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->''"You're not supposed to hurt ladies, scumbag. If your parents didn't teach you that, then I'm the one whose gonna beat the lesson into your brain."''
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->''"You're not supposed to hurt ladies, scumbag. If your parents didn't teach you that, then I'm the one whose who's gonna beat the lesson into your brain."''
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->''"You're not suppose to hurt ladies, scumbag. If your parents didn't teach you that, then I'm the one whose gonna beat the lesson into your brain."''
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->''"You're not suppose supposed to hurt ladies, scumbag. If your parents didn't teach you that, then I'm the one whose gonna beat the lesson into your brain."''
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-->--'''Theatre/35MillimeterAMusicalExhibition''', "Leave Luanne"
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->''She cries her miserable name\\
So the bastards will never sleep again\\
No, no reprieve, Luanne,\\
[[VengefulGhost She brings their souls down to hell\\
A caution to the cruelest of men.]]''
-->--'''Theatre/35MillimeterAMusicalExhibition''', "Leave Luanne"
So the bastards will never sleep again\\
No, no reprieve, Luanne,\\
[[VengefulGhost She brings their souls down to hell\\
A caution to the cruelest of men.]]''
-->--'''Theatre/35MillimeterAMusicalExhibition''', "Leave Luanne"
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-->--'''[[ChivalrousPervert Sanji:]]''', '''Anime/OnePiece''', Episode 607
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-->--'''[[ChivalrousPervert Sanji:]]''', Sanji]]''', '''Anime/OnePiece''', Episode 607
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->'''[[ChivalrousPervert Sanji:]]''' ..You're not suppose to hurt ladies, scumbag. If your parents didn't teach you that, then I'm the one whose gonna beat the lesson into your brain.
-->--'''Anime/OnePiece''', Episode 607
-->--'''Anime/OnePiece''', Episode 607
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-->--'''Anime/OnePiece''',
-->--'''[[ChivalrousPervert Sanji:]]''', '''Anime/OnePiece''', Episode 607
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->'''Virgo:''' You're a pirate. Why are you helping a bunch of Marines?
->'''[[ChivalrousPervert Sanji:]]''' 'Cause you're not suppose to hurt ladies, scumbag. If your parents didn't teach you that, then I'm the one whose gonna beat the lesson into your brain.
->'''[[ChivalrousPervert Sanji:]]''' 'Cause you're not suppose to hurt ladies, scumbag. If your parents didn't teach you that, then I'm the one whose gonna beat the lesson into your brain.
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->'''Virgo:''' You're a pirate. Why are you helping a bunch of Marines?
->'''[[ChivalrousPervert Sanji:]]''' 'Cause you're not suppose to hurt ladies, scumbag. If your parents didn't teach you that, then I'm the one whose gonna beat the lesson into your brain.
-->--'''Anime/OnePiece''', Episode 607
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-> '''Vida:''' So, Virgil, I gather you like hitting ladies.
--> '''Virgil:''' Some women just need to get hit.
--> '''Vida:''' And conversely, some men need to be hit ''back''.
--> ''(Vida slaps Virgil and then punches him in the face)''
-->-- ''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
-> '''Carol Ann:''' Oh my god, he's going to hurt Vida so bad!
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:''' Carol Anne, there's something you should know about Vida, mami. Well...
-->'''Noxie:''' Vida works out. Vida works out, yeah...
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:''' A lot.
-->''(Cue Vida pushing Virgil out the door, without even for a moment losing her feminine dignity)''
-->-- ''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
--> '''Virgil:''' Some women just need to get hit.
--> '''Vida:''' And conversely, some men need to be hit ''back''.
--> ''(Vida slaps Virgil and then punches him in the face)''
-->-- ''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
-> '''Carol Ann:''' Oh my god, he's going to hurt Vida so bad!
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:''' Carol Anne, there's something you should know about Vida, mami. Well...
-->'''Noxie:''' Vida works out. Vida works out, yeah...
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:''' A lot.
-->''(Cue Vida pushing Virgil out the door, without even for a moment losing her feminine dignity)''
-->-- ''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
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-> '''Vida:''' So, Virgil, I gather you like hitting ladies.
-->ladies.\\
'''Virgil:''' Some women just need to gethit.
-->hit.\\
'''Vida:''' And conversely, some men need to be hit''back''.
-->''back''.\\
''(Vida slaps Virgil and then punches him in the face)''
-->--''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
''Film/ToWongFooThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
-> '''Carol Ann:''' Oh my god, he's going to hurt Vida sobad!
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:'''bad!\\
'''[=ChiChi=]:''' Carol Anne, there's something you should know about Vida, mami.Well...
-->'''Noxie:'''Well...\\
'''Noxie:''' Vida works out. Vida works out,yeah...
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:'''yeah...\\
'''[=ChiChi=]:''' Alot.
