This is discussion archived from a time before the current discussion method was installed.
Legendarylugi: I'm worried that the article may be droning a bit (my bad). To me it seems a little bland for what it's describing...or maybe I'm imagining it.
Earnest: It gets the point across, which is the important part. Maybe come back to it in a week or two and re-read it to see if you feel the same way. The good thing about wiki's is there's no final due-date for improvements. ^_~
