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!! Helen "Turax" Parr/Elastigirl

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!! Helen "Turax" "Truax" Parr/Elastigirl



* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do (with the first film keeping Helen's development off-screen and despite her being the protagonist of the sequel where only her job got developed). This is due to greater focus on her fragile relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.

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* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do (with the first film keeping Helen's development entirely off-screen and despite her being the protagonist of the sequel where only her job got developed). This is due to greater focus on her fragile relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.

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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Being told that your parents are dead, being forced to work for a mad supervillain who was once your father's biggest fan and survive his deadly Omnidroids during your training and commit a theft of a rival villian's Nullifier. It's no wonder Violet finally snaps and kills her former boss in cold blood which ends up scarring her for life.]]

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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Being beat on by a very nasty babysitter, and then being told that your parents are dead, being forced to work for a mad supervillain who was once your father's biggest fan and survive his deadly Omnidroids during your training and commit a theft of a rival villian's Nullifier. It's no wonder Violet finally snaps and kills her former boss in cold blood which ends up scarring her for life.]]



* ChildrenForcedToKill: [[spoiler:''Violet'' murders Syndrome in cold blood by popping his head like a overinflated balloon with her Force Fields.]]

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* ChildrenForcedToKill: [[spoiler:''Violet'' murders Syndrome in cold blood by popping his head like a overinflated balloon with her Force Fields. She also considered doing this to Mrs. Caruso early on in the story during one of her babysitting days, but doesn't go through it.]]



* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:Violet considers doing this to herself via putting a Force Field inside her own head and engorging it until it burst, only for Dash to talk her down as he breaks down crying, upon realizing his sister doesn't want to be a Super. It's ultimately how Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Fields until it violently explodes.]]

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* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:Violet at first considered doing this to Mrs. Caruso, but doesn't go through with it as she's not worth committing murder on and being sent to jail. Violet then considers doing this to herself via putting a Force Field inside her own head and engorging it until it burst, only for Dash to talk her down as he breaks down crying, upon realizing his sister doesn't want to be a Super. It's ultimately how Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Fields until it violently explodes.]]



* AbusiveBabysitter: Is not very pleasant and is outright abusive towards Violet who got a beating every time she tried to take control of the situation. She then starts abusing Dash after he witnesses her giving Violet a beating when he lunges after her.



* EvilBabysitter: Is not very pleasant and is outright abusive towards Violet who got a beating every time she tried to take control of the situation.
* InSeriesNickname: Violet gives her the unflattering nickname of Mrs. Licorice, seeing as she smells and reeks of it. True to her word, Caruso is downright nasty.
* TurnTheOtherCheek: How she abuses poor Violet, blaming her for everything Dash does and believing Violet's the one causing it. It's implied she started abusing Dash when he attacks her after he witnesses her attacking Violet.

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* EvilBabysitter: Is not very pleasant and is outright abusive towards EvenEvilHasStandards: While downright nasty to Violet who got a beating every time and Dash, she's more nicer with Jack-Jack, while Mrs. Caruso will abuse kids she tried won't stoop low to take control of the situation.
abuse an infant.
* InSeriesNickname: Violet gives her the unflattering nickname of Mrs. Licorice, seeing as she smells and reeks of it. True to her word, Caruso is downright nasty.
nasty and abuses her wards, except for babies.
* TurnTheOtherCheek: How she abuses poor Violet, blaming her for everything Dash does and believing Violet's the one causing it. It's implied she started abusing Dash when he attacks her after he witnesses her attacking outright beating Violet.

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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down upon hearing the deaths of his parents at the hands of the Mastermind, but gets over it very quickly due to the nifty gadgets that are at his disposal and becomes disheartened following his failure of the training program, forcing Violet to step up her game.]]

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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down upon hearing the deaths of his parents at the hands of the Mastermind, but gets over it very quickly due to the nifty gadgets that are at his disposal and becomes disheartened following his failure of the training program, forcing Violet to step up her game. His corruption into a villian is far less severe compared to Violet's seeing as he knows from right and wrong.]]



* BigBad: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be this as usual, and is behind everything. Including kidnapping Bob and Helen to trick Violet into thinking the Mastermind killed them. He's more evil than his film counterpart by a mile.]]
* BadBoss: Is a nasty one to Violet and Dash, threatening to kill them if they fail their training course (he ultimately doesn't go through with this, seeing as he needs them alive to complete his EvilPlan of converting them into his evil sidekicks). He's far more ruthless to Violet due to her anxiety and depression.
* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Syndrome becomes one to Violet and Dash, as he begins to turn her into an Agent of Evil as his personal sidekick, by using her own anxiety and lack of self-confidence against her, he then uses a evil making machine on Violet to fully corrupt her into a villainess, Dash on the other hand is far harder seeing as he has a far bigger morale compass than either of them.]]

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* BigBad: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be this as usual, and is behind everything. Including kidnapping Bob and Helen to trick Violet into thinking the Mastermind killed them. them via a bombing attack (which would be futile due to Bob's NighInvulnerability). He's far more evil than his film counterpart by a mile.mile, seeing as in addition of wiping out natural Supers (alongside Bob, Helen and Lucius) and giving normal humans powers via the stolen Nullifier, he plans to have Mr. Incredible's and Elastigirl's own kids turned evil to spite them and destroy their legacy.]]
* BadBoss: Is a nasty one to Violet and Dash, threatening to kill them if they fail their training course (he ultimately doesn't go through with this, seeing as he needs them alive to complete his EvilPlan of converting them into his evil sidekicks).sidekicks in order to hurt Mr. Incredible further). He's far more ruthless to Violet due to her anxiety and depression.
* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Syndrome becomes one to Violet and Dash, Violet, as he begins to turn her into an Agent of Evil as his personal sidekick, by using her own anxiety and lack of self-confidence against her, her and directs her aggression at the Mastermind whom he tricks her into thinking she killed her parents (which is a lie as they're secretly held captive in the Nigel Lair), he then uses a evil making machine on Violet to fully corrupt her into a villainess, Dash villainess when he realizes she isn't willing to go along with his plans and finding out the truth from the Mastermind. He tries to be one to Dash, who on the other hand is far harder to corrupt overall seeing as he has a far bigger morale compass than either of them.]]



* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Much like in the film Syndrome dies, this time dying to his biggest fan's own daughter whom he abused horribly against her will, threatening to kidnap your baby brother to use as a weapon and kill your entire family will do that.]]

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Much like in the film Syndrome dies, this time dying to his biggest fan's own daughter whom he abused horribly against her will, will and tried to corrupt her on the path of evil, threatening to kidnap your baby brother to use as a weapon and kill your entire family will do that.that. Meaning he was doomed regardless of the timeline change.]]



* PopGoesTheHuman: [[spoiler:Syndrome's fate is this via DeadlyForceField thanks to Violet, with her popping his head clean off with her Force Fields enlarging his head until it burst.]]

