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* Harry decides to get Hermione a present. He visits a certain pet shop and picks out a familiar-looking kitten - Crookshanks, several years before Hermione would have originally gotten him.
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* Harry decides to get Hermione a present. He visits a certain pet shop and picks out a familiar-looking kitten - -- Crookshanks, several years before Hermione would have originally gotten him.him.
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* One of the few times the author’s intent actually comes through: Sirius, being taken from Azkaban to what he assumes is his execution, breaks down crying when he sees the stars for the first time in years.
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* One of the few times the author’s intent actually comes through: Sirius, being taken from Azkaban to what he assumes is his execution, breaks down crying when he sees the stars for the first time in years.years.
* Harry decides to get Hermione a present. He visits a certain pet shop and picks out a familiar-looking kitten - Crookshanks, several years before Hermione would have originally gotten him.
* Harry decides to get Hermione a present. He visits a certain pet shop and picks out a familiar-looking kitten - Crookshanks, several years before Hermione would have originally gotten him.
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* One of the few times the author's writing actually comes through: Sirius, being taken from Azkaban to what he assumes is his execution, breaks down crying when he sees the stars for the first time in years.
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* One of the few times the author's writing author’s intent actually comes through: Sirius, being taken from Azkaban to what he assumes is his execution, breaks down crying when he sees the stars for the first time in years.
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* One of the few times the author's writing actually comes through: Sirius, being taken from Azkaban to what he assumes is his execution, breaks down crying when he sees the stars for the first time in years.
