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* FrickinLaserBeams: He uses as "lasser" to kill a leopard that was sent by Danzo to attack him.
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* FrickinLaserBeams: EnergyWeapon: He uses as "lasser" to kill a leopard that was sent by Danzo to attack him.
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* BadassGrandpa: He has to be really old if he's Madara's brother.
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Green Eyes is no longer a valid trope https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=13545690040A55560100&page=87#2151
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* GreenEyes: Which literally ''are'' emeralds.
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->"I did it becuz Im really really rilly evil!"[[labelnote:Translation]]"I did it because I'm really, really, really evil!"[[/labelnote]]
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->"Im Mafairas brothwr he evil butt im not, im hiss rother."[[labelnote:Translation]]"I'm Madara's brother. He's evil, but I'm not. I'm just his brother.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[spoiler:AngstComa]][[spoiler:AngstComa]]: In Chapter 9. The narration says [[spoiler:"Emeraldia's doubt felled her into a kawaii koma."]]
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* OriginalCharacterOriginalCharacter: She's a new character made in the fic.
* TakeOverTheWorld: Darkeye and Danzo go to a movie called "How To Take Over The World".
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* MalevolentMaskedManMalevolentMaskedMan: He's a bad guy wearing a mask. (Sometimes a mosque.)
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* OriginalCharacterOriginalCharacter: Again, he's a completely new character.
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* TakeOverTheWorld: Darkeye and Danzo go to a movie called "How To Take Over The World".
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!!Silvette
Emeraldia's best friend, who aids her in investigating the death of Might Guy.
Emeraldia's best friend, who aids her in investigating the death of Might Guy.
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Emeraldia's best friend, who aids her in investigating
Gaara's brother. He attacks Emeraldia when she kills Gaara, but he later decides that he loves her. He also comes back from the
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!!Dye
->"Im Mafairas brothwr he evil butt im not, im hiss rother."[[labelnote:Translation]]"I'm Madara's brother. He's evil, but I'm not. I'm just his brother.[[/labelnote]]
Madara's brother, who isn't evil, despite being the brother of Madara. He wants to aid Emeraldia for some reason.
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* BadassGrandpa: He has to be really old if he's Madara's brother.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Depending on your definition of [[TrollFic evil]].
* FrickinLaserBeams: He uses as "lasser" to kill a leopard that was sent by Danzo to attack him.
* OriginalCharacter: He was never in the canon ''Nartuo'' series.
* TheSmartGuy
* OriginalCharacter
!!Dye
->"Im Mafairas brothwr he evil butt im not, im hiss rother."[[labelnote:Translation]]"I'm Madara's brother. He's evil, but I'm not. I'm just his brother.[[/labelnote]]
Madara's brother, who isn't evil, despite being the brother of Madara. He wants to aid Emeraldia for some reason.
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* BadassGrandpa: He has to be really old if he's Madara's brother.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Depending on your definition of [[TrollFic evil]].
* FrickinLaserBeams: He uses as "lasser" to kill a leopard that was sent by Danzo to attack him.
* OriginalCharacter: He was never in the canon ''Nartuo'' series.
* TheSmartGuy
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* TheLancer
* OriginalCharacter
!!Dye
->"Im Mafairas brothwr he evil butt im not, im hiss rother."[[labelnote:Translation]]"I'm Madara's brother. He's evil, but I'm not. I'm just his brother.[[/labelnote]]
Madara's brother, who isn't evil, despite being the brother of Madara.BigDamnHeroes: He wants to aid saves Emeraldia for some reason.
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from Evil Emeraldia in Chapter 8.
*BadassGrandpa: He has to be really old if MarionetteMaster: Uses the "Art of the Puppet Show" in Chapter 8.
* UnexplainedRecovery: In Chapter 6, Prince Gecko finds out about his death from the newspaper. However, he'sMadara's brother.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Depending on your definition of [[TrollFic evil]].
