Enjoyable
(3000 character limit? Ok, ...)
Enjoyable. A combination of the silly stuff from D&D moved into "a real world", plus real-world people trying to survive in a D&D world. How can the "6 second" actors from D&D manage death eaters who actually improve, improvise, do the unexpected, and change-up their plans as needed to succeed?
Well, book two is very short in this series. The hero's don't win them all, but will they win the end? And who is the hero, the D&D transplant, Harry, or a police officer?
Highly Compelling
The plot flows at first as the exploration of an entity who operates on a different set of world physics than the rest of the setting, with a lot of fun poked at Dungeons and Dragons' mechanical structure and a degree of lighthearted ribbing of infamous 'munchkin' attitude, and keeps that element going strong with the plot gradually shifting to follow a rather farcical existential crisis for poor shallow, min-maxed, roll-playing (and proud of it!) Milo, as he's forced by the scenario he's found himself in become a deeper character, much to his... Read More
hilarious, and a good intro to western RPG style
great series so far. The author introduces a decent OC who's naturally quirky (coming from a different universe and all) without making him overpowered. It's a hilarious deconstruction of both D&D and Harry Potter because the OC is fully aware that he's a D&D character with stat points and everything, and he's trying to impose his own universe's mechanics on the Harry Potter universe.
even if you're not a fan of D&D, the concepts are presented very smoothly in the narrative without glaring infodumps. great work so far.
Lots of promise, and great characters!
Extremely well executed, with great editing and the kind of characterization you don't normally get in fanfiction as close to crack as this one is. In particular, the Harry is almost perfect- he's better than in many of the best-respected HP fics. In addition, the OC is very reasonably powered and does not at all cry out for a knife to the face. Also, there appears to be a well-kept update schedule. I, personally, will be following this story voraciously.

Craving more
Since all of the "books" in this series are posted under the same fic, I'm going to review up until where the updates stop, which is somewhere in the beginning of Milo's third year. So, I read this fic a while back (at least four or five years ago), and I recalled it being good, so I recently dropped back in on it to reread and catch up. And, let me say, I am so happy that I did. The main character, Milo, is truly a breath of fresh air for me, and I adore the way he thinks and the clever, blunt humour that is threaded through the writing.... Read More