I found this fanfic enjoyable, with just enough plot to make the lengthy read a worthy one. However the focus is on the romance, and while I enjoyed that part immensely, the way it outshone the actual plot created a sort of dissonance that makes it impossible to get invested into in comparison to a full romance.
Obviously, the romance is the best part. This would be one of my favourite fanfics of all time if the plot was cut out, or at least made a more minor part of the story. Nick and Judy's voices and interactions are on point. Most of the... Read More
Good, but not great
I found this fanfic enjoyable, with just enough plot to make the lengthy read a worthy one. However the focus is on the romance, and while I enjoyed that part immensely, the way it outshone the actual plot created a sort of dissonance that makes it impossible to get invested into in comparison to a full romance. Obviously, the romance is the best part. This would be one of my favourite fanfics of all time if the plot was cut out, or at least made a more minor part of the story. Nick and Judy's voices and interactions are on point. Most of the... Read More