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Someone becomes mentally unstable throughout the story.
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Someone becomes mentally unstable increasingly insane throughout the story.
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I tried improving the wording a bit, including attempting to make it more concise (though I'm not always good at that myself). I also replaced a term that's apparently considered ableist
and I tried giving it a better alternative. Granted, for a while, I didn't know that several thingsnote could be viewed as ableist.
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A character slowly grows insane throughout the story.
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A character slowly grows insane becomes mentally unstable throughout the story.
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A character(s) slowly grows insane throughout the story.
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A character(s) character slowly grows insane throughout the story.
