Pszczola
Since: Jan, 2001
10/15/2012 15:11:33
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FanficRecs Comment by Geckogirl191
This fic parodies clichéd romantic stories, as well as various popular fanfic genres. It tends to go into the hilarious kind of Mind Screw as well, especially when you get to read Goemon's fanfics. The zaniness just goes on and when Zenigata steps in, prepare for the most meta moment in fanfic history...
FanficRecs Great concept, weak execution
The parody elements are there, as well as a decent familiarity with the cast personalities. The pop-culture references are a bit overdone, likely to make the work dated in a decade, and the grammar/syntax needs improvement.
If you don't mind reading a first draft, the story is enjoyable.