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* The story cuts away from the main character for several years (and several chapters). When the other character meets up with him again, the main character is heard but not seen during a very serious exposition sequence for several panels. Then he is finally revealed [[http://manga.animea.net/20th-century-boys-chapter-40-page-4.html in all his glory]].
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* The story cuts away from the main character for several years (and several chapters). When the other character meets up with him again, the main character is heard but not seen during a very serious exposition sequence for several panels. Then he is finally revealed [[http://manga.animea.net/20th-century-boys-chapter-40-page-4.html in all his glory]].glory.
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....and then the guy holding her panics, ''[[spoiler: [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and tosses her like a football to the next guy]]'',]] who does the same thing, [[spoiler: [[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} until they're all basically playing Hot Potato with a baby.]]]]
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....mother... and then the guy holding her panics, ''[[spoiler: [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and ''[[spoiler:and tosses her like a football to the next guy]]'',]] guy]]'', who does the same thing, [[spoiler: [[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} until they're all basically playing Hot Potato with a baby.]]]]
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* Poor Kyoko is basically a walking funny moment by virtue of having the worst possible luck a character can have without getting killed. [[http://3.p.s.mfcdn.net/store/manga/11/09-001.0/compressed/20th_Century_Boys_v09c01p018.jpg Her facial expressions don't hurt.]]
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* Poor Kyoko is basically a walking funny moment by virtue of having the worst possible luck a character can have without getting killed. [[http://3.p.s.mfcdn.net/store/manga/11/09-001.0/compressed/20th_Century_Boys_v09c01p018.jpg Her facial expressions don't hurt.]]
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [[{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]]
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk talk, he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [[{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]]
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* In the 21th Century boys' climax [[spoiler:Kenji]] is riding his bike rushing to his destination when in a very serious and important moment...then his bikes runs out of gas and he falls off, [[spoiler:Kenji]] was not happy at all.
* In the midle of very serious scene Kyoko unwillingly pushes [[spoiler: Sadakiyo's]] BerserkButton by confusing [[Manga/{{Gigantor}} Tetsujin 28]] with Franciche/{{Gundam}} and he starts ranting furiously. Made funnier if you are in HumongousMecha fandom and know that some people in it can flip off for similiarly silly reasons.
* In the midle of very serious scene Kyoko unwillingly pushes [[spoiler: Sadakiyo's]] BerserkButton by confusing [[Manga/{{Gigantor}} Tetsujin 28]] with Franciche/{{Gundam}} and he starts ranting furiously. Made funnier if you are in HumongousMecha fandom and know that some people in it can flip off for similiarly silly reasons.
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* In the 21th 21st Century boys' Boys climax [[spoiler:Kenji]] is riding his bike rushing to his destination when in a very serious and important moment...then his bikes bike runs out of gas and he falls off, [[spoiler:Kenji]] was not happy at all.
* In themidle middle of a very serious scene scene, Kyoko unwillingly pushes [[spoiler: Sadakiyo's]] BerserkButton by confusing [[Manga/{{Gigantor}} Tetsujin 28]] with Franciche/{{Gundam}} Franchise/{{Gundam}} and he starts ranting furiously. Made funnier if you are in HumongousMecha fandom and know that some people in it can flip off for similiarly similarly silly reasons.
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--->'''Kyoko:''' "Stop it! Don't look inside a girl's bag like that!"\\
'''Yoshitsune:''' "One or two condoms isn't going to shock me."
'''Yoshitsune:''' "One or two condoms isn't going to shock me."
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* In the midle of very serious scene Kyoko unwillingly pushes [[spoiler: Sadakiyo's]] BerserkButton by confusing [[Manga/{{Gigantor}} Tetsujin 28]] with Franciche/{{Gundam}} and he starts ranting furiously. Made funnier if you are in HumongousMecha fandom and know that some people in it can flip off for similiarly silly reasons.
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** When [[spoiler: Yoshitsune]] hands Kyoko an ID card, who's photo was taken when he took a picture of her in the bath.
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** When [[spoiler: Yoshitsune]] hands Kyoko an ID card, who's card. The photo used was taken when one he took a picture of her in the bath.
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* That pink rabbit suit.
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* That pink rabbit suit. The story cuts away from the main character for several years (and several chapters). When the other character meets up with him again, the main character is heard but not seen during a very serious exposition sequence for several panels. Then he is finally revealed [[http://manga.animea.net/20th-century-boys-chapter-40-page-4.html in all his glory]].
* When Yoshitsune and Yujiki are trying to find clues as to Friend's identity, they need to check a history book and Yoshitsune decides to rummage around Kyoko's bag for one:
--->'''Kyoko:''' "Stop it! Don't look inside a girl's bag like that!"\\
'''Yoshitsune:''' "One or two condoms isn't going to shock me."