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* PopGoesTheHuman: [[spoiler:Syndrome's final fate is this via DeadlyForceField thanks to Violet, with her popping his head clean off with her Force Fields enlarging his head until it burst.]]



* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Mirage reveals to Violet that she wanted to be an actress before becoming Syndrome's loyal lackey and dreams of doing so once she quits working for Syndrome, ultimately her boss's corruption causes her to work with the far less villainous [[spoiler:Mastermind]].

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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Mirage reveals to Violet that she wanted to be an actress before becoming Syndrome's loyal lackey and dreams of doing so once she quits working for Syndrome, Syndrome (giving readers a backstory Mirage lacked in the first film), ultimately her boss's corruption causes her to work with the far less villainous [[spoiler:Mastermind]].



* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Just like in the original film, though she's still evil.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Mirage gives a nasty one to Violet. [[spoiler:Though it plays a critical role in Violet reforming back into a superhero.]] [[spoiler:She also slams Violet for killing Syndrome]].
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self, [[spoiler:a far less moral superhero, seeing as she brutally murders Syndrome when he threatens to repeat his plans on her family, showing that much like Mirage's own corruption forcing her to stay evil, Violet's willing to kill evil people to keep her family safe]].

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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Just like in the original film, though unfortunately she's still evil.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Mirage gives a nasty one to Violet. [[spoiler:Though it plays a critical role in Violet reforming back into a superhero.]] [[spoiler:She also slams Violet for killing Syndrome]].
Syndrome, even though Violet felt she had no choice in the matter]].
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self, [[spoiler:a far less moral superhero, seeing as she brutally murders Syndrome when he threatens to repeat his plans on her family, showing that much like Mirage's own corruption forcing her to stay evil, Violet's willing to kill extremely evil people to keep her family safe]].


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!! Mrs. Caruso
* BadlyBatteredBabysitter: Completely {{Inverted}} and {{Averted}} as Violet and Dash get abused by her, moreso Violet seeing as she's quite capable of keeping Dash under control, unlike Mrs. Caruso who can't control Dash.
* CanonForeigner: Book character only and plays a less important role compared to [[spoiler:The Mastermind and Lucy]].
* EvilBabysitter: Is not very pleasant and is outright abusive towards Violet who got a beating every time she tried to take control of the situation.
* InSeriesNickname: Violet gives her the unflattering nickname of Mrs. Licorice, seeing as she smells and reeks of it. True to her word, Caruso is downright nasty.
* TurnTheOtherCheek: How she abuses poor Violet, blaming her for everything Dash does and believing Violet's the one causing it. It's implied she started abusing Dash when he attacks her after he witnesses her attacking Violet.

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* BestFriends: With Bob Parr.
* DemotedToExtra: Doesn't get a lot of focus compared to his film counterpart.

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* BestFriends: With Bob Parr.
* DemotedToExtra: Doesn't get a lot of focus compared to his film counterpart.counterpart, [[spoiler: despite being the one to free Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl]].
* HeterosexualLifePartners: With Bob Parr.
* HonoraryUncle: The godfather to Violet, Dash and Jack-Jack. [[spoiler:He is horrified when he witnesses his beloved niece Violet brutally kill Syndrome.]]



* BadassAdorable: Like Uncle, like Niece. Though Lucy lacks superpowers, but is a skilled vocal impersonator, [[spoiler: which is enough to outright fool Syndrome into thinking she's the Mastermind (whom the real deal was busy fighting Violet), which plays a major role in freeing Bob and Helen and eventually Syndrome's death.]]

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* BadassNormal: Lacks superpowers like her beloved Uncle Frozone, but her skills at VoiceChangeling may very well count as a superpower if not a really good talent, [[spoiler:which she uses to great effect to disguise herself as the Mastermind over the phone that leads to Syndrome's downfall and eventually his death.]]
* BadassAdorable: Like Uncle, like Niece. Though Lucy lacks superpowers, but is a skilled vocal impersonator, impersonator that she puts to great use in, [[spoiler: which is enough to outright fool Syndrome into thinking she's the Mastermind (whom the real deal was busy fighting Violet), which plays a major role in freeing Bob and Helen and eventually Syndrome's death.]]
* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Held hostage by Syndrome when he arrives to kill Mr. Incredible, Elastigirl and her Uncle Frozone and is ForcedToWatch as he takes away their powers and begins brutalizing them. She also witnessed her good friend Violet commit murder and becomes terrified of her afterwards, fearing that she too will die by her hands.
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* PopularGirl: Is one of the most popular girls in Westview Jr. High if Violet's words are taken at face value.

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* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler:Held hostage by Syndrome during the climax where he threatens to give her superpowers and make her an evil sidekick, she is saved when Violet and Dash arrives and snatched the Nullifier back from Syndrome and repowers her Uncle and the Parr parents just in time before the Omnidroid deals the final blow]].
* ForcedToWatch: [[spoiler:She is horrified when Syndrome depowers her Uncle Frozone and his best friend and his best friend's wife right in front of her, with Syndrome threatening to give Lucy herself superpowers with the Nullifier and making her into a sidekick. She is saved when Violet and Dash uses their fake FaceHeelTurn to trick and attack Syndrome to steal back the Nullifier.]]
* PopularGirl: Is one of the most popular girls in Westview Jr. High if Violet's words are taken at face value.value, she also adores Supers and feels sorry for them and wants to help them undo the ban.

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Big time, and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' via Syndrome's evil making machine and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero (though a far darker more amoral superhero), before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally vile and cruel due to Syndrome's upbringing, showing us that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe, making Violet more of an AntiHero than a true hero.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with, [[spoiler: she's also willing to resort to ''murder'' if her buttons are pressed hard enough as Syndrome finds out]].
* BigSisterInstinct: [[spoiler:Violet grows into this throughout the story, and is even willing to ''murder'' evil supervillains like Syndrome if it means keeping her brothers and parents safe.]]

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Big time, and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' via Syndrome's evil making machine and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero on the spot (though a far darker more amoral superhero), before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally vile and cruel due to Syndrome's upbringing, showing us that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe, making Violet more of an AntiHero than a true hero.hero like her parents.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with, [[spoiler: she's also willing to resort to ''murder'' if her buttons are pressed hard enough as Syndrome later finds out]].
* BigSisterInstinct: [[spoiler:Violet grows into this throughout the story, story and matures into an adult very quickly, and is even willing to ''murder'' evil supervillains like Syndrome if it means keeping her brothers and parents safe.]]



* TheCutie
* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:Violet considers doing this to herself via putting a Force Field inside her own head and engorging it until it burst, only for Dash to talk her down as he breaks down crying. It's ultimately how Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Fields until it violently explodes.]]

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* TheCutie
TheCutie: [[spoiler:Horribly {{Subverted}} as Violet ends up completely broken by the end, despite gaining the confidence to ask a now memory-less Tony out on a date.]]
* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:Violet considers doing this to herself via putting a Force Field inside her own head and engorging it until it burst, only for Dash to talk her down as he breaks down crying.crying, upon realizing his sister doesn't want to be a Super. It's ultimately how Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Fields until it violently explodes.]]



* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down upon hearing the deaths of his parents, but gets over it very quickly due to the nifty gadgets that are at his disposal and becomes disheartened following his failure of the training program, forcing Violet to step up her game.]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon film where Dash snuck off that forced Violet to follow him.

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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down upon hearing the deaths of his parents, parents at the hands of the Mastermind, but gets over it very quickly due to the nifty gadgets that are at his disposal and becomes disheartened following his failure of the training program, forcing Violet to step up her game.]]
* InSpiteOfANail: PointOfDivergence: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon film where Dash snuck off that forced Violet to follow him.



* BerserkButton: Does not take well to finding out that Syndrome successfully turned his own kids against him.

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* BerserkButton: Does not take well to finding out that Syndrome successfully turned his own kids against him.him, he's relieved when [[spoiler:they attack Syndrome.]].



* HeelRealization: Gains a very hard one [[spoiler:right as Syndrome is about to kill her and her husband after they're depowered by the stolen Nullifier and are badly bloodied and injured and her now evil kids arrive to finish the job...only when they attack their boss instead that turns the tide.]]

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* HeelRealization: Gains a very hard one [[spoiler:right as Syndrome is about to kill her and her husband after they're depowered by the stolen Nullifier and are badly bloodied and injured and her now evil kids arrive to finish the job...only when they attack their boss instead that turns the tide.tide to their favor.]]



* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Helen blames herself for treating Violet so horribly after grounding her that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands. She's also deeply disturbed and disheartened when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter kill him brutally in front of her, meaning that Syndrome's death and murder, while committed by Violet ultimately traces back to Helen's grounding of Violet that started the story's events.]]

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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Helen blames herself for treating Violet so horribly after grounding her that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands. She's also deeply disturbed and disheartened when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter own daughter) kill him brutally in front of her, meaning that Syndrome's death and murder, while committed by Violet ultimately traces back to Helen's grounding of Violet that started the story's events.]]



* BigBad:
* BadBoss: Is a nasty one to Violet and Dash, threatening to kill them if they fail their training course (he ultimately doesn't go through with this, seeing as he needs them alive to complete his EvilPlan). He's far more ruthless to Violet due to her anxiety and depression.
* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Syndrome becomes one to Violet and Dash, as he begins to turn her into an Agent of Evil as his personal sidekick, by using her own anxiety and lack of self-confidence against her, he then uses a evil making machine on Violet to fully corrupt her into a villainess.]]

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* BigBad:
BigBad: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be this as usual, and is behind everything. Including kidnapping Bob and Helen to trick Violet into thinking the Mastermind killed them. He's more evil than his film counterpart by a mile.]]
* BadBoss: Is a nasty one to Violet and Dash, threatening to kill them if they fail their training course (he ultimately doesn't go through with this, seeing as he needs them alive to complete his EvilPlan).EvilPlan of converting them into his evil sidekicks). He's far more ruthless to Violet due to her anxiety and depression.
* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Syndrome becomes one to Violet and Dash, as he begins to turn her into an Agent of Evil as his personal sidekick, by using her own anxiety and lack of self-confidence against her, he then uses a evil making machine on Violet to fully corrupt her into a villainess.villainess, Dash on the other hand is far harder seeing as he has a far bigger morale compass than either of them.]]



* KickTheDog: Even moreso than his film self, he outright abuses and treats Violet horribly whenever she slips up during her job by threatening to kill Dash and Jack-Jack in front of her. Though it's done to fuel her rage and anger towards the idea of Supers, [[spoiler:he didn't account on his loyal minion, Mirage betraying him]].

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* KickTheDog: Even moreso than his film self, he outright abuses and treats Violet horribly whenever she slips up during her job by threatening to kill Dash and Jack-Jack in front of her. Though it's done to fuel her rage and anger towards the idea of Supers, [[spoiler:he didn't account on his loyal minion, Mirage betraying him]].him whom he also abused]].



* AdaptationalVillainy: PlayedWith [[spoiler:and ultimately {{Subverted}} by working with the Mastermind]].

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* AdaptationalVillainy: PlayedWith [[spoiler:and ultimately {{Subverted}} confirmed by working with the Mastermind]].more benevolent Mastermind, ensuring Mirage stays a villian]].



* ReformedButNotTamed: [[spoiler:Despite turning against Syndrome in the end, Mirage loves being evil and immediately goes back to being a villain right afterwards with Violet putting a word to set her up working with the Mastermind with the end goal to repeal the Anti-Super laws.]]



* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Just like in the original film.]]

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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Just like in the original film.film, though she's still evil.]]



* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self, [[spoiler:a far less moral superhero, seeing as she brutally murders Syndrome when he threatens to repeat his plans on her family, showing that much like Mirage's own corruption forcing her to stay evil, Violet's willing to kill evil people]].

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self, [[spoiler:a far less moral superhero, seeing as she brutally murders Syndrome when he threatens to repeat his plans on her family, showing that much like Mirage's own corruption forcing her to stay evil, Violet's willing to kill evil people]].
people to keep her family safe]].



* DePowered: [[spoiler:Her Nullifier can do this to all Supers. Violet is the first one to use it on herself, and immediately goes into a maddening protective stance by forcing it on Dash to remove his powers (who continuously dodges the lasers with his Super Speed), after Mirage talks the depowered Violet down over her actions and revealing her parents are alive and gives her a massive pep talk, Violet is able to restore her powers just before Syndrome steals it and uses it on Violet's parents and Frozone.]]
* EvilVersusEvil: Has a nasty rivarly with Syndrome, despite also being a supervillain on the same side, she agrees to help him capture Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl and ultimately turns against him by warning Violet that her boss isn't who he say he is.

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* DePowered: [[spoiler:Her Nullifier can do this to all Supers. Violet is the first one to use it on herself, and immediately goes into a maddening protective stance by forcing it on Dash to remove his powers (who continuously dodges the lasers with his Super Speed), after Mirage talks the depowered Violet down over her actions and revealing her parents are alive and gives her a massive pep talk, Violet is able to restore her powers just before Syndrome steals it and uses it on Violet's parents and Frozone.Frozone, the Mastermind isn't sure why she invented it in the first place for one of her evil schemes, seeing as she isn't willing to kill her enemies unlike Syndrome.]]
* EvilVersusEvil: Has a nasty rivarly with Syndrome, despite also being a supervillain on the same side, side as him, Syndrome uses her as a means to fuel Violet's rage and aggressiveness as he tricks her into believing she agrees to help him capture Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl and killed her parents which is when ultimately turns against him by warning Violet that her boss isn't who he say he is.



* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: [[spoiler:She joins forces with the surviving Supers to bring Syndrome down and ends up hiring Mirage to continue her villainous but noble work on bringing Supers back.]]

