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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Alex is a HeroWithBadPublicity who lives in a LadyLand {{Dystopia}} where men are expected to be {{Sex Slave}}s of the female tyranny.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Alex This is a {{Yaoi}} work feature [[IncompatibleOrientation Alex]], a HeroWithBadPublicity who lives in a LadyLand {{Dystopia}} where men are expected to be {{Sex Slave}}s of the female tyranny.
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** Betty rapes Alex and it's portrayed as a serious crime, but Alex is [[BlamingTheVictim heinously shamed by the society for letting himself being raped]].
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** While men who were raped by women aren't taken that seriously, women who were raped by men still receive UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming reactions normally.
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** While men who were raped by women aren't taken that seriously, women who were raped by men still receive UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming reactions normally.normally despite receive justices.
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** Betty rapes Alex and gets away with it, not because she is a woman, but because she is [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney rich]] and [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections powerful]] enough to manage herself get away from any crimes, just like her relatives of both genders.
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** Then Danielle, who is much poorer than Betty, rapes Alex and also gets away with it.
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** Betty tries to rape Alex and its PlayedForLaughs, but [[PervertRevengeMode this does not end well for her.]]
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** Betty tries to rape Alex and its it's PlayedForLaughs, but [[PervertRevengeMode this does not end well for her.]]
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** Alex starts forming a MadonnaWhoreComplex, start seeking TheIngenue at best, or the SourPrude at worst, and uses [[FreudianExcuse his past experience with Betty]] to [[MyGirlIsNotASlut discredit other]] [[NotLikeOtherGirls lusty women]] in general.
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** Alex starts forming a MadonnaWhoreComplex, start seeking TheIngenue at best, or the SourPrude at worst, and uses [[FreudianExcuse his past experience with Betty]] to [[MyGirlIsNotASlut discredit other]] [[NotLikeOtherGirls lusty women]] in general.
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** Betty receives short-sentence from raping Alex, who is [[BlamingTheVictim blamed for being raped]], but yet the society labels Betty as DefiledForever.
** While men who was raped by women aren't taken that seriously, women who was raped by men still receive UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming reactions normally.
** While men who was raped by women aren't taken that seriously, women who was raped by men still receive UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming reactions normally.
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** Betty receives short-sentence from raping Alex, who is [[BlamingTheVictim blamed for letting himself being raped]], but yet the society still labels Betty as DefiledForever.
** While men whowas were raped by women aren't taken that seriously, women who was were raped by men still receive UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming reactions normally.
** While men who
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** Betty tries to rape Alex. [[PervertRevengeMode This does not end well for her.]]
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** Betty tries to rape Alex. Alex and its PlayedForLaughs, but [[PervertRevengeMode This this does not end well for her.]]
** Betty receives short-sentence from raping Alex, who is [[BlamingTheVictim blamed for being raped]], but yet the society labels Betty as DefiledForever.
** While men who was raped by women aren't taken that seriously, women who was raped by men still receive UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming reactions normally.
** While men who was raped by women aren't taken that seriously, women who was raped by men still receive UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming reactions normally.
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** Alex starts forming a MadonnaWhoreComplex, develops his feeling with TheIngenue at best, or the SourPrude at worst, and uses [[FreudianExcuse his past experience with Betty]] to [[MyGirlIsNotASlut discredit other]] [[NotLikeOtherGirls lusty women]] in general.
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** Alex starts forming a MadonnaWhoreComplex, develops his feeling with start seeking TheIngenue at best, or the SourPrude at worst, and uses [[FreudianExcuse his past experience with Betty]] to [[MyGirlIsNotASlut discredit other]] [[NotLikeOtherGirls lusty women]] in general.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Alex is a HeroWithBadPublicity who lives in a LadyLand {{Dystopia}} where men are expected to be SexSlave of the female tyranny.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Alex is a HeroWithBadPublicity who lives in a LadyLand {{Dystopia}} where men are expected to be SexSlave {{Sex Slave}}s of the female tyranny.
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** Betty ends up being reported for her murder of Carlos and gets arrested for ''that'' crime instead. She may be able to get away with rape, but [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome murder is a different story.]]
** In her obsession with raping the men who refuse her, the LaserGuidedKarma causes Betty to be pregnant without knowing the child's father and/or [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome becomes HIV positive from it]]. But getting rid of the child either through abortion or adoption will get her noticed one way or another, so what can she do now? And what will happen to a child born under such circumstances?
** In her obsession with raping the men who refuse her, the LaserGuidedKarma causes Betty to be pregnant without knowing the child's father and/or [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome becomes HIV positive from it]]. But getting rid of the child either through abortion or adoption will get her noticed one way or another, so what can she do now? And what will happen to a child born under such circumstances?
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** Betty ends up being reported for her murder of Carlos and gets arrested for ''that'' crime instead. She may be able to get away with rape, but [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome murder is a different story.]]
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** In her obsession with raping the men who refuse her, the LaserGuidedKarma causes Betty to be pregnant without knowing the child's father and/or[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome becomes HIV positive from it]].it. But getting rid of the child either through abortion or adoption will get her noticed one way or another, so what can she do now? And what will happen to a child born under such circumstances?
** In her obsession with raping the men who refuse her, the LaserGuidedKarma causes Betty to be pregnant without knowing the child's father and/or
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** Well, [[AllWomenAreLustful she is a woman,]] [[ImAManICantHelpIt she can't help it!]]
