3, when things seem to break rather sharply. On the tin, Y4 is the same, but it is learned at the end that the plot went off the rails. How similar will Y5 be?
** Year five will be completely different - with the political backing of the Malfoys and other well-known families, the wizarding world will accept that Voldemort is back. Perhaps this will mean a different teacher than Umbridge, or, Umbridge training them for war ala Hitlers Youth.
** Year five will be completely different - with the political backing of the Malfoys and other well-known families, the wizarding world will accept that Voldemort is back. Perhaps this will mean a different teacher than Umbridge, or, Umbridge training them for war ala Hitlers Youth.
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* The plot was largely the same until the end of Y3, when things seem to break rather sharply. On the tin, Y4 is the same, but it is learned at the end that the plot went off the rails. Y5 had a lot of similarities as well. Y6 excised the big plot about the half-blood Prince and the Potions book, but other things like Professor Slughorn and Dumbledore's collection of memories were fairly intact. How similar much will Y5 be?
Y7 resemble the canon?
** Yearfive 5 will be completely different - with the political backing of the Malfoys and other well-known families, the wizarding world will accept that Voldemort is back. Perhaps this will mean a different teacher than Umbridge, or, Umbridge training them for war ala Hitlers Youth.
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** '''Confirmed: Harry hires the Dwarfen Mining Guild to dig a secret tunnel into Gringotts so he can look for Hufflepuff's Cup. [[spoiler: They don't find it.]]'''
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Dethryl is being very sneaky about what the ships are in this fic. He doesn't talk about how it's going to develop, so there's a lot of speculation as a result. Also, even if a couple gets together, there's no guarantee that they will stay together.
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* Harry will befriend dwarves. (Just because Dethryl has mentioned several times on PotterFicWeekly that he'd like to see it happen.)
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* Harry will befriend dwarves. (Just because Dethryl has mentioned several times on PotterFicWeekly Podcast/PotterFicWeekly that he'd like to see it happen.)
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* If Harry tries to learn occlumency as he did in the cannon, his friendlier relationship with Snape will mean he will actually learn it this time round.
** Alternatively, Harry is just plain bad at occlumency.
** In the canon Draco had a small talent for occlumency. Without Bellatrix to learn it from, he will take the lessons with Harry. They will engage in a friendly rivalry about it - making them strive harder and harder to be better at it.
** Alternatively, Harry is just plain bad at occlumency.
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* If Harry tries to learn occlumency Occlumency as he did in the cannon, canon, his friendlier relationship with Snape will mean he will actually learn it this time round.
** '''Confirmed: Though Snape doesn't teach it any differently, Harry doesn't hate Snape and is therefore able to learn it.'''
** Alternatively, Harry is just plain bad atocclumency.
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** In the canon Draco had a small talent forocclumency.Occlumency. Without Bellatrix to learn it from, he will take the lessons with Harry. They will engage in a friendly rivalry about it - making them strive harder and harder to be better at it.
** '''Confirmed: Though Snape doesn't teach it any differently, Harry doesn't hate Snape and is therefore able to learn it.'''
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** Draco/Astoria is a possibility. It is cannon, canon, and it would be interesting to see how Daphne would react to such a thing. However we haven't been properly introduced to Astoria in the TSH world yet, apart from a quick throwaway line.
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*** '''Confirmed: Umbridge forms a duelling club that is equal parts propaganda and training called the Ministry Youth.
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*** '''Confirmed: Umbridge forms a duelling club that is equal parts propaganda and training called the Ministry Youth.'''
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*** '''Confirmed: Umbridge forms a duelling club that is equal parts propaganda and training called the Ministry Youth.
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**** In book 5 [[spoiler:Blaise Zabini comes back to Hogwarts. He is the perfect, if not very obvious, potential traitor.]]
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**** In book 5 [[Blaise Zabini comes back to Hogwarts. He is the perfect, if not very obvious, potential traitor.]]
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**** In book 5 [[Blaise [[spoiler:Blaise Zabini comes back to Hogwarts. He is the perfect, if not very obvious, potential traitor.]]
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*** '''The part about Theo not betraying Harry is confirmed. [[spoiler:He ends up poisoning his own father to get out of being a Death Eater.]]'''
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** In the cannon Draco had a small talent for occlumency. Without Bellatrix to learn it from, he will take the lessons with Harry. They will engage in a friendly rivalry about it - making them strive harder and harder to be better at it.