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* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: [[spoiler:She joins forces with the surviving Supers to bring Syndrome down upon finding out he sent Violet to kill her rather than arrest her, and ends up hiring Mirage to continue her villainous but noble work on bringing Supers back.]]



* ALighterShadeOfBlack: Despite being a typical supervillainess firmly on the side of Evil, the Mastermind is actually quite cordial with the Parr family (despite being a part of Bob's and Helen's rouges) and even congratulates Violet on stealing her Nullifier on her first attempt, stating that Violet has as big of a potential to surpass both of her parents. [[spoiler:She also warns Violet to not trust anything Syndrome says, which she takes to heart, despite not trusting her.]]

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* ALighterShadeOfBlack: Despite being a typical supervillainess firmly on the side of Evil, the Mastermind is actually quite cordial and noble with the Parr family (despite being a part of Bob's and Helen's rouges) rouges during the Glory Days) and even congratulates Violet on stealing her Nullifier on her first attempt, stating that Violet has as big of a potential to surpass both of her parents. parents as a Super. [[spoiler:She also warns Violet to not trust anything Syndrome says, says (and reveals to her that her parents aren't dead and are being held captive), which she takes to heart, despite not trusting her.her. She also isn't willing to kill and genocide Supers unlike Syndrome.]]


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* RedHerring: Syndrome tricks Violet into believing she's the one who killed her parents, [[spoiler:in reality he kidnapped them when Helen arrived to free Bob and got captured herself, they only managed to escape thanks to Frozone with the Mastermind telling Violet everything.]]
* RetiredMonster: [[spoiler:The story reveals the Anti-Super laws also forced the numerous supervillains such as herself, Bomb Voyage and the Underminer into retirement as well, which the Mastermind hates with a passion.]]

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Big time, and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero (though a far darker more amoral superhero), before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally vile and cruel due to Syndrome's upbringing, showing us that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe, making this Violet more of an AntiHero who's nearly borderline evil.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with, [[spoiler: she's also willing to resort to ''murder'' if her buttons are pressed hard enough]].
* BigSisterInstinct: [[spoiler:Violet grows into this throughout the story, and is even willing to ''murder'' evil supervillains like Syndrome if it means keeping her brothers safe.]]

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Big time, and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' via Syndrome's evil making machine and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero (though a far darker more amoral superhero), before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally vile and cruel due to Syndrome's upbringing, showing us that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe, making this Violet more of an AntiHero who's nearly borderline evil.than a true hero.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with, [[spoiler: she's also willing to resort to ''murder'' if her buttons are pressed hard enough]].
enough as Syndrome finds out]].
* BigSisterInstinct: [[spoiler:Violet grows into this throughout the story, and is even willing to ''murder'' evil supervillains like Syndrome if it means keeping her brothers and parents safe.]]



* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:How Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Fields until it violently explodes.]]

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* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:How [[spoiler:Violet considers doing this to herself via putting a Force Field inside her own head and engorging it until it burst, only for Dash to talk her down as he breaks down crying. It's ultimately how Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Fields until it violently explodes.]]



* DrivenToSuicide: Violet considers killing herself at one point in the story after her first Omnidroid battle, via blowing her own head up like a balloon and bursting it. Dash talks her out of it once he realizes Violet doesn't want to continue heroics.



* InSpiteOfANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon where Dash snuck off that forced Violet to follow him.

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* InSpiteOfANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon film where Dash snuck off that forced Violet to follow him.



* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do (with the first film keeping Helen's development off-screen and despite her being the protagonist of the sequel). This is due to greater focus on her fragile relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.

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* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do (with the first film keeping Helen's development off-screen and despite her being the protagonist of the sequel).sequel where only her job got developed). This is due to greater focus on her fragile relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.



* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Helen blames herself for treating Violet so horribly after grounding her that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands. She's also deeply disturbed and disheartened when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter kill him brutally in front of her, meaning that Syndrome's death and murder, while committed by Violet ultimately traces back to Helen's grounding of Violet.]]

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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Helen blames herself for treating Violet so horribly after grounding her that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands. She's also deeply disturbed and disheartened when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter kill him brutally in front of her, meaning that Syndrome's death and murder, while committed by Violet ultimately traces back to Helen's grounding of Violet.Violet that started the story's events.]]



* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Syndrome becomes one to Violet and Dash, as he begins to turn her into an Agent of Evil as his personal sidekick, by using her own anxiety and lack of self-confidence against her.]]

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* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Syndrome becomes one to Violet and Dash, as he begins to turn her into an Agent of Evil as his personal sidekick, by using her own anxiety and lack of self-confidence against her.her, he then uses a evil making machine on Violet to fully corrupt her into a villainess.]]



* PopGoesTheHuman: [[spoiler:Syndrome's fate is this via DeadlyForceField thanks to Violet, with her popping his head clean off with her Force Fields enlarging his head until it burst.]]



* ALighterShadeOfBlack: Despite being a typical supervillainess firmly on the side of Evil, the Mastermind is actually quite cordial with the Parr family (despite being a part of Bob's and Helen's rouges) and even congratulates Violet on stealing her Nullifier on her first attempt, stating that Violet has as big of a potential to surpass both of her parents. [[spoiler:She also warns Violet to not trust anything Syndrome says, which she takes to heart.]]

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* ALighterShadeOfBlack: Despite being a typical supervillainess firmly on the side of Evil, the Mastermind is actually quite cordial with the Parr family (despite being a part of Bob's and Helen's rouges) and even congratulates Violet on stealing her Nullifier on her first attempt, stating that Violet has as big of a potential to surpass both of her parents. [[spoiler:She also warns Violet to not trust anything Syndrome says, which she takes to heart.heart, despite not trusting her.]]

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!! Dashiell Robert Parr/The Dash

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!! Dashiell Robert "Robert" Parr/The Dash



* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down upon hearing the deaths of his parents, and becomes disheartened following his failure of the training program, forcing Violet to step up her game.]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon scene where Dash snuck off that forced Violet to follow him.

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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down upon hearing the deaths of his parents, but gets over it very quickly due to the nifty gadgets that are at his disposal and becomes disheartened following his failure of the training program, forcing Violet to step up her game.]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon scene where Dash snuck off that forced Violet to follow him.



!! John Jackson Parr/Jack-Jack
* AdaptationalBadass: Moreso than his film counterpart, seeing as he has all 17 of his powers from ''WesternAnimation/Incredibles2'' right off rather than a select few as in the first film.
* BadassAdorable: As usual.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Joins his enraged sister Violet in crushing Syndrome when he arrives to kidnap him.]]



* DemotedToExtra: Not demoted, but more or less swapped roles with his daughter Violet who's takes over the role.
* PapaWolf: Does not take to having his own kids turned evil too well with him threatening to murder Syndrome.

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* DemotedToExtra: Not demoted, but more or less swapped roles with his daughter Violet who's who takes over the role.
role he had in the film's second half.
* PapaWolf: Does not take to having his own kids turned evil too well with him threatening to murder Syndrome.Syndrome, even without his powers.



