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* AlliterativeTitle: '''D'''ivi '''D'''ead.
* AllJustADream: A recurring theme, zig-zagging throughout the game. Scenes often end with the protagonist apparently waking from a dream, but those 'dreams' may turn out to be visions, memories, true events that occurred while sleepwalking...
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: At the endgame on Haruka's path [[spoiler: the original protagonist discorporates, and you finish the story playing as someone you probably never even knew existed]].
* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler:Ranmaru]] on Azusa. Borders slightly on NearRapeExperience, as he does seem to hesitate when she points out that this is rape, but in the end she fought him off rather than him stopping of his own accord.
* AllJustADream: A recurring theme, zig-zagging throughout the game. Scenes often end with the protagonist apparently waking from a dream, but those 'dreams' may turn out to be visions, memories, true events that occurred while sleepwalking...
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: At the endgame on Haruka's path [[spoiler: the original protagonist discorporates, and you finish the story playing as someone you probably never even knew existed]].
* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler:Ranmaru]] on Azusa. Borders slightly on NearRapeExperience, as he does seem to hesitate when she points out that this is rape, but in the end she fought him off rather than him stopping of his own accord.
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* AlliterativeTitle: '''D'''ivi '''D'''ead.
'''D'''ivi-'''D'''ead.
* AllJustADream: A recurring theme,zig-zagging zigzagging throughout the game. Scenes often end with the protagonist apparently waking from a dream, but those 'dreams' "dreams" may turn out to be visions, memories, true events that occurred while sleepwalking...
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: At the endgame on Haruka'spath [[spoiler: the path, [[spoiler:the original protagonist discorporates, dis-corporates, and you finish the story playing as someone you probably never even knew existed]].
* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler:Ranmaru]] on Azusa. Borders slightly on NearRapeExperience, as he does seem to hesitate when she points out that this is rape, but in theend end, she fought fights him off rather than him stopping of his own accord.
* AllJustADream: A recurring theme,
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: At the endgame on Haruka's
* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler:Ranmaru]] on Azusa. Borders slightly on NearRapeExperience, as he does seem to hesitate when she points out that this is rape, but in the
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* BackgroundMagicField: [[spoiler: "The chant" is perhaps closest to a strange, dangerous, and dark version of this with a helping of NothingIsScarier. Overuse ]]
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* BackgroundMagicField: [[spoiler: "The [[spoiler:"The chant" is perhaps closest to a strange, dangerous, and dark version of this with a helping of NothingIsScarier. Overuse NothingIsScarier.]]
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** And then he in turns seems to ultimately answer or is at least working alongside...[[spoiler: Ms. Mayumi, who is implied to want power to get revenge for Kasumi's death in the seminar in the past.]]
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** And then he in turns seems to ultimately answer or is at least working alongside...[[spoiler: Ms. [[spoiler:Ms. Mayumi, who is implied to want power to get revenge for Kasumi's death in the seminar in the past.]]
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** Dropping all honorifics, but maintaining several conversations in which characters discuss each other's use or non-use of them. When ''everyone'' is calling everyone else by first names, it makes no sense to suddenly flag one character as being unusual for doing so.
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** Dropping all honorifics, honorifics but maintaining several conversations in which characters discuss each other's use or non-use of them. When ''everyone'' is calling everyone else by first names, it makes no sense to suddenly flag one character as being unusual for doing so.
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** Probably ''intentionally'' mis-translating (or outright replacing with ellipses!) certain scenes and lines for censorship purposes.
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** Probably ''intentionally'' mis-translating mistranslating (or outright replacing with ellipses!) certain scenes and lines for censorship purposes.
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* DeadlyHug: [[spoiler: Haruka's ending]] - we see the hug at first, and then the deadly nature is revealed as the camera pans down.
* DemonicPossession: Mami is [[spoiler: occasionally controlled by the ghost of her sister Kasumi]]. Ranmaru, on the other hand, [[spoiler: is himself possessing someone else's body]] at some points in the story.
* DemonicPossession: Mami is [[spoiler: occasionally controlled by the ghost of her sister Kasumi]]. Ranmaru, on the other hand, [[spoiler: is himself possessing someone else's body]] at some points in the story.
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* DeadlyHug: [[spoiler: Haruka's [[spoiler:Haruka's ending]] - we see the hug at first, and then the deadly nature is revealed as the camera pans down.
