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* The Rite of [=AshkEnte=]. When Galder Weatherwax first suggests it, instead of the "No, no, not that!" response he was expecting, the other wizards simply go, "Sure, why not?" He is somewhat put out by the lack of drama. Then when they summon Death, the reaper has a cocktail.
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* The entire digression on Herenna the Barbarian, and how this is the part where the writer starts slavering about black leather "and whips and chains and thighboots until the artist needs to have a lie down", but ''here'', she's just wearing sensible riding boots. Which ''might'' be leather, but not black.
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* The entire digression on Herenna the Barbarian, and how this is the part where the writer starts slavering gets worked up about black leather "and whips ChainmailBikini style:
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-->'''Weatherwax:''' I hope it is a good party.
-->'''Death:''' [[AC:At the moment it is. I think it might go downhill very quickly at midnight.]]
-->'''Weatherwax:''' Why?
-->'''Death:''' [[AC:That's when they think I'll be taking my mask off.]]
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-->'''Weatherwax:''' I hope it is a good party.
-->'''Death:''' [[AC:At the moment it is. I think it might go downhill very quickly at midnight.]]
-->'''Weatherwax:''' Why?
-->'''Death:''' [[AC:That's when they think I'll be taking my mask off.]]
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* Rincewind is dangling over the drop inside the Tower of Art, clutching desperately to Twoflower who lets out a rare moment of [[DeadpanSnarker Deadpan Snarker]]:
-->'''If you’re going to suggest I try dropping twenty feet down a pitch dark tower in the hope of
hitting a couple of greasy little steps which might not even still be there, you can forget it.
-->'''Twoflower''': There is an alternative, then.
-->'''Rincewind''': Out with it, man.
-->'''Twoflower''': You could drop five hundred feet down a pitch black tower and hit stones which certainly are there.
-->'''Rincewind''': ''(dead silence)'' That was sarcasm.
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* Rincewind is dangling over the drop inside the Tower of Art, clutching desperately to Twoflower who lets out a rare moment of [[DeadpanSnarker Deadpan Snarker]]:
-->'''If you’re going to suggest I try dropping twenty feet down a pitch dark tower in the hope of
hitting a couple of greasy little steps which might not even still be there, you can forget it.
-->'''Twoflower''': There is an alternative, then.
-->'''Rincewind''': Out with it, man.
-->'''Twoflower''': You could drop five hundred feet down a pitch black tower and hit stones which certainly are there.
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** Funny by itself, but funnier if you know Creator/EdgarAllanPoe and ''The Masque of the Red Death.''
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** Funny by itself, but funnier if you know Creator/EdgarAllanPoe and ''The Masque of the Red Death.''"Literature/TheMasqueOfTheRedDeath"
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* The Rite of [=AshkEnte=]. When Galder Weatherwax first suggests it, instead of the "No, no, not that!" response he was expecting, the other wizards simply go, "Sure, why not?" Then when they summon Death, the reaper has a cocktail. ([[AC: "I ([[AC:"I was at a party"]]) Finally, after some exposition (During which Death refuses to go along with Weatherwax's attempts at drama), Death is allowed to leave;
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* Rincewind and Twoflower are fleeing Death's house while the Four Horsemen are distracted by an unusual card game that Twoflower has just taught them.
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--->'''Twoflower:''' I don't know. Probably until the last [[IncrediblyLamePun trump]]...
* Rincewind and Twoflower are fleeing Death's house while the Four Horsemen are distracted by an unusual card game that Twoflower has just taught them.
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* The Rite of AshkEnte.[=AshkEnte=]. When Galder Weatherwax first suggests it, instead of the "No, no, not that!" response he was expecting, the other wizards simply go, "Sure, why not?" Then when they summon Death, the reaper has a cocktail. ([[AC: "I was at a party"]]) Finally, after some exposition (During which Death refuses to go along with Weatherwax's attempts at drama), Death is allowed to leave;
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-->'''Weatherwax:''' I hope it is a good party.
-->'''Death:''' [[AC: At the moment it is. I think it might go downhill very quickly at midnight.]]
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