Valiona
Since: Mar, 2011
02/16/2020 00:00:00
I have a few recommendations.
First, you should probably post your review on the work\'s trope page, rather than the Fanfic Recs page.
Second, you need to give your reviews titles, or else people won\'t be able to click their links in the Review Activity page.
Third, it would have been good to go into more detail about why you feel the way you do about this fic.
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It's stated repeatedly that outsiders have a serious chance of getting eaten by youkai in gensokyo and I quit less than 10% through when I realized I was hoping it would actually happen soon since maybe someone would actually react to that. If you have a high tolerance for both OCs and assholes, you might enjoy this but it just made me want to punch someone. 2/10 would not recommend.