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I have to say, it's really not very good. The abuse is rather overstated, and the spelling errors are glaring. However, I do agree that it humanizes Aunt Marge, and makes her into a far better person than the books made her seem.
I just don't think that in the books the Dursleys abused Harry that much. In this story it seems like Vernon is constantly beating Harry and the Dursleys don't let Harry eat "normal people food"
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