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* OnceMoreWithClarity: The first shot we see of the sneakers falling on Stanley's head merely shows them seemingly appearing out of the sky as if by magic, and aside from bridge pylons in the background, it's never obvious where exactly they came from. It's only after Zero explains to Stanley what happened that it becomes clear he was walking under an overpass at the time they were thrown.
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* {{Bookends}}: While not explicitly at the end of the film, the Yelnants family curse arc is wrapped up by reversing the shot of the stolen pair of shoes that were seen falling on Stanley at the beginning, indicating that his bad fortune has finally left him.
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* JuvenileHell: Camp Greenlake, in in the middle of an inhospitable desert with poisonous snakes and lizards, run by abusive management who use the inmates as free labor to look for buried treasure, and the facilities have suffered from years of rage from the young inmates and neglect to fix any of it.
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* JuvenileHell: Camp Greenlake, in in the middle of an inhospitable desert with poisonous snakes and lizards, run by abusive management who use the inmates as free labor to look for buried treasure, and the facilities have suffered from years of rage from the young inmates and neglect to fix any of it.
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[[indent:20:As we learn is in Elya's section of the story, this is totally true.]]
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* WakingNonSequitur: In the film, after Zero knocks Pendanski out with a shovel, Pendanski eventually comes to and says "I'll have the chicken tenders, Warden."
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* WakingNonSequitur: In the film, after Zero knocks Pendanski out with a shovel, Pendanski eventually comes to his senses and says "I'll have the chicken tenders, Warden."
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* BigBad: The Warden.
** Her grandfather Trout Walker might be considered the GreaterScopeVillain, since although he's long-since died, it's his actions many years ago that both created the situation and plot of the story ''and'' made the Warden who she is (she is, after all, essentially driven to fulfill the goal he started).
** Her grandfather Trout Walker might be considered the GreaterScopeVillain, since although he's long-since died, it's his actions many years ago that both created the situation and plot of the story ''and'' made the Warden who she is (she is, after all, essentially driven to fulfill the goal he started).
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** Her grandfather Trout Walker might be considered the GreaterScopeVillain, since although he's long-since died, it's his actions many years ago that both created the situation and plot of the story ''and'' made the Warden who she is (she is, after all, essentially driven to fulfill the goal he started).
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* GreaterScopeVillain: Trout Walker, the Warden's grandfather. Although he's long-since died, it's his actions many years ago that both created the situation and plot of the story ''and'' made the Warden who she is (she is, after all, essentially driven to fulfill the goal he started).
