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While most people may think that "Pirate Uzumaki" sounds good on paper, it literally jumps the shark halfway through the first chapter with some blatant Deus Ex Machina that gives Naruto way too much power, sort of like the setup of every mock-worthy badfic out there.
I\'d be interested in hearing more about this Deus Ex Machina.
By the way, if you don\'t put a title on your reviews, it\'s difficult to access them in the Review Activity. Part of the reason why I\'m leaving this comment is to make it easier to access your review.
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How well does it match the trope?