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Strong grasp on characterization of the cast. Some inventive ideas (wishes made, solutions to conflict, twists). Has an action/adventure approach with significant drama/character development. Some flaws. Frustrates regular shipping patterns credibly and ships well. De-emphasizes Homura and makes her less sympathetic. Avoids the common basic mistakes of fanfic. Overall a B grade effort, but the strong points are strong enough to distinguish it from the crowd.
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