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--> '''Walter "Doc" Hartford, being a GentlemanSnarker while in a Tarkon prison cell
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--> '''Walter "Doc" Hartford, being a GentlemanSnarker while in a Tarkon Tarkonian prison cell
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->'''Doc:''' ''Dear Miss Etiquette: I'm about to be executed on a distant planet and I have ''no'' idea about the ''[[TheDandy proper attire]].'' Can you advise me? Signed, Embarrassed.''
--> '''Walter "Doc" Hartford, being a GentlemanSnarker while in a Tarkon prison cell
--> '''Walter "Doc" Hartford, being a GentlemanSnarker while in a Tarkon prison cell
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->''"This is often dark '80s cartoon featured a team of cyborg space sheriffs who fought the Queen of the Crown, who sucked out the souls of her victims to feed her army of zombie slaverlords. Space cowboys versus space zombies -- how did this show not catch on? Apart from the many Western parallels (badges that triggered their cyborg powers, talking robot horses), it also featured an obvious cartoon version of Creator/ClintEastwood named Shane Gooseman, who could cybernetically shapechange to adapt to danger. You won't see that in ''GranTorino''."''
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->''"This is often dark '80s cartoon featured a team of cyborg space sheriffs who fought the Queen of the Crown, who sucked out the souls of her victims to feed her army of zombie slaverlords. Space cowboys versus space zombies -- how did this show not catch on? Apart from the many Western parallels (badges that triggered their cyborg powers, talking robot horses), it also featured an obvious cartoon version of Creator/ClintEastwood named Shane Gooseman, who could cybernetically shapechange to adapt to danger. You won't see that in ''GranTorino''.''Film/GranTorino''."''
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->''"This is often dark '80s cartoon featured a team of cyborg space sheriffs who fought the Queen of the Crown, who sucked out the souls of her victims to feed her army of zombie slaverlords. Space cowboys versus space zombies -- how did this show not catch on? Apart from the many Western parallels (badges that triggered their cyborg powers, talking robot horses), it also featured an obvious cartoon version of ClintEastwood named Shane Gooseman, who could cybernetically shapechange to adapt to danger. You won't see that in ''GranTorino''."''
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->''"This is often dark '80s cartoon featured a team of cyborg space sheriffs who fought the Queen of the Crown, who sucked out the souls of her victims to feed her army of zombie slaverlords. Space cowboys versus space zombies -- how did this show not catch on? Apart from the many Western parallels (badges that triggered their cyborg powers, talking robot horses), it also featured an obvious cartoon version of ClintEastwood Creator/ClintEastwood named Shane Gooseman, who could cybernetically shapechange to adapt to danger. You won't see that in ''GranTorino''."''
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-->'''Goose''' ("Hiding in Plain Sight")
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-->'''Goose''' ("Hiding in Plain Sight")Sight")
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->''When I was alone you could hide. Against the four of us, you don't have a chance.''
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-> "O One-Who-Asks-Many-Questions,[[YouDidntAsk you did not ask me that]]."
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-> "O One-Who-Asks-Many-Questions,[[YouDidntAsk One-Who-Asks-Many-Questions, [[YouDidntAsk you did not ask me that]]."
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-> "O One-Who-Asks-Many-Questions, you did not ask me that."
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-> "O One-Who-Asks-Many-Questions, One-Who-Asks-Many-Questions,[[YouDidntAsk you did not ask me that.that]]."
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-->-- '''Mistwalker''' (when Audra asks why she never revealed her ability to repair the machinery that tends to fail on Bisty-Fenokee), "Mistwalker"
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->"You're not in your safe little solar system anymore. Your ship is now my ship. And I'm handing you over to the Queen's Slaverlords." (beat) "How do you like outer space so far?"
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->"You're not in your safe little solar system anymore. Your ship is now my ship. And I'm handing you over to the Queen's Slaverlords." (beat) ({{beat}}) "How do you like outer space so far?"
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->''"This is often dark '80s cartoon featured a team of cyborg space sheriffs who fought the Queen of the Crown, who sucked out the souls of her victims to feed her army of zombie slaverlords. Space cowboys versus space zombies -- how did this show not catch on? Apart from the many Western parallels (badges that triggered their cyborg powers, talking robot horses), it also featured an obvious cartoon version of ClintEastwood named Shane Gooseman, who could cybernetically shapechange to adapt to danger. You won't see that in GranTorino."''
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->''"This is often dark '80s cartoon featured a team of cyborg space sheriffs who fought the Queen of the Crown, who sucked out the souls of her victims to feed her army of zombie slaverlords. Space cowboys versus space zombies -- how did this show not catch on? Apart from the many Western parallels (badges that triggered their cyborg powers, talking robot horses), it also featured an obvious cartoon version of ClintEastwood named Shane Gooseman, who could cybernetically shapechange to adapt to danger. You won't see that in GranTorino.''GranTorino''."''
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-->[[spoiler: '''Goose,''' (having accurately assessed that Zach had been raped)]], "The Lie"
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-->[[spoiler: '''Goose,''' (having accurately assessed that Zach had been raped)]], "The Lie"Lie"
->''When I was alone you could hide. Against the four of us, you don't have a chance.''
-->'''Goose''' ("Hiding in Plain Sight")
->''When I was alone you could hide. Against the four of us, you don't have a chance.''
-->'''Goose''' ("Hiding in Plain Sight")
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->'''Geezy:''' "Remember, Captain Foxx, when the Queen catches you; you have not seen me. You have never seen me, ''I do not exist!"''
-> '''Zach:''' I'll give her the message, Geezy.
--> Zach and Geezy, "Psychocrypt."
-> '''Zach:''' I'll give her the message, Geezy.
--> Zach and Geezy, "Psychocrypt."