* AdaptationalJerkass: Far more ruder and punishing to Violet and Dash compared to her canonical self. Her entire character arch is overcoming her faults as a mother.
* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do (with the first film keeping Helen's development off-screen). This is due to greater focus on her relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.
* HeelRealization: Gains a very hard one [[spoiler:right as Syndrome is about to kill her and her husband after they're depowered by the stolen Nullifier and her now evil kids arrive to finish the job...only when they attack their boss instead.]]
* MamaBear: Does not take to hearing the news that her own kids are now her hated enemies very well to the point that she's all too willing to murder Syndrome.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Helen blames herself for treating Violet horribly that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands, she's also deeply disturbed and disheartened when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter kill him brutally.]]

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Far more ruder and punishing to Violet and Dash compared to her canonical self.self (who was more well meaning). Her entire character arch is overcoming her faults as a mother.
* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do (with the first film keeping Helen's development off-screen). off-screen and despite her being the protagonist of the sequel). This is due to greater focus on her fragile relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.
* HeelRealization: Gains a very hard one [[spoiler:right as Syndrome is about to kill her and her husband after they're depowered by the stolen Nullifier and are badly bloodied and injured and her now evil kids arrive to finish the job...only when they attack their boss instead.instead that turns the tide.]]
* MamaBear: Does not take to hearing the news that her own kids are now her hated enemies very well to the point that she's all too willing to murder Syndrome.
Syndrome, even when she's depowered.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Helen [[spoiler:Helen blames herself for treating Violet so horribly after grounding her that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands, she's hands. She's also deeply disturbed and disheartened when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter kill him brutally.brutally in front of her, meaning that Syndrome's death and murder, while committed by Violet ultimately traces back to Helen's grounding of Violet.]]

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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:Her ability to change her voice to sound just like the Mastermind is what ultimately what helps bring Syndrome down.]]

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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:Her ability to change her voice to sound just like the Mastermind over the phone is what ultimately what helps bring Syndrome down.]]
* VoiceChangeling: [[spoiler:Lucy is a huge voice impersonator that she's able to completely fool Syndrome into thinking she's the Mastermind, unaware that the Mastermind isn't only battling Violet, but was beginning to betray him.
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!! Lucius Best/Frozone
* BestFriends: With Bob Parr.
* DemotedToExtra: Doesn't get a lot of focus compared to his film counterpart.
!! Lucy Best
* BadassAdorable: Like Uncle, like Niece. Though Lucy lacks superpowers, but is a skilled vocal impersonator, [[spoiler: which is enough to outright fool Syndrome into thinking she's the Mastermind (whom the real deal was busy fighting Violet), which plays a major role in freeing Bob and Helen and eventually Syndrome's death.]]
* CanonForeigner: She is Frozone's popular niece and only appears in the book.
* PopularGirl: Is one of the most popular girls in Westview Jr. High if Violet's words are taken at face value.
* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:Her ability to change her voice to sound just like the Mastermind is what ultimately what helps bring Syndrome down.]]

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* EvilAunt:

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* EvilAunt:EvilAunt: To Snow White, in addition to being a bad stepmother.



* PointOfDivergence: Since she didn't kidnap Rapunzel here, she isn't a fugitive from the kingdom here.









* BigBad

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* BigBadBigBad:






* EvilVsEvil: Has a nasty rivarly with Syndrome, despite also being a supervillain on the same side, she agrees to help him capture Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl and ultimately turns against him by warning Violet that her boss isn't who he say he is.

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* EvilVsEvil: EvilVersusEvil: Has a nasty rivarly with Syndrome, despite also being a supervillain on the same side, she agrees to help him capture Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl and ultimately turns against him by warning Violet that her boss isn't who he say he is.



* RebelliousPrincess

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* RebelliousPrincessRebelliousPrincess:
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down following his failure of the training program
* ForWantANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon scene where Dash snuck off that made Violet follow him.

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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down upon hearing the deaths of his parents, and becomes disheartened following his failure of the training program
program, forcing Violet to step up her game.]]
* ForWantANail: InSpiteOfANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon scene where Dash snuck off that made forced Violet to follow him.



* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Helen blames herself for treating Violet horribly that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands, she's also deeply disturbed when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter kills him brutally.]]

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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Helen blames herself for treating Violet horribly that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands, she's also deeply disturbed and disheartened when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter kills kill him brutally.]]

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* BadBoss: Is a nasty one to Violet and Dash, threatening to kill them if they fail their training course (he ultimately doesn't go through with this, seeing as he needs them alive). He's far more ruthless to Violet due to her anxiety and depression.

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* BadBoss: Is a nasty one to Violet and Dash, threatening to kill them if they fail their training course (he ultimately doesn't go through with this, seeing as he needs them alive).alive to complete his EvilPlan). He's far more ruthless to Violet due to her anxiety and depression.



* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters

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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Just like in the original film.]]



* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self, [[spoiler:a far less moral superhero, seeing as she brutally murders Syndrome when he threatens to repeat his plans on her family, showing that much like Mirage's own corruption, Violet's willing to kill evil people]].

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self, [[spoiler:a far less moral superhero, seeing as she brutally murders Syndrome when he threatens to repeat his plans on her family, showing that much like Mirage's own corruption, corruption forcing her to stay evil, Violet's willing to kill evil people]].



* DePowered: [[spoiler:Her Nullifier can do this to all Supers. Violet is the first one to use it on herself, and immediately goes into a maddening protective stance by forcing it on Dash to remove his powers (who continuously dodges the lasers with his Super Speed), after Mirage talks the depowered Violet down over her actions and revealing her parents are alive and gives her a massive pep talk, Violet is able to restore her powers just before Syndrome steals it and uses it on Violet's parents and Frozone.]]



* GadgeteerGenuis: [[spoiler:She's the inventor of the Nullifier which can strip Supers of their powers, and Syndrome orders Violet to steal it for him so he can use it to kill Violet's parents.]]

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* GadgeteerGenuis: GadgeteerGenius: [[spoiler:She's the inventor of the Nullifier which can strip Supers of their powers, and Syndrome orders Violet to steal it for him so he can use it to kill Violet's parents.parents once they're depowered.]]



* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Despite being the Nullifier's inventor, the Mastermind doesn't get any punishment for the attempted kidnapping and bombing attack, unless the Parrs come into direct conflict with her.]]

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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Despite being the Nullifier's inventor, the Mastermind doesn't get any punishment for the attempted successful kidnapping and bombing attack, unless the Parrs come into direct conflict with her.]]
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self.

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self.self, [[spoiler:a far less moral superhero, seeing as she brutally murders Syndrome when he threatens to repeat his plans on her family, showing that much like Mirage's own corruption, Violet's willing to kill evil people]].
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Big time, and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero, though not before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally corrupt due to Syndrome's upbringing, meaning that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe, making this Violet more of an AntiHero.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with, [[spoiler: she's also willing to resort to ''murder'' if her buttons are pressed]].

