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You thought the villain was dying/dead. Not so.
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You thought the villain was dying/dead.dying and the hero has won. Not so.
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You thought they were dying/dead. Not so.
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You thought they were the villain was dying/dead. Not so.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[NotQuiteDead HERE]].-]
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that may be funny, but I think the new name would make it a sinkhole.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[NotQuiteDead HERE]]. [[IGotBetter It got better.]]-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[NotQuiteDead HERE]]. [[IGotBetter It got better.]]-]-]
