I honestly couldn't get past...I'm not sure which Chapter. All I know is that it was the one with the church and shit.
The Action is all over the place and is never properly described, making understanding what's going on difficult.
The Doomguy talks. It's sparing, but he still talks.
He loses his signature chainsaw for a "greatsword chainsaw" which is not only completely out of the realm of continuity for RWBY (it's melee weapon + gun, not this).
He apparently was captured by Aegis before the fic started, relatively easily considering they... Read More
Its a pretty good fic with interesting dynamics between the characters and the doom slayer. The only problems are with the doom slayer's character just being B.J. Blascowic from Wolfenstein: the New Colossus, including having the same name and similar family backstories
A "Meh" Read for me
I honestly couldn't get past...I'm not sure which Chapter. All I know is that it was the one with the church and shit.
The Action is all over the place and is never properly described, making understanding what's going on difficult.
The Doomguy talks. It's sparing, but he still talks.
He loses his signature chainsaw for a "greatsword chainsaw" which is not only completely out of the realm of continuity for RWBY (it's melee weapon + gun, not this).
He apparently was captured by Aegis before the fic started, relatively easily considering they... Read More