* When Yoshitsune and Yujiki are trying to find clues as to Friend's identity, they need to check a history book and Yoshitsune decides to rummage around Kyoko's bag for one:
--->'''Kyoko:''' "Stop it! Don't look inside a girl's bag like that!"\\
'''Yoshitsune:''' "One or two condoms isn't going to shock me."
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** When [[spoiler: Yoshitsune]] hands Kyoko an ID card, who's photo was taken when he took a picture of her in the bath.
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* "Give me some of your pheromones!"
* That pink rabbit suit.
* The scene where the engineer tries to explain the problems with the Friends' HumongousMecha plan
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....and then the guy holding her panics, ''[[spoiler: [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and tosses her like a football to the next guy'']],]] who does the same thing, [[spoiler: [[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} until they're all basically playing Hot Potato with a baby.]]]]
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....and then the guy holding her panics, ''[[spoiler: [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and tosses her like a football to the next guy'']],]] guy]]'',]] who does the same thing, [[spoiler: [[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} until they're all basically playing Hot Potato with a baby.]]]]
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....[[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and then the guy holding her panics,]] ''[[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} and tosses her like a football to the next guy.]]''
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....and then the guy holding her panics, ''[[spoiler: [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and then the guy holding her panics,]] ''[[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} and tosses her like a football to the next guy.]]''guy'']],]] who does the same thing, [[spoiler: [[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} until they're all basically playing Hot Potato with a baby.]]]]
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....[[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and then the guy holding her panics, ''[[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} and tosses her like a football to the next guy.]]''
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....[[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and then the guy holding her panics, panics,]] ''[[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} and tosses her like a football to the next guy.]]''
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* In the 21th Century boys' climax [[spoiler:Kenji]] is riding his bike rushing to his destination when in a very serious and important moment...then his bikes runs out of gas and he falls off, [[spoiler:Kenji]] was not happy at all.
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* In the middle of a very tense and dramatic scene a bunch of Friend's followers swarm Kingmart and [[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-8/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html manage to get Kanna away from Kenji's mother]]....[[http://www.mangareader.net/111-3669-9/20th-century-boys/chapter-30.html and then the guy holding her panics, ''[[{{CrossesTheLineTwice}} and tosses her like a football to the next guy.]]''
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* In the 21th Century boys' climax [[spoiler:Kenji]] is riding his bike rushing to his destination when in a very serious and important moment...then his bikes runs out of gas and he falls off, [[spoiler:Kenji]] was not happy at all.
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [[spoiler:[[{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]]
* Poor Kyoko is basically a walking funny moment by virtue of having the worst possible luck a character can have without getting killed. Her facial expressions don't hurt.
* Poor Kyoko is basically a walking funny moment by virtue of having the worst possible luck a character can have without getting killed. Her facial expressions don't hurt.
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [[spoiler:[[{{SeizaSquirm}} [[{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]]
* Poor Kyoko is basically a walking funny moment by virtue of having the worst possible luck a character can have without getting killed. [[http://3.p.s.mfcdn.net/store/manga/11/09-001.0/compressed/20th_Century_Boys_v09c01p018.jpg Her facial expressions don't hurt.]]
* Poor Kyoko is basically a walking funny moment by virtue of having the worst possible luck a character can have without getting killed. [[http://3.p.s.mfcdn.net/store/manga/11/09-001.0/compressed/20th_Century_Boys_v09c01p018.jpg Her facial expressions don't hurt.]]
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [[{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [[{{SeizaSquirm}} [[spoiler:[[{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]]]
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [{{SeizaSquirm}} [[{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]
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* In a serious moment Chouno sits at the shrine of his dead grandfather. After a heartfelt talk he resolves to follow in his footsteps and stands up. [[spoiler: And promptly falls down. [{{SeizaSquirm}} His legs fell asleep]].]
* Poor Kyoko is basically a walking funny moment by virtue of having the worst possible luck a character can have without getting killed. Her facial expressions don't hurt.
* When Kanna and Chouno got to see Father Nitani Chouno sarcastically mentions that he isn't going to ask Kanna on a date. Kanna replies, equally sarcastic, that the line sounds like it came from a romcom. Chouno's expression is priceless.
* Poor Kyoko is basically a walking funny moment by virtue of having the worst possible luck a character can have without getting killed. Her facial expressions don't hurt.
* When Kanna and Chouno got to see Father Nitani Chouno sarcastically mentions that he isn't going to ask Kanna on a date. Kanna replies, equally sarcastic, that the line sounds like it came from a romcom. Chouno's expression is priceless.
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* The guys' horrified reactions to seeing that they included a pornographic movie poster in their time capsule.