-->''(Cuelot.\\
''(Cue Vida pushing Virgil out the door, without even for a moment losing her feminine dignity)''
-->--''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
''Film/ToWongFooThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
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'''Virgil:''' Some women just need to get
-->
'''Vida:''' And conversely, some men need to be hit
-->
''(Vida slaps Virgil and then punches him in the face)''
-->--
-> '''Carol Ann:''' Oh my god, he's going to hurt Vida so
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:'''
'''[=ChiChi=]:''' Carol Anne, there's something you should know about Vida, mami.
-->'''Noxie:'''
'''Noxie:''' Vida works out. Vida works out,
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:'''
'''[=ChiChi=]:''' A
-->''(Cue
''(Cue Vida pushing Virgil out the door, without even for a moment losing her feminine dignity)''
-->--
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--> '''Vida:''' So, Virgil, I gather you like hitting ladies.
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--> '''Carol Ann:''' Oh my god, he's going to hurt Vida so bad!
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--> '''Vida:''' So, Virgil, I gather you like hitting ladies.
--> '''Virgil:''' Some women just need to get hit.
--> '''Vida:''' And conversely, some men need to be hit ''back''.
--> ''(Vida slaps Virgil and then punches him in the face)''
-->-- ''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
--> '''Carol Ann:''' Oh my god, he's going to hurt Vida so bad!
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:''' Carol Anne, there's something you should know about Vida, mami. Well...
-->'''Noxie:''' Vida works out. Vida works out, yeah...
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:''' A lot.
-->''(Cue Vida pushing Virgil out the door, without even for a moment losing her feminine dignity)''
-->-- ''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
--> '''Virgil:''' Some women just need to get hit.
--> '''Vida:''' And conversely, some men need to be hit ''back''.
--> ''(Vida slaps Virgil and then punches him in the face)''
-->-- ''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
--> '''Carol Ann:''' Oh my god, he's going to hurt Vida so bad!
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:''' Carol Anne, there's something you should know about Vida, mami. Well...
-->'''Noxie:''' Vida works out. Vida works out, yeah...
-->'''[=ChiChi=]:''' A lot.
-->''(Cue Vida pushing Virgil out the door, without even for a moment losing her feminine dignity)''
-->-- ''Film/ToWongFuThanksForEverythingJulieNewmar''
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->''"He's a wife-beater, Dan! Use the gun!"''
-->--'''Dr. Herbert West''', ''Film/BrideOfReAnimator''
-->--'''Dr. Herbert West''', ''Film/BrideOfReAnimator''
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-> ''"[[UnstoppableRage You!]] [[PunctuatedPounding Don't!]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Treat!]] [[WouldntHitAGirl Women!]] [[BewareTheNiceOnes Like!]] [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil That!]]"''
-->-- '''Cameron Poe''', as he repeatedly slams serial rapist Johnny-23's head into a bulkhead, ''Film/ConAir''
-->-- '''Cameron Poe''', as he repeatedly slams serial rapist Johnny-23's head into a bulkhead, ''Film/ConAir''
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-> ''"[[UnstoppableRage You!]] [[PunctuatedPounding Don't!]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Treat!]] [[WouldntHitAGirl Women!]] [[BewareTheNiceOnes Like!]] [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil ''"[[PunctuatedPounding You! Don't! Treat! Women! Like! That!]]"''
-->-- '''Cameron Poe''', as he repeatedly slamsserial rapist SerialRapist Johnny-23's head into a bulkhead, ''Film/ConAir''
-->-- '''Cameron Poe''', as he repeatedly slams
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->''What kind of man are you?\\
Instead of kisses, you gave bruises\\
No more time for cheap excuses\\
If I were you, I would be leaving\\
Best you go while you're still breathing''
-->--'''Music/CageTheElephant''', "Punchin' Bag"
Instead of kisses, you gave bruises\\
No more time for cheap excuses\\
If I were you, I would be leaving\\
Best you go while you're still breathing''
-->--'''Music/CageTheElephant''', "Punchin' Bag"
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-->-- '''Cameron Poe''', as he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome repeatedly slams serial rapist Johnny-23's head into a bulkhead]], ''Film/ConAir''
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-->-- '''Cameron Poe''', as he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome repeatedly slams serial rapist Johnny-23's head into a bulkhead]], bulkhead, ''Film/ConAir''
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->''The little woman had all the shit that she could take\\
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->''The little woman [[TheDogBitesBack had all the shit that she could take\\take]]\\
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->''Well, if you give me a couple minutes of your time, I got a few things I'd like to talk to ya about. You know, eh, what you did wasn't really your fault. It's what you call, a eh, genetic defect. Mom called it the, the gene. My Grandfather had the gene, he eh, came over from the boat from Ireland in 1912 and I guess he passed it on to my Old Man. My Old Man was a great guy, a real pussy cat, you know hard worker. Big sports fan, but sometimes on his way home from the docks he liked to stop in with the guys and have a couple of beers, ya know. I remember coming home from school one day, and eh, the whole house was dark. Couldn't figure it out. I heard my Mom crying off in the dark someplace, and I was old enough at that point I could reach the light switch. I turned the lights on, and I saw, what he did to her. So I went to my room and I got, the eh, baseball bat. Mickey Mantle model my Old Man give me for Christmas, and I found the Old Man passed out in the bathtub, and I tattooed him. Needless to say, when I came home everyday from school after that, the eh, house is lit up like Ebbet's Field, and the Old Man eh, never drank again. So all I'm saying to you is if you wanna drink, you go ahead and drink. But if I ever find out that you laid your hands on that little girl again, me and Mr. Mantle are gonna pay you a visit my friend.''
