I nearly couldn't distinguish between this and Colfer's own style. Great grasp of character; maybe, Butler is a bit too concerned for the psychologists' well being, and the narrator isn't so humorous as in the original. Aside from this, there are just a couple missing commas and typos, and i can forgive those as long as they don't hamper reading too much. You're in my top five of good AF authors.
Simply great.
I nearly couldn't distinguish between this and Colfer's own style. Great grasp of character; maybe, Butler is a bit too concerned for the psychologists' well being, and the narrator isn't so humorous as in the original. Aside from this, there are just a couple missing commas and typos, and i can forgive those as long as they don't hamper reading too much. You're in my top five of good AF authors.