Valiona
Since: Mar, 2011
02/22/2021 00:00:00
You need to put a subject line for your review, since it sums up the review and lets people click on it from the Reviews Activity page. It can be as simple as "Incredible," as long as it fulfills both purposes.
PhoenixFire69
Since: Oct, 2020
02/22/2021 00:00:00
fixed it.
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much better than the source material
I truly appreciate how this fic fixes the story problems of the original game, and there are so many heartwarming, funny, emotional, and awesome moments that make it an absolute joy to read. I love how it primarily focuses on Jonathan, unlike the original game. 11/10.