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You're just a child with a temper\\
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You're just [[PsychopathicManChild a child with a temper\\temper]]\\
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->''"Father"'s a name you haven't earned yet\\
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-> ''"I ''despise'' those who don't treat women right."''
-->--'''Dark Kuyumaya''', ''FanFic/RosarioVampireBrightestDarkness''
-->--'''Dark Kuyumaya''', ''FanFic/RosarioVampireBrightestDarkness''
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Haven't you heard, "[[WouldntHitAGirl don't hit a lady"?\\
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Haven't you heard, "[[WouldntHitAGirl don't hit a lady"?\\lady]]"?\\
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--> -- '''Music/BowlingForSoup''', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nud-GnGPIPw "99 Biker Friends"]]
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->''"Father"'s a name you haven't earned yet\\
You're just a child with a temper\\
Haven't you heard, "[[WouldntHitAGirl don't hit a lady"?\\
Kicking your ass would be a pleasure''
-->-- '''Music/{{Nickelback}}''', "Never Again"
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->''Well, if you give me a couple minutes of your time, I got a few things I'd like to talk to ya about. You know, eh, what you did wasn't really your fault. It's what you call, a eh, genetic defect. Mom called it the, the gene. My Grandfather had the gene, he eh, came over from the boat from Ireland in 1912 and I guess he passed it on to my Old Man. My Old Man was a great guy, a real pussy cat, you know hard worker. Big sports fan, but sometimes on his way home from the docks he liked to stop in with the guys and have a couple of beers, ya know. I remember coming home from school one day, and eh, the whole house was dark. Couldn't figure it out. I heard my Mom crying off in the dark someplace, and I was old enough at that point I could reach the light switch. I turned the lights on, and I saw, what he did to her. So I went to my room and I got, the eh, baseball bat. Mickey Mantle model my Old Man give me for Christmas, and I found the Old Man passed out in the bathtub, and I tattooed him. Needless to say, when I came home everyday from school after that, the eh, house is lit up like Ebbet's Field, and the Old Man eh, never drank again. So all I'm saying to you is if you wanna drink, you go ahead and drink. But if I ever find out that you laid your hands on that little girl again, me and Mr. Mantle are gonna pay you a visit my friend.''
-->-- '''Lou Veccio''', ''Film/SuicideKings''
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-->-- '''Music/Exodus''', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_ccAtvVft8 "Sealed With A Fist"]]
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-->-- '''Music/Exodus''', '''Music/ExodusBand''', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_ccAtvVft8 "Sealed With A Fist"]]
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->''The little woman had all the shit that she could take\\
Her intuition said "lock and load"\\
He-man, what's your plan to get out of this\\
She's gonna fill your ass with bullet holes\\
Guess who's bigger when she's squeezing the trigger\\
I got news, it isn't you\\
When they carry your body out over the threshold\\
You'll wish you never said "I do"''
-->-- '''Music/Exodus''', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_ccAtvVft8 "Sealed With A Fist"]]
Her intuition said "lock and load"\\
He-man, what's your plan to get out of this\\
She's gonna fill your ass with bullet holes\\
Guess who's bigger when she's squeezing the trigger\\
I got news, it isn't you\\
When they carry your body out over the threshold\\
You'll wish you never said "I do"''
-->-- '''Music/Exodus''', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_ccAtvVft8 "Sealed With A Fist"]]
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->''She wears shades, but we all can see\\
Behind that tinted glass\\
And I got 99 biker friends\\
Who wanna kick your ass!''
--> -- '''Music/BowlingForSoup''', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nud-GnGPIPw "99 Biker Friends"]]
Behind that tinted glass\\
And I got 99 biker friends\\
Who wanna kick your ass!''
--> -- '''Music/BowlingForSoup''', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nud-GnGPIPw "99 Biker Friends"]]
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--> -- '''Cameron Poe''', as he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome repeatedly slams serial rapist Johnny-23's head into a bulkhead]], ''ConAir''
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-->--'''KSBD'''
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-> ''"Real men do not beat women... they beat the men that do."''
-->--'''KSBD'''