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** The collective look on the vorgans' faces is a resounding:
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--> "What just happened?"
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** The collective look on the vorgans' faces is a resounding:
--> "Whatresounding: ''"What just happened?"happened?"''
--> "What
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--> '''Dev''': I don't know. I've fought against a lot of Dragar. I never fought along side one.
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--> '''Dev''': I don't know. I've fought against a lot of Dragar. I never fought along side alongside one.
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* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler: then quickly runs in the [[AttackAttackRetreatRetreat opposite]] direction]].
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* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes [[LeeroyJenkins triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler: then quickly runs in the [[AttackAttackRetreatRetreat opposite]] direction]].
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** The collective look on the vorgans' faces is a resounding "What just happened?"
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** The collective look on the vorgans' faces is a resounding resounding:
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* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler: then quickly runs in the [[AttackAttackRetreatRetreat opposite]] direction]]]].
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* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler: then quickly runs in the [[AttackAttackRetreatRetreat opposite]] direction]]]].direction]].
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* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler:[[AttackAttackRetreatRetreat then quickly runs in the opposite direction]]]].
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* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler:[[AttackAttackRetreatRetreat [[spoiler: then quickly runs in the opposite [[AttackAttackRetreatRetreat opposite]] direction]]]].
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* Kyra's reaction to discovering Dev's original plan to capture her to end the war. [[spoiler: [[ImplausibleDeniability The guilty expression on his face really sells it]].]]
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* Kyra's reaction to discovering Dev's original plan to capture her to end the war. [[spoiler: [[ImplausibleDeniability The guilty expression on his face really sells it]].]]
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--> '''Xenos''': Save it for the dragon please.
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--> '''Xenos''': ''[[[FacePalm facepalming]]]'' Save it for the dragon please.
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* A bit odd, but if you'll notice, Dev gets knocked on his ass... a lot.
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* The CreditsGag.
--> [[NoAnimalsWereHarmed "No Vorgans were harmed in the making of this motion picture."]]
--> [[NoAnimalsWereHarmed "No Vorgans were harmed in the making of this motion picture."]]
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* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler:then quickly runs in the opposite direction]].
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* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler:then [[spoiler:[[AttackAttackRetreatRetreat then quickly runs in the opposite direction]].direction]]]].
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always hate when that happens
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Tweak, and since I/me/This Troper isn\'t allowed....
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Tweak, and
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* Has anybody other than me noticed that Dev gets knocked on his ass... a lot? I'm kinda surprised nobody lampshaded it.
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* Has anybody other than me noticed that A bit odd, but if you'll notice, Dev gets knocked on his ass... a lot? I'm kinda surprised nobody lampshaded it.
lot.
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* Kyra's reaction to discovering Dev's original plan to capture her to end the war. [[spoiler: [[ImplausibleDeniability The guilty expression on his face realy sells it]].]]
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* Kyra's reaction to discovering Dev's original plan to capture her to end the war. [[spoiler: [[ImplausibleDeniability The guilty expression on his face realy really sells it]].]]
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** The collective look on the vorgans' faces is a resounding "What just happened?"
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* Kyra's reaction to discovering Dev's original plan to capture her to end the war. [[spoiler: ImplausibleDeniability The guilty expression on his face realy sells it.]]
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* Kyra's reaction to discovering Dev's original plan to capture her to end the war. [[spoiler: ImplausibleDeniability [[ImplausibleDeniability The guilty expression on his face realy sells it.it]].]]
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* Kyra's reaction to discovering Dev's original plan to capture her to end the war. [[spoiler: ImplausibleDeniability The guilty expression on his face realy sells it.]]
* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler:then quickly runs in the opposite direction]].
* Prince Dev charges at the enemy [[BigDamnHeroes triumphantly and without fear!]] ...[[spoiler:then quickly runs in the opposite direction]].
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* Has anybody other than me noticed that Dev gets knocked on his ass... a lot? I'm kinda surprised nobody lampshaded it.