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Big time, and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero, though not superhero (though a far darker more amoral superhero), before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally corrupt vile and cruel due to Syndrome's upbringing, meaning showing us that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe, making this Violet more of an AntiHero.AntiHero who's nearly borderline evil.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with, [[spoiler: she's also willing to resort to ''murder'' if her buttons are pressed]].pressed hard enough]].



* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Being told that your parents are dead, being forced to work for a mad supervillain who was once your father's biggest fan and survive his deadly Omnidroids during your training and commit a theft of a rival villian's Nullifier. It's no wonder Violet snaps and kills her former boss in cold blood which ends up scarring her for life.]]
* CharacterDevelopment: Goes from a shy, non-confident teenage girl with severe social anxiety, depression, to a powerful confident superhero at the end, even though Violet was [[spoiler:forced to murder Syndrome.]]
* ChildrenForcedToKill: [[spoiler:''Violet'' murders Syndrome in cold blood.]]

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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Being told that your parents are dead, being forced to work for a mad supervillain who was once your father's biggest fan and survive his deadly Omnidroids during your training and commit a theft of a rival villian's Nullifier. It's no wonder Violet finally snaps and kills her former boss in cold blood which ends up scarring her for life.]]
* CharacterDevelopment: Goes from a shy, non-confident teenage girl with severe social anxiety, depression, to a powerful confident superhero at the end, even though Violet was [[spoiler:forced to murder Syndrome.Syndrome, which ends up traumatizing her for life.]]
* ChildrenForcedToKill: [[spoiler:''Violet'' murders Syndrome in cold blood.blood by popping his head like a overinflated balloon with her Force Fields.]]



* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:How Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Field and bursting it.]]

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* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:How Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Field and bursting it.Fields until it violently explodes.]]



** [[spoiler:Happens during the FinalBattle when Violet is in the middle of delivering a nasty NoHoldsBeatdown on Syndrome, using the same words from the earlier conversation. Unlike last time, it doesn't stick as Violet murders Syndrome in a cold blooded rage.]]
* IJustWantToBeNormal: To darker extremes unlike the film, Violet is willing to commit suicide if it means she lacks superpowers, [[spoiler:she uses the stolen Nullifier to accomplish her dream life, only to realize the price she paid was losing support from Dash]].

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** [[spoiler:Happens during the FinalBattle when Violet is in the middle of delivering a nasty NoHoldsBeatdown on Syndrome, with Mirage using the same words from the earlier conversation. conversation to keep Violet doing the deed. Unlike the last time, it doesn't stick as Violet murders Syndrome herself in a cold blooded rage.rage due to her abuse at his hands.]]
* IJustWantToBeNormal: To darker extremes unlike the film, Violet is actually willing to commit suicide if it means she lacks superpowers, [[spoiler:she uses the stolen Nullifier to accomplish her dream life, life and removes her powers, and she quickly goes mad with removing other Superheroes of their powers starting with Dash only to realize the price she paid was losing complete support from Dash]].Dash, who walks away from her for good, over seeing her turn into a darker version of her mom]].



* AdaptationalBadass: Almost as much as his sister.

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* AdaptationalBadass: Almost as much as his sister. [[spoiler:He doesn't last long during the Omnidroid training.]]



* BadassAdorable
* BreakTheCutie
* ForWantANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon scene where Dash snuck off.

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* BadassAdorable
BadassAdorable: Just like his film self.
* BreakTheCutie
BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:He breaks down following his failure of the training program
* ForWantANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon scene where Dash snuck off.off that made Violet follow him.



* HeelRealization: Gains a very hard one [[spoiler:right as Syndrome is about to kill her and her husband after they're depowered by the stolen Nullifier and her now evil kids arrive to finish the job.]]

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* HeelRealization: Gains a very hard one [[spoiler:right as Syndrome is about to kill her and her husband after they're depowered by the stolen Nullifier and her now evil kids arrive to finish the job.job...only when they attack their boss instead.]]



* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Helen blames herself for treating Violet horribly that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands.]]

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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Helen blames herself for treating Violet horribly that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands.hands, she's also deeply disturbed when she witnesses Violet (her own) daughter kills him brutally.]]



* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Much like in the film Syndrome dies, this time dying to his biggest fan's own daughter whom he abused horribly against her will, threatening to kidnap your baby brother to use as a weapon and kill your parents will do that.]]
* KickTheDog: Even moreso than his film self, he outright abuses and treats Violet horribly whenever she slips up during her job by threatening to kill Dash and Jack-Jack. Though it's done to fuel her rage and anger towards the idea of Supers, [[spoiler:he didn't account on his loyal minion, Mirage betraying him]].

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Much like in the film Syndrome dies, this time dying to his biggest fan's own daughter whom he abused horribly against her will, threatening to kidnap your baby brother to use as a weapon and kill your parents entire family will do that.]]
* KickTheDog: Even moreso than his film self, he outright abuses and treats Violet horribly whenever she slips up during her job by threatening to kill Dash and Jack-Jack.Jack-Jack in front of her. Though it's done to fuel her rage and anger towards the idea of Supers, [[spoiler:he didn't account on his loyal minion, Mirage betraying him]].
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* ForWantANail: Dash finding out that Violet's the one babysitting him instead of the despicable Mrs. Caruso forces him to not attempt to sneak off on the jet plane Helen borrows. Implying Caruso was likely the babysitter in the canon scene where Dash snuck off.


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!!The Mastermind
* CanonForeigner: Was created only for the book and doesn't appear in the films.
* EvilVsEvil: Has a nasty rivarly with Syndrome, despite also being a supervillain on the same side, she agrees to help him capture Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl and ultimately turns against him by warning Violet that her boss isn't who he say he is.
* GadgeteerGenuis: [[spoiler:She's the inventor of the Nullifier which can strip Supers of their powers, and Syndrome orders Violet to steal it for him so he can use it to kill Violet's parents.]]
* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: [[spoiler:She joins forces with the surviving Supers to bring Syndrome down and ends up hiring Mirage to continue her villainous but noble work on bringing Supers back.]]
* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Despite being the Nullifier's inventor, the Mastermind doesn't get any punishment for the attempted kidnapping and bombing attack, unless the Parrs come into direct conflict with her.]]
* ALighterShadeOfBlack: Despite being a typical supervillainess firmly on the side of Evil, the Mastermind is actually quite cordial with the Parr family (despite being a part of Bob's and Helen's rouges) and even congratulates Violet on stealing her Nullifier on her first attempt, stating that Violet has as big of a potential to surpass both of her parents. [[spoiler:She also warns Violet to not trust anything Syndrome says, which she takes to heart.]]
* PetTheDog: Properly gives Violet major props on stealing her Nullifier and [[spoiler: even thanks her and her family for returning it after Syndrome dies. With Violet convincing her to hire Mirage to help repeal the now irreversible banning of Supers]].