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** Well, "Well, [[AllWomenAreLustful she is a woman,]] [[ImAManICantHelpIt she can't help it!]]it!]]"
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** Betty ends up being reported for her murder of Carlos and gets arrested for ''that'' crime instead. She may be able to get away with rape, but murder is a different story.
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** Betty ends up being reported for her murder of Carlos and gets arrested for ''that'' crime instead. She may be able to get away with rape, but [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome murder is a different story.]]
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** ...Because the actual victim is Carlos, and nobody care about this incident.
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** ...Because but the actual victim is Carlos, and nobody care about this incident.incident furthermore.
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** Betty rapes Alex and it's portrayed as a bad thing, but because she is a PredatoryProstitute AbhorrentAdmirer, and she is received slightly lighter punishments than average male rapists, however, when [[ProperLady polite and ladylike]] BitchInSheepsClothing rapes Alex, it still gets PlayedForLaughs and/or {{Fanservice}}.
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** Betty rapes Alex and it's portrayed as a bad thing, but because she is a {{Gonk}}-y PredatoryProstitute AbhorrentAdmirer, and she is received slightly lighter punishments than average male rapists, however, when [[ProperLady polite and ladylike]] the MsFanservice BitchInSheepsClothing Danielle rapes Alex, it still gets PlayedForLaughs and/or {{Fanservice}}.
** Alex reports he is raped by Betty, and he is arrested, because [[FalseRapeAccusation Betty doesn't actually rape him]].
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** Alex may have gotten away with his {{revenge}} but [[WhatTheHellHero this is portrayed as a bad thing]] by the narrative via a RevengeIsNotJustice {{a|n aesop}}esop [[DoubleStandard while ignoring the fact that Betty also committed]] [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil the heinous act of rape]].
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** Alex may have gotten away with his {{revenge}} but [[WhatTheHellHero this is portrayed as a bad thing]] by the narrative via a RevengeIsNotJustice {{a|n aesop}}esop [[BrokenAesop aesop]] [[DoubleStandard while ignoring the fact that Betty also committed]] [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil the heinous act of rape]].rape]].
** ...Because the actual victim is Carlos, and nobody care about this incident.
** ...Because the actual victim is Carlos, and nobody care about this incident.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Alex is a HeroWithBadPublicity who lives in a LadyLand {{Dystopia}} where men are expected to be SexSlave of the female tyranny.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Alex is a HeroWithBadPublicity who lives in a LadyLand {{Dystopia}} where men are expected to be SexSlave of the female tyranny.
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** Betty's rape of Alex is treated as intense and disturbing, yet the [[MaleGaze camera ogles her the whole time]].
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** It's no way that Alex wants to have sex with Betty because [[IncompatibleOrientation he is actually gay or asexual]], so Betty [[CureYourGays tries to "fix" him]] and {{Heteronormative|Crusader}} society thinks he deserves it.
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** It's There's no way that Alex wants to have sex with Betty because [[IncompatibleOrientation he is actually gay gay, asexual]], or [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs homoromantic asexual]], so Betty [[CureYourGays tries to "fix" him]] and {{Heteronormative|Crusader}} society thinks he deserves it.
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** Alex rapes Betty and gets away with it, and is ignored, or not taken seriously. Meanwhile, if Betty rapes Alex, it's portrayed as a bad thing due to [[MyGirlIsNotASlut women shouldn't actively]] [[MadonnaWhoreComplex interested in sex.]]
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** Alex rapes Betty and gets away with it, and is ignored, or not taken seriously. Meanwhile, if Betty rapes Alex, it's portrayed as a bad thing due to the belief that [[MyGirlIsNotASlut women shouldn't actively]] [[MadonnaWhoreComplex be interested in sex.]]
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** [[GenreSavvy Carlos recognizes that]] [[BreakTheCutie Alex has been raped]], instead of reporting Betty to the cops, he gives her a [[BrutalHonesty long brutal]] [[BreakThemByTalking ego-breaking]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech speech about she is a horrible person]] [[KarmaHoudiniWarranty and that she doesn't deserve the crime she's gotten away with.]] Betty being the [[LackOfEmpathy shameless bitch she is]], [[OminousAdversarialAmusement laughs in Carlos' face]] and [[ShutUpKirk casually kills him]], but not before [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids verbally demonstrating to him just how delusional moralists like him are]] [[ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption in the face of violence]], [[SocialDarwinist which is why]] [[DoomedMoralVictor they always lose]].
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** [[GenreSavvy Carlos recognizes that]] [[BreakTheCutie Alex has been raped]], instead of reporting Betty to the cops, he gives her a [[BrutalHonesty long brutal]] [[BreakThemByTalking ego-breaking]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech speech about how she is a horrible person]] [[KarmaHoudiniWarranty and that she doesn't deserve the crime she's gotten away with.]] Betty being the [[LackOfEmpathy shameless bitch she is]], [[OminousAdversarialAmusement laughs in Carlos' face]] and [[ShutUpKirk casually kills him]], but not before [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids verbally demonstrating to him just how delusional moralists like him are]] [[ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption in the face of violence]], [[SocialDarwinist which is why]] [[DoomedMoralVictor they always lose]].
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** Alex's wife Camille catches Betty raping him and assumes [[MistakenForCheating he's cheating on her.]] No matter how many people tell Camille it was against Alex's will, she doesn't believe them. Alex eventually goes insane over being raped and losing his wife over something that wasn't his fault.