Comments : At first glance, this fic seems to have Curb stomp battle written all over it, inside it and everywhere around it, but that's only if you don't go deeper than the first chapter. We find out pretty early that Louise's familiars aren't as unbelievably overpowered as they used to be. The chosen familiars themselves adds a layer of symbolism into the plot, which hasn't gone unnoticed by readers and reviewers, and it's only made better by the fact that all four have different familiar runes. The apparent power limiters, along with the choice of characters and the cast of Zero no Tsukaima gives this story a lot of good future potential. The grammar and spelling isn't all bad either. It could be better, but it's not horrible.
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