Strong grasp on characterization of the cast. Some inventive ideas (wishes made, solutions to conflict, twists). Has an action/adventure approach with significant drama/character development. Some flaws. Frustrates regular shipping patterns credibly and ships well. De-emphasizes Homura and makes her less sympathetic. Avoids the common basic mistakes of fanfic. Overall a B grade effort, but the strong points are strong enough to distinguish it from the crowd.
Competent with intermittent brilliance
Strong grasp on characterization of the cast. Some inventive ideas (wishes made, solutions to conflict, twists). Has an action/adventure approach with significant drama/character development. Some flaws. Frustrates regular shipping patterns credibly and ships well. De-emphasizes Homura and makes her less sympathetic. Avoids the common basic mistakes of fanfic. Overall a B grade effort, but the strong points are strong enough to distinguish it from the crowd.