* FrickinLaserBeams: He uses as "lasser" to kill a leopard that was sent by Danzo to attack him.
* OriginalCharacter: He was neveralive and well with no explanation in the canon ''Nartuo'' series.
* TheSmartGuyChapter 8.
* OriginalCharacter
!!Dye
->"Im Mafairas brothwr he evil butt im not, im hiss rother."[[labelnote:Translation]]"I'm Madara's brother. He's evil, but I'm not. I'm just his brother.[[/labelnote]]
Madara's brother, who isn't evil, despite being the brother of Madara.
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*
* UnexplainedRecovery: In Chapter 6, Prince Gecko finds out about his death from the newspaper. However, he's
* DarkIsNotEvil: Depending on your definition of [[TrollFic evil]].
* FrickinLaserBeams: He uses as "lasser" to kill a leopard that was sent by Danzo to attack him.
* OriginalCharacter: He was never
* TheSmartGuy
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!!Apollo Justice
An attorney who supposedly killed Might Guy.
!!Apollo Justice
An attorney who supposedly killed Might Guy.
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!!Apollo Justice
An attorney
!!Silvette
Emeraldia's best friend, who
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* BeardOfEvil: It's mentioned that he has one.
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Danzo and Darkeye to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
* BeardOfEvil: It's mentioned that he has one.
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Danzo and Darkeye to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
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* AmoralAttorney
TheLancer: She's Emeraldia's best friend.
*BeardOfEvil: It's mentioned that he has one.
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Danzo and Darkeye to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
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* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Danzo and Darkeye to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
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* CardCarryingVillainCardCarryingVillain: He's always telling others that he's evil. For example:
-->'''Danzo''': "Emeradlia too mini tims wou've intarfarred with my evill planes!" (Chapter 5)
-->'''Danzo''': "I did it becuz Im really really rilly evil!" (Chapter 8)
-->'''Danzo''': "Emeradlia too mini tims wou've intarfarred with my evill planes!" (Chapter 5)
-->'''Danzo''': "I did it becuz Im really really rilly evil!" (Chapter 8)
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The leader of the Akatsuki, he plots to kill Emeraldia because of the prophecy that only she can kill him.
The leader of the Akatsuki, he plots to kill Emeraldia because of the prophecy that only she can kill him.
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The leader of
An attorney who supposedly killed Might Guy. He lives in the
* AmoralAttorney: He's a lawyer, and is said to be evil.
* BeardOfEvil: It's mentioned that he has one.
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Danzo and Darkeye to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
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!!Madara
The leader of the Akatsuki, he plots to kill Emeraldia because of the prophecy that only she can kill him.
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* BeardOfEvil: It's mentioned that he has one.
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Danzo and Darkeye to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
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!!Madara
The leader of the Akatsuki, he plots to kill Emeraldia because of the prophecy that only she can kill him.
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!!Darkeye
A mysteriously powerful villain. He somehow brought Zabuza and Haku back to life.
A mysteriously powerful villain. He somehow brought Zabuza and Haku back to life.
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* AscendedExtra: Madara was referred to as "Xemnas" in Chapter Ate, but in Chapter Nein Xemnas was actually shown to be working with Madara.
* IAmAHumanitarian: Shizune tells Madara to turn Emeraldia into ramen so Xemnas can eat her.
* VillainousGlutton: Shizune calls him a hungry boy.
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!!Darkeye
A mysteriously powerful villain. He somehow brought Zabuza and Haku back to life.
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* IAmAHumanitarian: Shizune tells Madara to turn Emeraldia into ramen so Xemnas can eat her.
* VillainousGlutton: Shizune calls him a hungry boy.
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!!Darkeye
A mysteriously powerful villain. He somehow brought Zabuza and Haku back to life.
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!!Xemnas
A villain from the ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' series. In this fanfic, he is the son of Shizune and appears to be working with Madara.
A villain from the ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' series. In this fanfic, he is the son of Shizune and appears to be working with Madara.
