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I greatly enjoyed this piece, as short as it is. One of the wonderful things about Psychonauts was how every character, no matter how minor, had a distinct personality; and this one does an excellent job of maintaining that. The prose is also good, and the pacing, while a bit shaky at times, is more or less acceptable. I think the biggest criticism I have of it is simply that I want a bit more of it; but as it stands, it's a solid slice.
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