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** Draco/Astoria is a possibility. It is cannon, and it would be interesting to see how Daphne would react to such a thing. However we haven't been properly introduced to Astoria in the TSH world yet, apart from a quick throwaway line.
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* Harry will befriend dwarves. (Just because Dethryl has mentioned several times on PotterFicWeekly that he'd like to see it happen. \n)
** Additionally, their friendship ends up being useless.
** Additionally, their friendship ends up being useless.
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* Harry will befriend dwarves. (Just because Dethryl has mentioned several times on PotterFicWeekly that he'd like to see it happen.
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* It's not clear if Barty Crouch, Jr. was impersonating Moody, someone else, or even if he was there at all.
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** Year five will be completely different - with the political backing of the Malfoys and other well-known fmailys the wizarding world will accept that Voldemort is back. Perhaps this will mean a different teacher than Umbridge, or, Umbridge training them for war ala Hitlers Youth.
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** Year five will be completely different - with the political backing of the Malfoys and other well-known fmailys families, the wizarding world will accept that Voldemort is back. Perhaps this will mean a different teacher than Umbridge, or, Umbridge training them for war ala Hitlers Youth.
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* Tracy will continue her descent into a ClingyJealousGirl and will eventually say "IfICantHaveYou then no one will!" and turn to the dark side.
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** Year five will be completely different - with the political backing of the Malfoys and other well-known fmailys the wizarding world will accept that Voldemort is back. Perhaps this will mean a different teacher than Umbridge, or, Umbridge training them for war ala Hitlers Youth.
* Which of Harry's cohort in Slytherin will betray him? Some Slytherin parents will surely not be as brave as the Malfoys to turn their backs on the Dark Lord.
** Theo and Harry's recent fallout is a red herring. He won't betray Harry - that would be too obvious - it will be someone really close to him, maybe one of the girls, and it will break Harry's heart.
* Which of Harry's cohort in Slytherin will betray him? Some Slytherin parents will surely not be as brave as the Malfoys to turn their backs on the Dark Lord.
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* Deathly Hallows changed setting from Hogwarts to life OnTheLam. Will Dethryl do the same? Will Harry (and any companions) leave Hogwarts in Y7? Later? Earlier?
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* The plot was largely the same until the end of Y3, when things seem to break rather sharply. On the tin, Y4 is the same, but it is learned at the end that the plot went off the rails. How similar will Y5 be?
!!Ships
Dethryl is being very sneaky about what the ships are in this fic. He doesn't talk about how it's going to develop, so there's a lot of speculation as a result.
* Harry: Dethryl went out of his way to write Ginny into the story, so does that mean it'll be Harry/Ginny? He's dated Tracy and Padma, kissed Daphne, and is the crush-object of Laine Slater. Will Harry wind up with any of them? Harry/Pansy?
* Draco: He's officially betrothed to Pansy, but they had an ugly breakup in Y4. He's professed interest in Parvati, but that may just be to get back at Pansy. Draco/Ginny? Draco/Daphne?
* Theo: Theo/Pansy is even more volatile and over-the-top than Ron/Hermione. They went to the Yule Ball together but had a miserable time.
!!Ships
Dethryl is being very sneaky about what the ships are in this fic. He doesn't talk about how it's going to develop, so there's a lot of speculation as a result.
* Harry: Dethryl went out of his way to write Ginny into the story, so does that mean it'll be Harry/Ginny? He's dated Tracy and Padma, kissed Daphne, and is the crush-object of Laine Slater. Will Harry wind up with any of them? Harry/Pansy?
* Draco: He's officially betrothed to Pansy, but they had an ugly breakup in Y4. He's professed interest in Parvati, but that may just be to get back at Pansy. Draco/Ginny? Draco/Daphne?
* Theo: Theo/Pansy is even more volatile and over-the-top than Ron/Hermione. They went to the Yule Ball together but had a miserable time.
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* Harry's Animagus form: Is something that is small, furry, vaguely weasel like, and a predator. Harry's is a mongoose. Which makes for some fun symbolism. Mongooses kill snakes.
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Is something that is small, furry, vaguely weasel like, and a predator. Harry's is a mongoose. Which makes for some fun symbolism. Mongooses kill snakes.
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Is something that is small, furry, vaguely weasel like, and a predator. Harry's is a mongoose. Which makes for some fun symbolism. Mongooses kill snakes.