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A villain from
->"Im Mafairas brothwr he evil butt im not, im hiss rother."[[labelnote:Translation]]"I'm Madara's brother. He's evil, but I'm not. I'm just his brother.[[/labelnote]]
Madara's brother, who isn't evil, despite being the
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* IAmAHumanitarian: Shizune tells Madara to turn Emeraldia into ramen so Xemnas can eat her.
* VillainousGlutton: Shizune calls him a hungry boy.
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* IAmAHumanitarian: Shizune tells Madara to turn Emeraldia into ramen so Xemnas can eat her.
* VillainousGlutton: Shizune calls him a hungry boy.
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* AscendedExtra: Madara was referred to as "Xemnas" in Chapter Ate, but in Chapter Nein Xemnas was actually shown BadassGrandpa: He has to be working with Madara.
really old if he's Madara's brother.
*IAmAHumanitarian: Shizune tells Madara DarkIsNotEvil: Depending on your definition of [[TrollFic evil]].
* FrickinLaserBeams: He uses as "lasser" toturn Emeraldia into ramen so Xemnas can eat her.
kill a leopard that was sent by Danzo to attack him.
*VillainousGlutton: Shizune calls him a hungry boy.
[[/folder]]OriginalCharacter: He was never in the canon ''Nartuo'' series.
* TheSmartGuy
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* [[spoiler: AngstComa]][[spoiler:AngstComa]]
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->"Im Mafairas brothwr he evil butt im not, im hiss rother."[[labelnote:Translation]]"I'm Madara's brother. He's evil, but I'm not. I'm just his brother.[[/labelnote]]
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* OriginalCharacter: He was never in the canon ''Nartuo'' series.
* OriginalCharacter: He was never in the canon ''Nartuo'' series.
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* BeastMaster: TheBeastmaster: He had control of a leopard, which he tried to use to kill Dye.
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* CardCarryingVillain
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* LiteralMinded: Mello explains that he used a tractor beam to plow the Hokage Tower.
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!!Madara
The leader of the Akatsuki, he plots to kill Emeraldia because of the prophecy that only she can kill him.
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* MalevolentMaskedMan
* TakeOverTheWorld: Subverted. Emeraldia says that he wants to take over the world, but Madara says that the world sucks and he doesn't want to rule it.
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Darkeye, Apollo Justice, Danzo and one other villain to unleash Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
!!Darkeye
A mysteriously powerful villain. He somehow brought Zabuza and Haku back to life.
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* {{Necromancer}}: He brings Zabuza and Haku back from the "dude".
* OriginalCharacter
* ShroudedInMyth: It is said that he could beat the Sage of Six Paths in a fight.
* TotallyRadical: He speaks like this in his appearance.
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Danzo, Madara, Apollo Justice and another villain to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
!!Xemnas
A villain from the ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' series. In this fanfic, he is the son of Shizune and appears to be working with Madara.
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* AscendedExtra: Madara was referred to as "Xemnas" in Chapter Ate, but in Chapter Nein Xemnas was actually shown to be working with Madara.
* IAmAHumanitarian: Shizune tells Madara to turn Emeraldia into ramen so Xemnas can eat her.
* VillainousGlutton: Shizune calls him a hungry boy.
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!!Danzo
A villainous man who holds great power in the Leaf Village.
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* BeastMaster: He had control of a leopard, which he tried to use to kill Dye.
* ForTheEvulz: He destroys the Hokage Tower because he's evil. No other reason is given.
* VillainsOutShopping: He goes to see a movie with Darkeye, although the movie ''is'' called, "How to Take Over the World".
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Darkeye, Apollo Justice and one other unknown villain to unseal the Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
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More coming soon. Mom kicking me off computer.
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Oh my glod! It's a kawaii character page.
