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chained sinkholes are bad
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* Zed abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss his strength]], thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.
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* Zed abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss of his strength]], thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.
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'''Jane:''' No. Like my mother. Thank you for everything, Magdalen. I'll see you soon.
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'''Jane:''' No. Like my mother. Thank you for everything, Magdalen. I'll see you soon.soon.
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* Rudy's [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]] in ''Alter Code'' and Jack's reaction.
-->'''Cecilia:''' Rudy...[[spoiler: has a demon's body!]]
-->'''Cecilia:''' Rudy...[[spoiler: has a demon's body!]]
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* Rudy's [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]] RoboticReveal in ''Alter Code'' and Jack's reaction.
-->'''Cecilia:''' Rudy...[[spoiler: has a demon's body!]] body!
-->'''Cecilia:''' Rudy...
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* Zed[[spoiler: abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss his strength]], thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.]]
* In ''Alter Code F'', [[spoiler:Rudy is actually able to make peace with Serf Village, working together with them to destroy the Rotting Beast once and for all]].
** Similarly, while Serf Village's mayor immediately TookALevelInJerkass after Rudy's prologue in the original, here he is actually ''very'' reluctant to banish Rudy, only doing so when the villagers force the issue. He even gives Rudy advice on where he should go next.
* In ''Alter Code F'', [[spoiler:Rudy is actually able to make peace with Serf Village, working together with them to destroy the Rotting Beast once and for all]].
** Similarly, while Serf Village's mayor immediately TookALevelInJerkass after Rudy's prologue in the original, here he is actually ''very'' reluctant to banish Rudy, only doing so when the villagers force the issue. He even gives Rudy advice on where he should go next.
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* Zed[[spoiler: Zed abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss his strength]], thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.]]
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* In ''Alter Code F'',[[spoiler:Rudy Rudy is actually able to make peace with Serf Village, working together with them to destroy the Rotting Beast once and for all]].
all. This is also what allows Rudy to awaken Zephyr, the Guardian of Hope.
** Similarly, while Serf Village's mayor immediately TookALevelInJerkass after Rudy's prologue in the original, here he is actually ''very'' reluctant to banish Rudy, only doing so when the villagers force the issue. He even gives Rudy advice on where he should gonext.next.
* Jane's farewell to Magdalen after his GameBreakingInjury prevents him from permanently joining the party with her in ''Alter Code F'' after overhearing his backstory.
-->'''Jane:''' ''[hugging Magdalen]'' Hopefully, by the time I'm back, I'll be a little more grown up. And a better person.\\
'''Magdalen:''' Like your sister Jessica? I will look forward to it.\\
'''Jane:''' No. Like my mother. Thank you for everything, Magdalen. I'll see you soon.
* In ''Alter Code F'',
** Similarly, while Serf Village's mayor immediately TookALevelInJerkass after Rudy's prologue in the original, here he is actually ''very'' reluctant to banish Rudy, only doing so when the villagers force the issue. He even gives Rudy advice on where he should go
* Jane's farewell to Magdalen after his GameBreakingInjury prevents him from permanently joining the party with her in ''Alter Code F'' after overhearing his backstory.
-->'''Jane:''' ''[hugging Magdalen]'' Hopefully, by the time I'm back, I'll be a little more grown up. And a better person.\\
'''Magdalen:''' Like your sister Jessica? I will look forward to it.\\
'''Jane:''' No. Like my mother. Thank you for everything, Magdalen. I'll see you soon.
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** Similarly, while Serf Village's mayor immediately TookALevelInJerkass after Rudy's prologue in the original, here he is actually ''very'' reluctant to banish Rudy, only doing so when the villagers force the issue. He even gives Rudy advice on where he should go next.
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** Similarly, while Serf Village's mayor immediately TookALevelInJerkass after Rudy's prologue in the original, here he is actually ''very'' reluctant to banish Rudy, only doing so when the villagers force the issue. He even gives Rudy advice on where he should go next.
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* Rudy's [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]] ''Alter Code'' and Jack's reaction. Cecilia: Rudy...[[spoiler: has a demon's body!]] Jack: Princess! He is my friend.
* Zed[[spoiler: abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first to ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss his strength]] thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.]]
* Zed[[spoiler: abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first to ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss his strength]] thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.]]
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* Rudy's [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]] in ''Alter Code'' and Jack's reaction. Cecilia: reaction.
-->Cecilia: Rudy...[[spoiler: has a demon'sbody!]] Jack: body!]]
-->Jack: Princess! He is my friend.
* Zed[[spoiler: abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the firstto ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss his strength]] strength]], thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.]]
-->Cecilia: Rudy...[[spoiler: has a demon's
-->Jack: Princess! He is my friend.
* Zed[[spoiler: abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first
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** Similarly, while Serf Village's mayor immediately TookALevelInJerkass after Rudy's prologue, here he is actually ''very'' reluctant to banish Rudy, only doing so when the villagers force the issue. He even gives Rudy advice on where he should go next.
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** Similarly, while Serf Village's mayor immediately TookALevelInJerkass after Rudy's prologue, prologue in the original, here he is actually ''very'' reluctant to banish Rudy, only doing so when the villagers force the issue. He even gives Rudy advice on where he should go next.
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* In ''Alter Code F'', [[spoiler:Rudy is actually able to make peace with Serf Village, working together with them to destroy the Rotting Beast once and for all]].
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* Rudy's [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]] ''Alter Code'' and Jack's reaction. Cecilia: Rudy...[[spoiler: has a demon's body!]] Jack: Princess! He is my friend.friend.
* Zed[[spoiler: abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first to ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss his strength]] thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.]]
* Zed[[spoiler: abandons the Metal Demons all to help a blind girl named Aura because she's the first to ever to treat him normally. He will attack the party with [[ThatOneBoss all of]] [[BonusBoss his strength]] thinking they're going to take away his newfound happiness by telling her who he was. Since she can tell the nature of a person from the sound of their voice, him being "weird, but kind", he didn't have anything to be worried about.]]
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* Rudy's [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]] ''Alter Code'' and Jack's reaction. Cecilia: ...his arm, he's a.... Jack: IT DOESN'T MATTER! He's Rudy! He's our friend and he's in pain!
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* Rudy's [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]] ''Alter Code'' and Jack's reaction. Cecilia: ...his arm, he's a.... Cecilia: Rudy...[[spoiler: has a demon's body!]] Jack: IT DOESN'T MATTER! He's Rudy! He's our friend and he's in pain!Princess! He is my friend.
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* Rudy's [[spoiler:RobotReveal]] [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]] ''Alter Code'' and Jack's reaction. Cecilia: ...his arm, he's a.... Jack: IT DOESN'T MATTER! He's Rudy! He's our friend and he's in pain!
