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White Sheep starts as a fun crackfic. Featuring Salem being the matron of the Arc family, with Jaune as the sheltered and idealistic son that wants to follow in his father's heroic footsteps, rather than the evil overlord (and grand baby maker) as Salem would prefer, and the various canon villains slotted into more comedic roles that portrays the world of RWBY in a much more ambiguous light than the canon Goodvs Evil.
Sadly it doesn't last.
About a quarter into the story White Sheep loses sight of it's comedic tone and unintentional Harem teasing antics for more serious relationship and plot themes. The attempt at humor is still there, but never regains it's original tone and suffers heavily in going back and forth from comedy to seriousness and back again.
Worse as Jaune's motivations constantly shift, with becoming a Huntsman being the driving force early in the story, till it's replaced by a desire to protect his friends from his own relations, and a vague ideal to bring peace to the world that doesn't become relevant till the last stretch of the story, and where the events of Vol 4-5 are driven by rescuing a damsel in distress only for the story to be dragged out by another damsel in distress immediately after.
The greatest flaws, however, are how several earlier story, characters, and joke threads are created and subsequently abandoned in the first half, the jokes that do linger are dragged out without the same circumstances giving them humor and have no pay off in the end, the early characters reader's invested in are Put On A Bus if they aren't featured in later canon Volumes, and the author eventually settled for a rehashing of RWBY's canon story up to Vol 5 with the latter half merely serving as a means for cheap criticism of canon's various plot points, rather than genuine comedy.
All in all White Sheep is a story that lost sight of what it was about early, never recovered, and dragged on longer than was justified. Easily one of the worst fics written by the author, it's highly recommended readers skip this one, as a single consistent read through is likely to invoke disappointment rather than humor.
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