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[[https://web.archive.org/web/20120430174031/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6138056/1/The_Gloves_Are_Off The Gloves Are Off]] is a rather [[NotSafeForWork colorful]] ''Franchise/SonictheHedgehog'' fic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/913613/This_Name_Is_Thirty_Characters This Name is Thirty Characters]]. With its [[AffectionateParody creative parodying]] of the [[FanficTropes various tropes generally found in fanfic]] (especially Sonic fanfic), it's fun for the [[BlatantLies whole family!]]
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[[https://web.archive.org/web/20120430174031/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6138056/1/The_Gloves_Are_Off The Gloves Are Off]] is a rather [[NotSafeForWork colorful]] ''Franchise/SonictheHedgehog'' ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' fic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/913613/This_Name_Is_Thirty_Characters This Name is Thirty Characters]]. With its [[AffectionateParody creative parodying]] of the [[FanficTropes various tropes generally found in fanfic]] (especially Sonic fanfic), it's fun for the [[BlatantLies whole family!]]
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* CatSmile: Amy grins "like the number three" in Chapter Four.
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* PlayfulCatSmile: Amy grins "like the number three" in Chapter Four.
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** The narration loves these, referencing just about everything from Series/LegendsOfTheHiddenTemple to Franchise/MetalGear.
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** The narration loves these, referencing just about everything from Series/LegendsOfTheHiddenTemple to Franchise/MetalGear.''VideoGame/MetalGear''.
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[[https://web.archive.org/web/20120430174031/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6138056/1/The_Gloves_Are_Off The Gloves Are Off]] is a rather [[NotSafeForWork colorful]] [[VideoGame/SonictheHedgehog Sonic the Hedgehog]] fic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/913613/This_Name_Is_Thirty_Characters This Name is Thirty Characters]]. With its [[AffectionateParody creative parodying]] of the [[FanficTropes various tropes generally found in fanfic]] (especially Sonic fanfic), it's fun for the [[BlatantLies whole family!]]
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[[https://web.archive.org/web/20120430174031/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6138056/1/The_Gloves_Are_Off The Gloves Are Off]] is a rather [[NotSafeForWork colorful]] [[VideoGame/SonictheHedgehog Sonic the Hedgehog]] ''Franchise/SonictheHedgehog'' fic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/913613/This_Name_Is_Thirty_Characters This Name is Thirty Characters]]. With its [[AffectionateParody creative parodying]] of the [[FanficTropes various tropes generally found in fanfic]] (especially Sonic fanfic), it's fun for the [[BlatantLies whole family!]]
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Used at several points in the story.
* AffectionateParody: The point of the story.
* [[spoiler:AllJustADream]]:Revealed at the end of Chapter Four.
* AffectionateParody: The point of the story.
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* BigNo: [[spoiler:Robo-Sonic]] when he learns about Amy's secret technique.
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* HighSchoolAU: Implied to be in future chapters.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:Knuckles]]'s reaction to everyone else in Chapter 3.
* ShoutOut: There's lots of these, but to name a few:
* ShoutOut: There's lots of these, but to name a few:
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* WhiteGloves: The character's gloves are treated as clothing would normally be treated, and a gloveless character is treated as though they were naked.
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* WhiteGloves: The character's gloves are treated as clothing would normally be treated, and a gloveless character is treated as though they were naked.naked.