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[[folder: Protagonists]]
!!Emeraldia Brightmoon
The main character of the fic, Emeraldia is a genin from the "Hidan Beef Village" who manages to obtain the love of Naruto, Sasuke, Shino and Kankuro. She's also apparently fighting for justice, but it's really hard to tell.
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* [[spoiler: AngstComa]]
* BeastMaster: She is able to tame a lion with her beauty.
* TheChosenOne: She is the only one able to defeat the Akatsuki and Madara.
* GreenEyes: Which literally ''are'' emeralds.
* InstantExpert: She manages to master every single jutsu ever, ''in a single week''.
* ItsAllMyFault: Blames herself for something in chapter nine.
* LoveTriangle: With Naruto, Sasuke, Shino, Kankuro, and apparently others.
* OriginalCharacter
* VillainProtagonist: Given that she randomly goes around killing people, pretty much.
!!Naruto
The first of Emeraldia's love interests. While in the actual ''{{Manga/Naruto}}'' canon, his dream is to be Hokage, he's decided to simply hand over the position to Emeraldia here.
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* BigDamnHeroes: In Chapter Nine, he was hiding in ''something'' Xemnas had, and leaps out to save Emeraldia.
* DemotedToExtra: He was the main character of the actual ''Naruto'' series, but here he's just some guy who hangs around Emeraldia.
!!Silvette
Emeraldia's best friend, who aids her in investigating the death of Might Guy.
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* TheLancer
* OriginalCharacter
!!Dye
Madara's brother, who isn't evil, despite being the brother of Madara. He wants to aid Emeraldia for some reason.
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* BadassGrandpa: He has to be really old if he's Madara's brother.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Depending on your definition of [[TrollFic evil]].
* FrickingLazerBeams
* TheSmartGuy
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[[folder: Antagonists]]
!!Apollo Justice
An attorney who supposedly killed Might Guy.
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* AmoralAttorney
* BeardOfEvil
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Danzo and Darkeye to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
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[[foldercontrol]]
[[folder: Protagonists]]
!!Emeraldia Brightmoon
The main character of the fic, Emeraldia is a genin from the "Hidan Beef Village" who manages to obtain the love of Naruto, Sasuke, Shino and Kankuro. She's also apparently fighting for justice, but it's really hard to tell.
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* [[spoiler: AngstComa]]
* BeastMaster: She is able to tame a lion with her beauty.
* TheChosenOne: She is the only one able to defeat the Akatsuki and Madara.
* GreenEyes: Which literally ''are'' emeralds.
* InstantExpert: She manages to master every single jutsu ever, ''in a single week''.
* ItsAllMyFault: Blames herself for something in chapter nine.
* LoveTriangle: With Naruto, Sasuke, Shino, Kankuro, and apparently others.
* OriginalCharacter
* VillainProtagonist: Given that she randomly goes around killing people, pretty much.
!!Naruto
The first of Emeraldia's love interests. While in the actual ''{{Manga/Naruto}}'' canon, his dream is to be Hokage, he's decided to simply hand over the position to Emeraldia here.
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* BigDamnHeroes: In Chapter Nine, he was hiding in ''something'' Xemnas had, and leaps out to save Emeraldia.
* DemotedToExtra: He was the main character of the actual ''Naruto'' series, but here he's just some guy who hangs around Emeraldia.
!!Silvette
Emeraldia's best friend, who aids her in investigating the death of Might Guy.
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* TheLancer
* OriginalCharacter
!!Dye
Madara's brother, who isn't evil, despite being the brother of Madara. He wants to aid Emeraldia for some reason.
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* BadassGrandpa: He has to be really old if he's Madara's brother.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Depending on your definition of [[TrollFic evil]].
* FrickingLazerBeams
* TheSmartGuy
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[[folder: Antagonists]]
!!Apollo Justice
An attorney who supposedly killed Might Guy.
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* AmoralAttorney
* BeardOfEvil
* VillainTeamUp: He teams up with Madara, Danzo and Darkeye to unseal Demon Ninja Emperor Mike.
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