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(and the universe does)
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(and the universe does)does)
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--> Pit Boss: "Come with me a moment."
--> Lola, turning to look right at him: "...I'll spin again."
--> The Pit Boss recoils, visibly shocked, and lets her.
--> Lola, turning to look right at him: "...I'll spin again."
--> The Pit Boss recoils, visibly shocked, and lets her.
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--> Lola,
'''Lola, turning to look right at
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The Pit Boss recoils, visibly shocked, and lets her.
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--> Lola: "But I don't... I don't wanna leave..."
--> Lola: "Stop."
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--> Lola: "Stop."
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--> Lola: "Stop."
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'''Lola:''' Stop.\\
(and the universe does)
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** As she [[spoiler:lays lays dying after being shot in the chest.]]
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* Lola has a good few, mainly through her visible force of will.
--> Pit Boss: "Come with me a moment."
--> Lola, turning to look right at him: "...I'll spin again."
--> The Pit Boss recoils, visibly shocked, and lets her.
** As she [[spoiler:lays dying after being shot in the chest.]]
--> Lola: "But I don't... I don't wanna leave..."
--> Lola: "Stop."
--> [[spoiler:(and the universe does)]]
--> Pit Boss: "Come with me a moment."
--> Lola, turning to look right at him: "...I'll spin again."
--> The Pit Boss recoils, visibly shocked, and lets her.
** As she [[spoiler:lays dying after being shot in the chest.]]
--> Lola: "But I don't... I don't wanna leave..."
--> Lola: "Stop."
--> [[spoiler:(and the universe does)]]
