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->''"Benvolio: This is not just a girl you love! 'Tis a Capulet girl! The younger sister of Theobald and Ricardo, who hate you enough as it is! If they realize you have been teasing their innocent younger sister, they will break you in half!
-> Mercutio: Tease? Really, Benvolio, have I ever teased about love?
-> Benvolio: ([[BluntYes stares]])
-> Mercutio: (clears his throat) Ay. Well, I do not tease now! What, you do not believe me?"
-->- From Chapter Six, "Bruna and Valentine"
-> Mercutio: Tease? Really, Benvolio, have I ever teased about love?
-> Benvolio: ([[BluntYes stares]])
-> Mercutio: (clears his throat) Ay. Well, I do not tease now! What, you do not believe me?"
-->- From Chapter Six, "Bruna and Valentine"
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-->-- From Chapter Six, "Bruna and Valentine"
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--> Allegra: Ay me! I am no fairy. It begins with an 'a'.
--> Mercutio: I did not think 'twas. You look to me like a [[Theatre/AMidsummerNightsDream Titania]]..
--> Allegra: Ay me! I am no fairy. It begins with an 'a'.
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'''Allegra:''' Ay me! I am no fairy. It begins with an 'a'.
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A FanFic and midquel to ''RomeoAndJuliet'' written by Fanfiction.net member Cornadopia, ''Mercutio and Allegra'' was first published in March 2009 and currently has 106 reviews. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4908579/1/Mercutio-and-Allegra here.]]
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A FanFic and midquel to ''RomeoAndJuliet'' ''Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet'' written by Fanfiction.net member Cornadopia, ''Mercutio and Allegra'' was first published in March 2009 and currently has 106 reviews. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4908579/1/Mercutio-and-Allegra here.]]
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* BetaCouple: Romeo and Juliet. [[HeyItsThatGuy Hey, it's that relationship!]]
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* BetaCouple: Romeo and Juliet. [[HeyItsThatGuy Hey, it's that relationship!]]
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A FanFic and midquel to ''RomeoAndJuliet'' written by Fanfiction.net member Cornadopia, ''Mercutio and Allegra'' was first published in March 2009 and currently has 105 reviews. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4908579/1/Mercutio-and-Allegra here.]]
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A FanFic and midquel to ''RomeoAndJuliet'' written by Fanfiction.net member Cornadopia, ''Mercutio and Allegra'' was first published in March 2009 and currently has 105 106 reviews. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4908579/1/Mercutio-and-Allegra here.]]
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A FanFic and midquel to ''RomeoAndJuliet'' written by Fanfiction.net member Cornadopia, ''Mercutio and Allegra'' was first published in March 2009 and currently has 91 reviews.
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A FanFic and midquel to ''RomeoAndJuliet'' written by Fanfiction.net member Cornadopia, ''Mercutio and Allegra'' was first published in March 2009 and currently has 91 reviews.
105 reviews. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4908579/1/Mercutio-and-Allegra here.]]
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* JerkAss: It's full of 'em: Just about every Capulet save for Allegra, Juliet and Ricardo has their CompleteMonster moments, espiecally Tybalt.
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* JerkAss: It's full of 'em: Just about every Every Capulet save for Allegra, Juliet and Ricardo has their CompleteMonster moments, espiecally especially Tybalt.
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* ShutUpKiss: After their first arguement, Mercutio makes a long apology and begins to rant about how beautiful Allegra is, and is soon stumbling over his words. Allegra shuts him up with a kiss.
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* ShutUpKiss: After their first arguement, Mercutio makes a long apology and begins to rant about how beautiful Allegra is, and is soon stumbling over his words. Allegra shuts him up with a kiss.
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--> Allegra: My name is not {{Hamlet Ophelia}}..Ophelia..
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* RelationshipSue: Allegra, but she makes up for it with heaping quantities of awesome.
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* RelationshipSue: Allegra, but she makes up for it with heaping quantities of awesome.
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* ShutUpKiss: After their first arguement, Mercutio makes a long apology and begins to rant about how beautiful Allegra is, and is soon stumbling over his words. Allegra shuts him up with a kiss.
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* BetaCouple: Romeo and Juliet. [[HeyItsThatGuy Hey, it's that relationship!]]
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* BadassBookworm: Look at this profile. Just [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1525424/Cornadopia LOOK AT IT!]]
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