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* The exchange between Leoric and Feryl at the end of "Feryl Steps Out". Despite having single-handled rescued Leoric and thwarted Darkstorm's plan to conquer New Valarak, Feryl still feels he will never be as good as the other Spectral Knights. In response, Leoric points out that Feryl can do something they (with the exception of Ectar, though this is not mentioned) can't, namely activate vehicles, and that this was what enabled Feryl to save him. It's really moving to see Feryl, who has been visibly dejected for a large portion of the episode, smiling as he and Leoric clasp arms before heading back to New Valarak.
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* The exchange between Leoric and Feryl at the end of "Feryl Steps Out". Despite having single-handled single-handedly rescued Leoric and thwarted Darkstorm's plan to conquer New Valarak, Feryl still feels believes he will never be as good as the other Spectral Knights. In response, Leoric points out replies that Feryl can do something they (with the exception of other Knights cannot in being able to activate vehicles (along with Ectar, though this is not mentioned) can't, namely activate vehicles, mentioned), and that this was what enabled Feryl to save him. It's really moving to see Feryl, who has been was visibly dejected for a large portion of the episode, smiling as he and Leoric clasp arms shake hands before heading back returning to New Valarak.
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* The exchange between Leoric and Feryl at the end of "Feryl Steps Out". Despite having single-handled rescued Leoric and thwarted Darkstorm's plan to conquer New Valarak, Feryl still feels he will never be as good as the other Spectral Knights. In response, Leoric points out that Feryl can do something they (with the exception of Ectar, though this is not mentioned) can't, namely activate vehicles, and that this was what enabled Feryl to save him. It's really moving to see Feryl, who has been visibly dejected for a large portion of the episode, smiling as he and Leoric shake hands before heading back to New Valarak.
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* The exchange between Leoric and Feryl at the end of "Feryl Steps Out". Despite having single-handled rescued Leoric and thwarted Darkstorm's plan to conquer New Valarak, Feryl still feels he will never be as good as the other Spectral Knights. In response, Leoric points out that Feryl can do something they (with the exception of Ectar, though this is not mentioned) can't, namely activate vehicles, and that this was what enabled Feryl to save him. It's really moving to see Feryl, who has been visibly dejected for a large portion of the episode, smiling as he and Leoric shake hands clasp arms before heading back to New Valarak.
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* The exchange between Leoric and Feryl at the end of "Feryl Steps Out". Despite having single-handled rescued Leoric and thwarted Darkstorm's plan to conquer New Valarak, Feryl still feels he will never be as good as the other Spectral Knights. In response, Leoric points out that Feryl can do something they (with the exception of Ectar, though this is not mentioned) can't, namely activate vehicles, and that this was what enabled Feryl to save him. It's really moving to see how Feryl, who has been visibly dejected for a large portion of the episode, smiling as he and Leoric shake hands before heading back to New Valarak.
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* The exchange between Leoric and Feryl at the end of "Feryl Steps Out". Despite having single-handled rescued Leoric and thwarted Darkstorm's plan to conquer New Valarak, Feryl still feels he will never be as good as the other Spectral Knights. In response, Leoric points out that Feryl can do something they (with the exception of Ectar, though this is not mentioned) can't, namely activate vehicles, and that this was what enabled Feryl to save him. It's really moving to see how Feryl, who has been visibly dejected for a large portion of the episode, smiling as he and Leoric shake hands before heading back to New Valarak.
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* The exchange between Leoric and Feryl at the end of "Feryl Steps Out". Despite having single-handled rescued Leoric and thwarted Darkstorm's plan to conquer New Valarak, Feryl still feels he will never be as good as the other Spectral Knights. In response, Leoric points out that Feryl can do something they (with the exception of Ectar, though this is not mentioned) can't, namely activate vehicles, and that this was what enabled Feryl to save him. It's really moving to see how Feryl, who has been visibly dejected for a large portion of the episode, smiling as he and Leoric shake hands before heading back to New Valarak.
