YMMV on this one. It's not a terrible fic, but the writing style is a bit choppy and the pacing of the plot is too. It feels like it isn't quite polished and could do with a good beta-ing or two to get it up to being as brilliant as the fic the previous reviewer made it seem to be.
this troper is somewhat less enthusiastic
YMMV on this one. It's not a terrible fic, but the writing style is a bit choppy and the pacing of the plot is too. It feels like it isn't quite polished and could do with a good beta-ing or two to get it up to being as brilliant as the fic the previous reviewer made it seem to be.