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* PantyShot: Comes up a few times with Amy.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6138056/1/The_Gloves_Are_Off The Gloves Are Off]] is a rather [[NotSafeForWork colorful]] [[VideoGame/SonictheHedgehog Sonic the Hedgehog]] fic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/913613/This_Name_Is_Thirty_Characters This Name is Thirty Characters]]. With its [[AffectionateParody creative parodying]] of the [[FanficTropes various tropes generally found in fanfic]] (especially Sonic fanfic), it's fun for the [[BlatantLies whole family!]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6138056/1/The_Gloves_Are_Off The Gloves Are Off]] is a rather [[NotSafeForWork colorful]] [[SonictheHedgehog Sonic the Hedgehog]] fic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/913613/This_Name_Is_Thirty_Characters This Name is Thirty Characters]]. With its [[AffectionateParody creative parodying]] of the [[FanficTropes various tropes generally found in fanfic]] (especially Sonic fanfic), it's fun for the [[BlatantLies whole family!]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6138056/1/The_Gloves_Are_Off The Gloves Are Off]] is a rather [[NotSafeForWork colorful]] [[SonictheHedgehog [[VideoGame/SonictheHedgehog Sonic the Hedgehog]] fic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/913613/This_Name_Is_Thirty_Characters This Name is Thirty Characters]]. With its [[AffectionateParody creative parodying]] of the [[FanficTropes various tropes generally found in fanfic]] (especially Sonic fanfic), it's fun for the [[BlatantLies whole family!]]
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* WeatherReportNarration: "It was a dark and stormy night, except for the fact that it was early afternoon and there was only a slight overcast."
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* WeatherReportNarration: WeatherReportOpening: "It was a dark and stormy night, except for the fact that it was early afternoon and there was only a slight overcast."
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** The narration loves these, referencing just about everything from LegendsOfTheHiddenTemple to Franchise/MetalGear.
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** The narration loves these, referencing just about everything from LegendsOfTheHiddenTemple Series/LegendsOfTheHiddenTemple to Franchise/MetalGear.
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** Oliver the Moto Bug is a reference to [[WebOriginal/LadyLumpsVSBoyBumps Oliver the Mountain Goat, of "Mountain Goat to the Cooch" fame.]]
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** Oliver the Moto Bug is a reference to [[WebOriginal/LadyLumpsVSBoyBumps [[WebAnimation/LadyLumpsVSBoyBumps Oliver the Mountain Goat, of "Mountain Goat to the Cooch" fame.]]
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** Oliver the Moto Bug is a reference to [[LadyLumpsVSBoyBumps Oliver the Mountain Goat, of "Mountain Goat to the Cooch" fame.]]
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** Oliver the Moto Bug is a reference to [[LadyLumpsVSBoyBumps [[WebOriginal/LadyLumpsVSBoyBumps Oliver the Mountain Goat, of "Mountain Goat to the Cooch" fame.]]
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* GratuitousFrench: From chapter 2:
-->''"But of course, mademoiselle!" Sonic dit. '''AN: "Dit" is French for "said"./AN'''''
-->''"But of course, mademoiselle!" Sonic dit. '''AN: "Dit" is French for "said"./AN'''''
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And remember, it always get worse.
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And remember, it always get gets worse.
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The plot starts out simply enough with everyone's favorite two-tailed fox, Miles "Tails" Prower, going to Sonic's house for [[BeachEpisode beachtime merriment.]] Tails arrives a bit early and accidentally [[AccidentalPervert walks in on Sonic getting dressed]], and [[ItGotWorse things go downhill from there.]] For the reader, that is - [[GRatedSex not for Tails.]] In later chapters, [[AThreesomeIsHot Amy and Knuckles join in the fun, too!]]
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The plot starts out simply enough with everyone's favorite two-tailed fox, Miles "Tails" Prower, going to Sonic's house for [[BeachEpisode beachtime merriment.]] Tails arrives a bit early and accidentally [[AccidentalPervert walks in on Sonic getting dressed]], and [[ItGotWorse things go downhill from there.]] there. For the reader, that is - [[GRatedSex not for Tails.]] In later chapters, [[AThreesomeIsHot Amy and Knuckles join in the fun, too!]]
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Used at several points in the story.
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** The narration loves these, referencing just about everything from LegendsOfTheHiddenTemple to MetalGear.
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** The narration loves these, referencing just about everything from LegendsOfTheHiddenTemple to MetalGear.Franchise/MetalGear.