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->[-'''''Webcomic/ParadoxSpace'' Appearances''': "Prototyped" | "The Town Mouse And The Country Mouse" | "Garbage Day" | "Summerteen Romance" -]
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!!Other Derseites
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!!Other Derseites
Dersites
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* TheCaligula: He already had the personality, then he got hold of the [[GameBreaker Black Queen's Ring]] and became the Sovereign Slayer. After being prototyped with Bec, he becomes even more unstable, and also has dog-like thoughts from time to time. And once he enters the troll's session, he doesn't hold anything back, destroying the troll's lands and then their Prospit and Derse while brutally murdering any dreamself who happens to be awake at the moment, as Tavros, Karkat, Feferi, and Nepeta find out the hard way.
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* TheCaligula: He already had the personality, then he got hold of the [[GameBreaker Black Queen's Ring]] ring and became the Sovereign Slayer. After being prototyped with Bec, he becomes even more unstable, and also has dog-like thoughts from time to time. And once he enters the troll's session, he doesn't hold anything back, destroying the troll's lands and then their Prospit and Derse while brutally murdering any dreamself who happens to be awake at the moment, as Tavros, Karkat, Feferi, and Nepeta find out the hard way.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Before: ObstructiveBureaucrat. After: [[KnightOfCerebus where to]] [[OneManArmy even begin?]]
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* BladeOnAStick: His weapon is a spear with a head that visually resembles a red diamond (as in the suite, not the rock).
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* BishonenLine: Odd usage related to hands. High ranking agents like Jack Noir and the Royalty of each planet have clearly distinct fingers while pawns like WV have more claw-like hands. Inverted with their teeth, though; high ranks have sharp teeth but low ranks have pretty much human teeth.
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* BishonenLine: Odd usage related to hands. High ranking High-ranking agents like Jack Noir and the Royalty of each planet have clearly distinct fingers while pawns like WV have more claw-like hands. Inverted with their teeth, though; high ranks have sharp teeth but low ranks have pretty much human teeth.
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* SupermodelStrut: "[S] Jack: Ascend", has a close-up of her swaying hips as she walks with a strut, illustrating her "regal" status.
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* TheDragon: He's the second highest ranking member of Derse royalty, right below the King and Queen.
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Being calm and sophisticated doesn't necessarily mean being affable.
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* AffablyEvil: All iterations of the Draconian Dignitary keep a level of wit, sophistication and, of course, dignity to their personas.
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dewicking An Axe To Grind per TRS
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* {{Irony}}: During the Intermission, Hearts Boxcars beheaded Eggs. After Descend, Hegemonic Brute is beheaded by Parcel Mistress and again in Act 6 by Dirk when he attempts to use an appropriately-named [[AnAxeToGrind AXE TO GRIND]].
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* {{Irony}}: During the Intermission, Hearts Boxcars beheaded Eggs. After Descend, Hegemonic Brute is beheaded by Parcel Mistress and again in Act 6 by Dirk when he attempts to use an appropriately-named [[AnAxeToGrind AXE TO GRIND]].GRIND.
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* BladeOnAStick: His WeaponOfChoice is a spear with a head that visually resembles a red diamond (as in the suite, not the rock).
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* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: Hegemonic Brute is a towering brute notable more for his inhuman strength than for any particularly cleverness, and serves as Derse's muscle in missions requiring the application of liberal amounts of brute force. Fittingly, he's mainly seen using battle-axes as weapons.
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** And again at the end of Act 5, when after Jade is killed, Bec's influence causes him to take her to her Quest Bed. Since Jade's dream self was currently the second prototyping of Becsprite, when she revives she has both God Tier Witch of Space AND First Guardian powers.[[note]][[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And dog ears]].[[/note]]
* NoNonsenseNemesis: See his fight with John and Rose.
* NoNonsenseNemesis: See his fight with John and Rose.
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** And again at the end of Act 5, when after Jade is killed, Bec's influence causes him to take her to her Quest Bed. Since Jade's dream self was currently the second prototyping of Becsprite, when she revives she has both God Tier Witch of Space AND First Guardian powers.[[note]][[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And dog ears]].[[/note]]
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* NonHumanHead: After Bec is prototyped, he develops a wolflike head with a scar over one eye.
%%* NoNonsenseNemesis: See his fight with John and Rose.
* NonHumanHead: After Bec is prototyped, he develops a wolflike head with a scar over one eye.
%%* NoNonsenseNemesis: See his fight with John and Rose.
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The Hegemonic Brute of the B2 session is sent to assassinate Dirk when the Dersites start offing the kids' dream selves early. Unfortunately for him, he isn't aware that Dirk is already awake and is swiftly counter-assassinated.
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* ParasolParachute: Towards the close of Act 5, when airdropping a large shaving cream-based bomb on Jade's house, he hops off the bomb before it lands and parachutes the rest of the way down with an umbrella.
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Aversions aren't examples.
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* BizarreAlienBiology: Averted; though their skin are semi-segmented hard carapaces, with edges and complex joints, this does ''nothing'' to their durability, as they suffer from wounds in a nigh-identical manner to humans and trolls. They do have internal genitals and NonMammalianMammaries, but they have skeletons too, and organs seemingly all in the normal places, meaning overall they're pretty human.
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* EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: Not Jack Noir himself, but, [[https://www.homestuck.com/story/4600 when the White Queen abushes him]], his sword is sent spinning in midair.
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* SpectacularSpinning: Not Jack Noir himself, but, [[https://www.homestuck.com/story/4600 when the White Queen abushes him]], his sword is sent spinning in midair.
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The agents of Derse and Prospit and the royalty of those planets.
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The agents of Derse and Prospit and the royalty of those planets.
planets. Known as a whole as the carapacians or, more colloquially, as the "chess guys", they're a humanoid species with hard exoskeletons that are either bone white or pitch black, depending on their planet of origin. They wage an endless war for Skaia, with Prospit seeking to aid the players in creating a new universe and Derse seeking to prevent them. Prospit is doomed to lose this conflict no matter what it does; its in-game role is simply to hold Derse off for long enough for the players to come into their own and handle things themselves.
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* FantasticCasteSystem: Follows basically from chess rules. There is only one pair of royalty per planet, a small number of archagents, and a massive number of pawns below them.
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* FantasticCasteSystem: Follows They live in one that follows basically from chess rules. There is only one pair of royalty per planet, a small number of archagents, archagents representative of the special chess pieces, and a massive number of pawns below them.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Cuts off his chained leg and replaces it with one of the Prospit prison tower's spires, further mimicking Lord English's appearance.
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* MythologyGag: Ends up in a ''Webcomic/{{Jailbreak}}'' [[https://www.homestuck.com/story/4878 adventure]].
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* {{There is No Kill Like Overkill}}: He feels that if you kill a guard by stabbing him in the back with 7 knives and beat his head into a door 88 times it is the proper amount of violence. Although 89 times is where he realizes the overkill. And by overkill, we guess we mean bored.
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* {{There is No Kill Like Overkill}}: He feels that if you kill a guard by stabbing him in the back with 7 seven knives and beat his head into a door 88 eighty-eight times it is the proper amount of violence. Although 89 times the eighty-ninth time is where he realizes the overkill. And by overkill, we guess we mean bored.