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-->-- From the song "If I Didn't Have You", ''WesternAnimation/MonstersInc''
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-->-- From the song "If I Didn't Have You", ''WesternAnimation/MonstersInc''''WesternAnimation/MonstersInc1''
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'''Comicbook/RedSkull:''' Silence!! I do not need to be reminded of my own plan!
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->''"I think we are all forgetting that this young woman is not the same [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} Kara Zor-El]] that died at the hands of the Anti-monitor." [[Franchise/XMen Xavier]] continued. "It is, rather, the clone of that young woman merged with the spirit of that woman."\\
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->''"I think we are all forgetting that this young woman is not the same [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} Kara Zor-El]] that died at the hands of the Anti-monitor." [[Franchise/XMen [[ComicBook/XMen Xavier]] continued. "It is, rather, the clone of that young woman merged with the spirit of that woman."\\
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->'''Smeghead:''' This movie went ''way'' overboard with the exposition. You know you screwed up your storytelling when one of your characters starts a line with...\\
'''Fire Lord Ozai (in the film):''' As you know...\\
'''Smeghead:''' Well, if we ''know'', why are you telling us?
-->-- ''WebVideo/CinematicExcrement'' in the Second Look episode on ''Film/TheLastAirbender''
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-->'''Molly:''' ''(to Scratch)'' Still, that's no excuse for ignoring my old best friend, Ashley Harris, from when I lived in Dayton, Ohio.\\
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-->-- ''Fanfic/AnUnpleastantSurprise''
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-->-- ''Fanfic/AnUnpleastantSurprise''''Fanfic/AnUnpleasantSurprise''
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-->'''Molly:''' ''(to Scratch)'' Still, that's no excuse for ignoring my old best friend, Ashley Harris, from when I lived in Dayton, Ohio.\\
'''Ashley:''' Don't sweat it my old friend, Molly [=McGee=], who currently lives in Brighton.
-->-- ''Fanfic/AnUnpleastantSurprise''
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->''"Ooo, there are soaker blocks in here. [[SubvertedTrope You probably don't need an explanation for those by now, right?]]"''
-->-- '''Marie''', ''VideoGame/Splatoon3''
-->-- '''Marie''', ''VideoGame/Splatoon3''
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->''"What if the exposition is something an in-universe character would already know? Well, as you know, Bob, this technique is called “As you know, Bob”. When a character explains something to the audience under the guise of lecturing to a character even if that character should already know the information being presented since they live in the setting. The trick to this is to make it as clumsy and out of place as possible, kind of like a cashier explaining to me how a fuel injection engine works while I’m buying groceries."''
-->--'''JP Beaubien,''' ''WebAnimation/TerribleWritingAdvice'', EXPOSITION
-->--'''JP Beaubien,''' ''WebAnimation/TerribleWritingAdvice'', EXPOSITION
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->''"Pinnayus and Ferb! Just look at you two! You two are my younger brothers! And of course, I am Candace, your big sister, am I not?"
-->--'''Princess Baldegunde''' pretending to be '''Candace Flynn''', ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb''
-->--'''Princess Baldegunde''' pretending to be '''Candace Flynn''', ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb''
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'''Sulley:''' (But I'll sing it anyway.)
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'''Sulley:''' (But (...but I'll sing it anyway.)
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-->-- From the song "If I didn't have you", ''WesternAnimation/MonstersInc''
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-->-- From the song "If I didn't have you", Didn't Have You", ''WesternAnimation/MonstersInc''
