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A devastating lapse in judgement by an otherwise sensible character. Whoops.
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A devastating lapse in judgement by an otherwise sensible character. Whoops.\n
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[MomentOfWeakness HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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A character's devastating slip in judgment.
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A character's devastating slip lapse in judgment.
judgement by an otherwise sensible character. Whoops.
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Distilling it again. Didn\'t like how I phrased it.
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The protagonist acts against their better nature, resulting in devastating consequences.
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