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When we come back, Randall has one more clip. He shows an interview he had with Dr. Franklin, who explains the need to be careful with the various races and treatments that they need. Randall asks if they ever use the cryo units, and Franklin says they do in extreme cases. But he says they don;t have any patients in cryo at the moment.
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When we come back, Randall has one more clip. He shows an interview he had with Dr. Franklin, who explains the need to be careful with the various races and treatments that they need. Randall asks if they ever use the cryo units, and Franklin says they do in extreme cases. But he says they don;t don't have any patients in cryo at the moment.
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* FalseConfession: The above-mentioned producer. He's clearly being forced to make an admission and he looks like he been treated harshly: thin, ragged, with a dark look in his expression.
* FamousFamousFictional: This one shakes it up a bit, having one actual event (Gagarin's space flight) and ''three'' fictional ones (the creation of UsefulNotes/BillClinton's creation of the Commission On the Future in 1999, the laying of the foundation of the first lunar colony on 2018 and the creation of the Psi Corps in 2161).
* FamousFamousFictional: This one shakes it up a bit, having one actual event (Gagarin's space flight) and ''three'' fictional ones (the creation of UsefulNotes/BillClinton's creation of the Commission On the Future in 1999, the laying of the foundation of the first lunar colony on 2018 and the creation of the Psi Corps in 2161).
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* FalseConfession: The above-mentioned producer. He's clearly being forced to make an admission and he looks like he he's been treated harshly: thin, ragged, with a dark look in his expression.
* FamousFamousFictional: This one shakes it up a bit, having one actual event (Gagarin's space flight) and ''three'' fictional ones (the creation of UsefulNotes/BillClinton's creation of the CommissionOn on the Future in 1999, the laying of the foundation of the first lunar colony on in 2018 and the creation of the Psi Corps in 2161).
* FamousFamousFictional: This one shakes it up a bit, having one actual event (Gagarin's space flight) and ''three'' fictional ones (the creation of UsefulNotes/BillClinton's creation of the Commission
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* NothingIsScarier: In-Universe, Dr. Indiri mentions extreme cases of Minbari War Syndrome led to self mutilation and cases which are "are too extreme for your audience to hear", leaving the broadcast audience to project their worst fears in speculation.
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* NothingIsScarier: In-Universe, In-universe, Dr. Indiri mentions extreme cases of Minbari War Syndrome led to self mutilation self-mutilation and cases which are "are too extreme for your audience to hear", leaving the broadcast audience to project their worst fears in speculation.
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* YoureInsane: After Zack shoots his crates, Randall tells Zack he's crazy.
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* YoureInsane: After Zack shoots his crates, Randall tells Zack him he's crazy.
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'''Sheridan''': Well, I'm shocked. Shocked and dismayed. I'd remind you that we are short on supplies here. We can't afford to take perfectly good clothing and throw it out into space. Always take the jacket off first, I've told you that before. Sorry, she meant to say: "Stripped naked and thrown out an airlock." I apologize for any confusion this may have caused.
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'''Sheridan''': Well, I'm shocked. Shocked and dismayed. I'd remind you that we are short on supplies here. We can't afford to take perfectly good clothing and throw it out into space. Always take the jacket off first, I've told you that before. Sorry, she meant to say: say, "Stripped naked and thrown out an airlock." I apologize for any confusion this may have caused.
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* ThrownOutTheAirlock: Ivanova threatens a reporter with this. Sheridan scolds her quite thoroughly for not being specific - "...sorry, she meant to say, '''Stripped naked'' and thrown out an airlock. I apologize for any confusion this may have caused.'"
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* ThrownOutTheAirlock: Ivanova threatens a reporter with this. Sheridan scolds her quite thoroughly for not being specific and wasting good clothes - "...sorry, "Sorry, she meant to say, '''Stripped ''stripped naked'' and thrown out an airlock. I apologize for any confusion this may have caused.'"
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: A Hollywood-type producer being accused of using his medium to promote seditious and anti-Earth propaganda. All the surnames listed in this sequence are those of people ruined by [[RedScare HUAC]].
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything:
** A Hollywood-type producer being accused of using his medium to promote seditious and anti-Earth propaganda. All the surnames listed in this sequence are those of people ruined by [[RedScareHUAC]].HUAC]].
** News networks taking things out of context and twisting meanings to promote fear and prejudice among the viewers. Hmmm.
** A Hollywood-type producer being accused of using his medium to promote seditious and anti-Earth propaganda. All the surnames listed in this sequence are those of people ruined by [[RedScare
** News networks taking things out of context and twisting meanings to promote fear and prejudice among the viewers. Hmmm.
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* TemptingFate: "What can they do to us?" John, John, you just ''had'' to say it!
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* TemptingFate: TemptingFate:
** "What can they do to us?" John, John, you just ''had'' to sayit!it!
** Sheridan mostly does as well as a job as could be expected in making ISN really work to make the station look bad, but you'd think he'd know to stay away from actually saying the words, "No one can stop us."
** "What can they do to us?" John, John, you just ''had'' to say
** Sheridan mostly does as well as a job as could be expected in making ISN really work to make the station look bad, but you'd think he'd know to stay away from actually saying the words, "No one can stop us."
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Randall posits the theory that Sheridan is on a quest to make an entire race of human-minbari hybrids. He notes that it's already happened; Delenn did it, why not everyone else? And if everyone refuses, he has a fleet ready to force the issue.
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Randall posits the theory that Sheridan is on a quest to make an entire race of human-minbari human-Minbari hybrids. He notes that it's already happened; Delenn did it, why not everyone else? And if everyone refuses, he has a fleet ready to force the issue.
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* FantasticRacism: A mild example. After telling how the first contact with aliens caused some to think they were closer to God than we were, Indiri amends that with the Centauri that coudln't possibly be the case.
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* FantasticRacism: A mild example. After telling how the first contact with aliens caused some to think they were closer to God than we were, Indiri amends that with the Centauri [[VestigialEmpire the]] [[TheHedonist Centauri]] that coudln't couldn't possibly be the case.
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* IdiotBall: For people who have been warned that there will be a propaganda offensive against them, and who have been watching the Clark-controlled ISN for nearly a year now, the command staff and Sheridan in particular seem remarkably lacking in smarts.
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* IdiotBall: For people who have been warned that there will be a propaganda offensive against them, and who have been watching the Clark-controlled ISN for nearly a year now, the command staff and Sheridan in particular seem remarkably lacking naive in smarts.thinking Randall will give them any kind of fair presentation when his documentary goes to air. GoodCannotComprehendEvil indeed.
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* SelfHarm: Dr. Indiri explains that extreme cases of Minbari War Syndrome have led to this, with victims attempting to make themselves look more alien, and believes that Sheridan is trying to extend this to the entire human race.
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* SelfHarm: Dr. Indiri explains that extreme cases of Minbari War Syndrome have led to this, with victims attempting to make themselves look more alien, and believes that Sheridan is trying to extend this to the entire human race.race by turning them into Minbari hybrids like Delenn.