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* DemotedToExtra: Not demoted, but more or less swapped roles with his daughter Violet.
* TheMacGauffin: Becomes the end goal for Syndrome's plans, thankfully Violet and Dash arrive in time to prevent their parents and Frozone from getting killed.

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* DemotedToExtra: Not demoted, but more or less swapped roles with his daughter Violet.
* TheMacGauffin: Becomes the end goal for Syndrome's plans, thankfully
Violet and Dash arrive in time to prevent their parents and Frozone from getting killed.who's takes over the role.



* AdaptationalJerkass: Far more ruder and punishing to Violet and Dash compared to her canonical self. This becomes her entire arch.
* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do. This is due to greater focus on her relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Far more ruder and punishing to Violet and Dash compared to her canonical self. This becomes her Her entire arch.
character arch is overcoming her faults as a mother.
* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do.do (with the first film keeping Helen's development off-screen). This is due to greater focus on her relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.



* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Helen blames herself for treating Violet horribly that lead to her, Dash and Jack-Jack falling into Syndrome's hands.]]



* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Syndrome becomes one to Violet and Dash, as he begins to turn her into an Agent of Evil as his personal sidekick, by using her own anxiety and lack of self-confidence against her.]]



* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Much like in the film Syndrome dies, this time to his biggest fan's own daughter whom he abused horribly against her will, threatening to kidnap your baby brother and kill your parents will do that.]]
* KickTheDog: Even moreso than his film self, he outright abuses and treats Violet horribly whenever she slips up during her job. Though it's done to fuel her rage and anger towards the idea of Supers.

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Much like in the film Syndrome dies, this time dying to his biggest fan's own daughter whom he abused horribly against her will, threatening to kidnap your baby brother to use as a weapon and kill your parents will do that.]]
* KickTheDog: Even moreso than his film self, he outright abuses and treats Violet horribly whenever she slips up during her job. job by threatening to kill Dash and Jack-Jack. Though it's done to fuel her rage and anger towards the idea of Supers.Supers, [[spoiler:he didn't account on his loyal minion, Mirage betraying him]].

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* AdaptationalVillainy: PlayedWith [[spoiler:and ultimately {{Subverted}} by working with the Mastermind]]

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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Mirage reveals to Violet that she wanted to be an actress before becoming Syndrome's loyal lackey and dreams of doing so once she quits working for Syndrome, ultimately her boss's corruption causes her to work with the far less villainous [[spoiler:Mastermind]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: PlayedWith [[spoiler:and ultimately {{Subverted}} by working with the Mastermind]]Mastermind]].



* TeamMom: Forced to become one in order to protect Violet, Dash and Jack-Jack. [[spoiler:She's the glue that keeps Violet and Dash from going off on the deep end.]]
* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: [[spoiler:She's still an antagonist despite being the one to ultimately end Syndrome's plans. She ends up working with the Mastermind]].

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* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: [[spoiler:She's still an antagonist despite being the one to ultimately end Syndrome's plans and sides with the surviving Supers against him. She ends up working with the Mastermind, who's far more benevolent by comparison]].
* TeamMom: Forced to become one in order to protect Violet, Dash and Jack-Jack. [[spoiler:She's ultimately the glue that keeps Violet and Dash from truly going off on the deep end.]]
* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: [[spoiler:She's still an antagonist despite being the one to ultimately end Syndrome's plans. She ends up working with the Mastermind]].
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* AdaptionalJerkass: Far more ruder and punishing to Violet and Dash compared to her canonical self. This becomes her entire arch.

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* AdaptionalJerkass: AdaptationalJerkass: Far more ruder and punishing to Violet and Dash compared to her canonical self. This becomes her entire arch.
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* TheMcGauffin: Becomes the end goal for Syndrome's plans, thankfully Violet and Dash arrive in time to prevent their parents and Luciuis from getting killed.

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* TheMcGauffin: TheMacGauffin: Becomes the end goal for Syndrome's plans, thankfully Violet and Dash arrive in time to prevent their parents and Luciuis Frozone from getting killed.



* AdaptionalJerkAss: Far more ruder and punishing to Violet and Dash compared to her canonical self. This becomes her entire arch.

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* AdaptationalVillainly: [[spoiler:Big time, and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero, though not before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally corrupt due to Syndrome's upbringing, meaning that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe, making this Violet more of an AntiHero.]]

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* AdaptationalVillainly: AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Big time, and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero, though not before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally corrupt due to Syndrome's upbringing, meaning that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe, making this Violet more of an AntiHero.]]



* AdaptationalVillainly: Nowhere near as much as his sister Violet, seeing as he has a far bigger resolve to be a hero than his sister.

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* AdaptationalVillainly: AdaptationalVillainy: Nowhere near as much as his sister Violet, seeing as he has a far bigger resolve to be a hero than his sister.



* AdaptationalVillainly: PlayedWith [[spoiler:and ultimately {{Subverted}} by working with the Mastermind]]

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* AdaptationalVillainly: [[spoiler:Big time, though she switches back to being a superhero by the end, though not before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally corrupt due to Syndrome's upbringing, meaning that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with.
* BigSisterInstinct: [[spoiler:Violet grows into this throughout the story, and is even willing to ''murder'' if it means keeping her brothers safe.]]
* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Being told that your parents are dead, being forced to work for a mad supervillain who was once your father's biggest fan and survive his deadly Omnidroids during your training and commit a theft of a rival villian's Nullifier. It's no wonder Violet snaps and kills her former boss in cold blood.]]

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* AdaptationalVillainly: [[spoiler:Big time, though and near the climax, Violet actually turns ''evil'' and it looked to be permanent when she arrives to assist Syndrome, but upon seeing her parents nearly dead at his footsteps she switches back to being a superhero by the end, superhero, though not before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally corrupt due to Syndrome's upbringing, meaning that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe.safe, making this Violet more of an AntiHero.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with.
with, [[spoiler: she's also willing to resort to ''murder'' if her buttons are pressed]].
* BigSisterInstinct: [[spoiler:Violet grows into this throughout the story, and is even willing to ''murder'' evil supervillains like Syndrome if it means keeping her brothers safe.]]
* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Being told that your parents are dead, being forced to work for a mad supervillain who was once your father's biggest fan and survive his deadly Omnidroids during your training and commit a theft of a rival villian's Nullifier. It's no wonder Violet snaps and kills her former boss in cold blood.blood which ends up scarring her for life.]]
* CharacterDevelopment: Goes from a shy, non-confident teenage girl with severe social anxiety, depression, to a powerful confident superhero at the end, even though Violet was [[spoiler:forced to murder Syndrome.
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* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:How Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Field and bursting it.]]