* DemonicPossession: Mami is[[spoiler: occasionally [[spoiler:occasionally controlled by the ghost of her sister Kasumi]]. Ranmaru, on the other hand, [[spoiler: is [[spoiler:is himself possessing someone else's body]] at some points in the story.
* DemonicPossession: Mami is
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* DyingAsYourself: Implied in Haruka's ending. [[spoiler: In the end, dying was apparently a relief for her. And for him.]]
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* DyingAsYourself: Implied in Haruka's [[spoiler:Haruka]]'s ending. [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In the end, dying was apparently a relief for her. And for him.]]
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* FemmeFatale: [[spoiler:Haruka]] plays this role, luring the protagonist into wanting to 'save' her.
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* FemmeFatale: [[spoiler:Haruka]] plays this role, luring the protagonist into wanting to 'save' "save" her.
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* HopeSpot: Saving [[spoiler: Mami]]. He struggles through hell to get there, it looks like he's finally getting through to her... [[spoiler: and then the music changes.]]
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* HopeSpot: Saving [[spoiler: Mami]]. [[spoiler:Mami]]. He struggles through hell to get there, there; it looks like he's finally getting through to her... [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and then the music changes.]]changes]].
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* {{Jerkass}}: Sano-sensei, first introduced apparently harassing a female student, later spending a lot of time insulting and threatening the protagonist. [[spoiler: Later revealed to be [[BigBad much worse]].]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: Sano-sensei, first introduced apparently harassing a female student, later spending spends a lot of time insulting and threatening the protagonist. [[spoiler: Later [[spoiler:He is later revealed to be [[BigBad much worse]].]]]]
* KickTheDog: The gruesome murder of poor [[spoiler:Saburo, whose body Ranmaru discovers in the forest]].
* KickTheDog: The gruesome murder of poor [[spoiler:Saburo, whose body Ranmaru discovers in the forest]].
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* TheMole: The protagonist has been sent to the school, pretending to be a normal student, in order to investigate various strange goings-on. [[spoiler: So has Azusa.]]
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* TheMole: The protagonist has been sent to the school, pretending to be a normal student, in order to investigate various strange goings-on. [[spoiler: So [[spoiler:So has Azusa.]]
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* NameAmnesia: [[spoiler: Nishizaki, at least the person you know as Nishizaki through most of the game. His true identity may have been magically erased.]]
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* NameAmnesia: [[spoiler: Nishizaki, [[spoiler:Nishizaki, at least the person you know as Nishizaki through most of the game. His true identity may have been magically erased.]]
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* PunBasedTitle: [[spoiler: Ranmaru was killed by decapitation in the intro while he was bedridden by "the chant" ravaging his body, his corpse effectively split into two parts. Later, his soul shares the same body with a demon.]]
* PeacefulInDeath: In Haruka's ending. "At last I can sleep... peacefully."
* PeacefulInDeath: In Haruka's ending. "At last I can sleep... peacefully."
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* PunBasedTitle: [[spoiler: Ranmaru [[spoiler:Ranmaru was killed by decapitation in the intro while he was bedridden by "the chant" ravaging his body, his corpse effectively split into two parts. Later, his soul shares the same body with a demon.]]
* PeacefulInDeath: InHaruka's [[spoiler:Haruka]]'s ending. "At last last, I can sleep... peacefully."
* PeacefulInDeath: In
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%%* UnluckyChildhoodFriend: [[spoiler:Azusa]]
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%%* UnluckyChildhoodFriend: [[spoiler:Azusa]][[spoiler:Azusa.]]
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* GuideDangIt: Good luck trying to get the best ending without a walkthrough!
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* GuideDangIt: Good luck trying to get the best ending without a walkthrough!{{walkthrough}}!
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* BackgroundMagicField: [[spoiler: "the chant" is perhaps closest to a strange and dark version of this with a helping of NothingIsScarier.]]
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* BackgroundMagicField: [[spoiler: "the "The chant" is perhaps closest to a strange strange, dangerous, and dark version of this with a helping of NothingIsScarier.NothingIsScarier. Overuse ]]
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** And then he in turns seems to ultimately answer or is at least working alongside...[[spoiler: Ms. Mayumi, who is implied to want power to get revenge for Kasumi's death in the seminar in the past.]]