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** When Haik and Mirasol try to save their unborn whale-goddess daughter, a shaman regretfully tells them that "the whales will not come back." No doubt this means [[DeathOfTheOldGods Catholicism's tightening grip on the Philippines.]]
* ValuesDissonance: The historical CultureClash between Spain and the Philippines is an ever-present theme.
* ValuesResonance: Between Filipinos and Polynesians/Pacific Islanders, who share the Austronesian heritage of [[TattooAsCharacterType tattooing traditions]] and [[BornUnderTheSail a seafaring culture.]]
* ValuesDissonance: The historical CultureClash between Spain and the Philippines is an ever-present theme.
* ValuesResonance: Between Filipinos and Polynesians/Pacific Islanders, who share the Austronesian heritage of [[TattooAsCharacterType tattooing traditions]] and [[BornUnderTheSail a seafaring culture.]]
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** When Haik and Mirasol try to save their unborn whale-goddess daughter, a shaman regretfully tells them that "the whales will not come back." No doubt this means [[DeathOfTheOldGods Catholicism's tightening grip on the Philippines.]]
* ValuesDissonance: The historical CultureClash between Spain and the Philippines is an ever-present theme.
* ValuesResonance: Between Filipinos and Polynesians/Pacific Islanders, who share the Austronesian heritage of [[TattooAsCharacterType tattooing traditions]] and [[BornUnderTheSail a seafaring culture.]]
* ValuesDissonance: The historical CultureClash between Spain and the Philippines is an ever-present theme.
* ValuesResonance: Between Filipinos and Polynesians/Pacific Islanders, who share the Austronesian heritage of [[TattooAsCharacterType tattooing traditions]] and [[BornUnderTheSail a seafaring culture.
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* ValuesResonance: Between the native Filipinos and Polynesians/Pacific Islanders, who share the Austronesian heritage of [[TattooAsCharacterType strong tattooing traditions]] and [[BornUnderTheSail a seafaring culture.]]
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* ValuesResonance: Between the native Filipinos and Polynesians/Pacific Islanders, who share the Austronesian heritage of [[TattooAsCharacterType strong tattooing traditions]] and [[BornUnderTheSail a seafaring culture.]]
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* FakeNationality: Haik is masquerading as a Filipino-Australian.
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** When Haik and Mirasol are trying try to save their unborn whale-goddess daughter, a shaman regretfully tells them that "the whales will not come back." No doubt this means [[DeathOfTheOldGods Catholicism's tightening grip on the Philippines.]]
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** When Haik and Mirasol are trying to save their unborn whale-goddess daughter, a shaman regretfully tells them that "the whales will not come back." No doubt this is speaking of means [[DeathOfTheOldGods Catholicism's tightening grip on the Philippines.]]
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** When they're Haik and Mirasol are trying to save their unborn whale-goddess daughter, a shaman regretfully tells them that "the whales will not come back." No doubt this is speaking of [[DeathOfTheOldGods Catholicism's tightening grip on the Philippines.]]
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** When they're trying to save their unborn whale-goddess daughter, a shaman regretfully tells them that "the whales will not come back." No doubt this is speaking of [[DeathOfTheOldGods Catholicism's tightening grip on the Philippines.]]
* ValuesDissonance: The historical CultureClash between Spain and the Philippines is an ever-present theme of the story.
* ValuesResonance: Between the native Filipinos and Polynesians/Pacific Islanders, who share the Austronesian heritage of [[TattooAsCharacterType strong tattooing traditions]] and [[BornUnderTheSail a seafaring culture.]]
* ValuesDissonance: The historical CultureClash between Spain and the Philippines is an ever-present theme of the story.
* ValuesResonance: Between the native Filipinos and Polynesians/Pacific Islanders, who share the Austronesian heritage of [[TattooAsCharacterType strong tattooing traditions]] and [[BornUnderTheSail a seafaring culture.]]
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* RealitySubtext: Haik is an undocumented immigrant, and this story was written a year into Donald Trump's infamous 2016 election with all the racial/cultural tensions blowing up across the United States.
** The author couldn't find any information about Haik the sea-god in real life, so he's "undocumented" on an even BIGGER scale than just "living in a country illegally." Moreover, with every chunk of {{Mythopoeia}} that Haik tells Mirasol, half a dozen more questions spring up in her head as an in-story form of FanFicFuel.
** When they're trying to save their unborn whale-goddess daughter, a shaman regretfully tells them that "the whales will not come back." No doubt this is speaking of [[DeathOfTheOldGods Catholicism's tightening grip on the Philippines.]]
** The author couldn't find any information about Haik the sea-god in real life, so he's "undocumented" on an even BIGGER scale than just "living in a country illegally." Moreover, with every chunk of {{Mythopoeia}} that Haik tells Mirasol, half a dozen more questions spring up in her head as an in-story form of FanFicFuel.
** When they're trying to save their unborn whale-goddess daughter, a shaman regretfully tells them that "the whales will not come back." No doubt this is speaking of [[DeathOfTheOldGods Catholicism's tightening grip on the Philippines.]]