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* TheCutie
* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:How Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end of the story by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Field and bursting it.]]]]
* TheDogBitesBack
* HeelRealization: Gains two of them during the story, thanks to Mirage:
** [[spoiler:Violet being told that she's acting exactly like her mom than she wants to admit after removing her powers and is shown when she tries to forcefully remove Dash's powers with the Nullifier, causes Violet to break down sobbing that allows her to reconcile with Dash who overheard the entire conversation.]]
** [[spoiler:Happens during the FinalBattle when Violet is in the middle of delivering a nasty NoHoldsBeatdown on Syndrome, using the same words from the earlier conversation. Unlike last time, it doesn't stick as Violet murders Syndrome in a cold blooded rage.]]
* IJustWantToBeNormal: To darker extremes unlike the film, Violet is willing to commit suicide if it means she lacks superpowers, [[spoiler:she uses the stolen Nullifier to accomplish her dream life, only to realize the price she paid was losing support from Dash]].
* JumpedAtTheCall: Unlike her father who took a minute to decide to take Syndrome's job offer, Violet accepts it without hesitation once she finds out her parents are dead.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: On the giving end.
* YouAreGrounded: [[spoiler:What kicks Violet's story off is when she ends up at a teenage party (in an attempt to woo Tony, who's also there), only for her social anxiety, depression and the added peer pressure causing her to turn invisible in front of the entire party and scaring them off, not before being labeled a freak. Helen immediately grounds Violet indefinitely for the action that causes a massive argument between them and Helen grounds her further by threatening to have the nasty Mrs. Caruso babysit them, only for Violet to accept the lesser punishment of watching her siblings herself as Helen leaves to find Bob.]]
!! Dashiell Robert Parr/The Dash
* AdaptationalBadass: Almost as much as his sister.
* AdaptationalVillainly: Nowhere near as much as his sister Violet, seeing as he has a far bigger resolve to be a hero than his sister.
* BadassAdorable
* BreakTheCutie
!! Robert "Bob" Parr/Mr. Incredible
* BerserkButton: Does not take well to finding out that Syndrome successfully turned his own kids against him.
* DemotedToExtra: Not demoted, but more or less swapped roles with his daughter Violet.
* TheMcGauffin: Becomes the end goal for Syndrome's plans, thankfully Violet and Dash arrive in time to prevent their parents and Luciuis from getting killed.
* PapaWolf: Does not take to having his own kids turned evil too well with him threatening to murder Syndrome.
!! Helen "Turax" Parr/Elastigirl
* AdaptionalJerkAss: Far more ruder and punishing to Violet and Dash compared to her canonical self. This becomes her entire arch.
* CharacterDevelopment: The story does a far better job of actually developing Helen than either the first or second films do. This is due to greater focus on her relationship with the kids which the first film (of which this alternate story is a DarkerAndEdgier take on the first film's events) lacked.
* HeelRealization: Gains a very hard one [[spoiler:right as Syndrome is about to kill her and her husband after they're depowered by the stolen Nullifier and her now evil kids arrive to finish the job.]]
* MamaBear: Does not take to hearing the news that her own kids are now her hated enemies very well to the point that she's all too willing to murder Syndrome.
!! Buddy Pine/Syndrome
* BigBad
* BadBoss: Is a nasty one to Violet and Dash, threatening to kill them if they fail their training course (he ultimately doesn't go through with this, seeing as he needs them alive). He's far more ruthless to Violet due to her anxiety and depression.
* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:On the receiving end, thanks to Violet]].
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Much like in the film Syndrome dies, this time to his biggest fan's own daughter whom he abused horribly against her will, threatening to kidnap your baby brother and kill your parents will do that.]]
* KickTheDog: Even moreso than his film self, he outright abuses and treats Violet horribly whenever she slips up during her job. Though it's done to fuel her rage and anger towards the idea of Supers.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: On the receiving end before Violet kills him.
!!Mirage
* AdaptationalVillainly: PlayedWith [[spoiler:and ultimately {{Subverted}} by working with the Mastermind]]
* CharacterDevelopment: Gains arguably the biggest one
* TeamMom: Forced to become one in order to protect Violet, Dash and Jack-Jack. [[spoiler:She's the glue that keeps Violet and Dash from going off on the deep end.]]
*HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: [[spoiler:She's still an antagonist despite being the one to ultimately end Syndrome's plans. She ends up working with the Mastermind]].
* WhatTheHellHero: Mirage gives a nasty one to Violet. [[spoiler:Though it plays a critical role in Violet reforming back into a superhero.]] [[spoiler:She also slams Violet for killing Syndrome]].
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Gives a heartfelt one to Violet that reforms her back to her heroic self.
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!! Violet Parr
* AdaptationalBadass: Violet's powers are far more powerful here compared to her film counterpart's, who struggled hard with one of Syndrome's guards (and had to result to using a large tree branch to knock him out) and especially her battle with Voyd from the second film. To top it off, [[spoiler:Violet survives her entire training regimen with Syndrome's Omnidroids without any formal training on her own (including against V8 and V9 who gave her father Mr. Incredible major trouble), which unlocks her powers to it's full potential, and she also brutally kills ''Syndrome'']].
* AdaptationalVillainly: [[spoiler:Big time, though she switches back to being a superhero by the end, though not before killing Syndrome in cold blood, showing that this Violet is far more morally corrupt due to Syndrome's upbringing, meaning that this Violet is not afraid to commit murder on supervillains if it means keeping her family safe.]]
* BadassAdorable: Violet is downright adorable, but isn't one to be messed with.
* BigSisterInstinct: [[spoiler:Violet grows into this throughout the story, and is even willing to ''murder'' if it means keeping her brothers safe.]]
* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Being told that your parents are dead, being forced to work for a mad supervillain who was once your father's biggest fan and survive his deadly Omnidroids during your training and commit a theft of a rival villian's Nullifier. It's no wonder Violet snaps and kills her former boss in cold blood.]]
* ChildrenForcedToKill: [[spoiler:''Violet'' murders Syndrome in cold blood.]]
* DeadlyForceField: [[spoiler:How Violet brutally murders Syndrome at the end by blowing his head up like a balloon with her Force Field and bursting it.]]
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* EvilPlan: Raise Rapunzel as a weapon and sell her to the highest bidder.

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* TheHighQueen
* NamedintheAdaptation: She is named Katherine.
* RelatedintheAdaptation: She and the Evil Queen are sisters in the book, making Snow White's stepmother also her EvilAunt.

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* NamedintheAdaptation: NamedIntheAdaptation: She is named Katherine.
* RelatedintheAdaptation: RelatedIntheAdaptation: She and the Evil Queen are sisters in the book, making Snow White's stepmother also her EvilAunt.



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* AllLovingHero

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* AdaptationalKarma: In the film, the Coachman gets off scot-free, but in this book, the good fairies punish him by turning him into a donkey.

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* AdaptationalKarma: In the film, the Coachman gets off scot-free, but in this book, the good fairies punish him by turning him into [[KarmicTransformation a donkey.donkey]].



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* DistractedByMyOwnSexy: When she first goes to see the king and queen, Gothel is distracted by her own shadow cast upon the wall.

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