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** After all is said and done, Number 1 decides to go and actually talk to her -- because they might have a lot to say to each other.
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-->''Artemis stared deep into the heart of the glow cube. "But my father is so close, Butler. I can't give up now."''
-->''Despite herself, Holly was touched by his unwillingness to give up, against all the odds. She was certain that, for once, Artemis wasn't trying to manipulate anybody. He was simply a boy who missed his father. Maybe her defences were down, but she felt sorry for him.''
-->''Despite herself, Holly was touched by his unwillingness to give up, against all the odds. She was certain that, for once, Artemis wasn't trying to manipulate anybody. He was simply a boy who missed his father. Maybe her defences were down, but she felt sorry for him.''
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Despite herself, Holly was touched by his unwillingness to give up, against all the odds. She was certain that, for once, Artemis wasn't trying to manipulate anybody. He was simply a boy who missed his father. Maybe her defences were down, but she felt sorry for him.
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--->''Artemis stared deep into the heart of the glow cube. "But my father is so close, Butler. I can't give up now."''
--->''Despite herself, Holly was touched by his unwillingness to give up, against all the odds. She was certain that, for once, Artemis wasn't trying to manipulate anybody. He was simply a boy who missed his father. Maybe her defences were down, but she felt sorry for him.''
--->''Despite herself, Holly was touched by his unwillingness to give up, against all the odds. She was certain that, for once, Artemis wasn't trying to manipulate anybody. He was simply a boy who missed his father. Maybe her defences were down, but she felt sorry for him.''
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* In ''The Last Guardian'' Artemis and Holly attempting to out-gambit each other to stop the other [[spoiler: performing a heroic sacrifice. Artemis, of course, wins. He thanks her for fixing him when he was broken, kisses her and goes to his death to protect her and his family.]]
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* In ''The Last Guardian'' Artemis and Holly attempting to out-gambit each other to stop the other [[spoiler: performing a heroic sacrifice. Artemis, of course, wins. He thanks her for fixing him when he was broken, kisses her forehead, and goes to his death to protect her and his family.]]
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* Artemis and Holly's first ever FriendshipMoment:
--->''Artemis stared deep into the heart of the glow cube. "But my father is so close, Butler. I can't give up now."''
--->''Despite herself, Holly was touched by his unwillingness to give up, against all the odds. She was certain that, for once, Artemis wasn't trying to manipulate anybody. He was simply a boy who missed his father. Maybe her defences were down, but she felt sorry for him.''
--->''Artemis stared deep into the heart of the glow cube. "But my father is so close, Butler. I can't give up now."''
--->''Despite herself, Holly was touched by his unwillingness to give up, against all the odds. She was certain that, for once, Artemis wasn't trying to manipulate anybody. He was simply a boy who missed his father. Maybe her defences were down, but she felt sorry for him.''
!!''The Eternity Code''
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!!''The Eternity Code''
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* Root's [[spoiler: ObiWanMoment]]. He isn't angry, just smiles gently and tells Holly to be well.
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** It's made very clear that Root has a lot of respect for Holly, and was genuinely saddened by the Hamburg incident.
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* When Artemis and Holly prepare to land in the solar plane. They exchange quips in the familiar way of two people who have been through much together, then Artemis looks at Holly piloting and is filled with affection for his friend, marvelling to himself how incredible she is.
-->Artemis looked at Holly then and felt a tremendous affection for her. He wished that he could loop the past ten seconds and study it at a less stressful time so he could properly appreciate how fierce and beautiful his best friend was. Holly never seemed so vital as when she was balancing on the fine line between life and death. Her eyes shone and her wit was sharp. Whereas others would fall apart or withdraw, Holly attacked the situation with a vigor that made her glow.\\
She is truly magical, thought Artemis. [[spoiler:Perhaps her qualities are more obvious to me now that I have decided to sacrifice myself.]]
-->Artemis looked at Holly then and felt a tremendous affection for her. He wished that he could loop the past ten seconds and study it at a less stressful time so he could properly appreciate how fierce and beautiful his best friend was. Holly never seemed so vital as when she was balancing on the fine line between life and death. Her eyes shone and her wit was sharp. Whereas others would fall apart or withdraw, Holly attacked the situation with a vigor that made her glow.\\
She is truly magical, thought Artemis. [[spoiler:Perhaps her qualities are more obvious to me now that I have decided to sacrifice myself.]]
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-->Foaly was suddenly upset, and almost overwhelmed, but he coughed and swallowed it down for another time.
-->Foaly was suddenly upset, and almost overwhelmed, but he coughed and swallowed it down for another time.
