It started out with an interesting plot and in the first few chapters it had showed some promise, but the chapters are overly long and often boring with inane details that are completely unnecessary. Harry gains far too many powers over the course of the story and often for extremely absurd reasons and the author has an extremely poor understanding of the Nasuverse save for the most basic knowledge. Female characters are written with little personality or development and seem to exist solely to become either part of his harem or people Harry scorns, almost all of the female characters have been derailed as a result.
God-like character fics can sometimes work and I do like some of the, but it just utterly fails here. The author tried to incorporate far too many things without much thought on how it would affect the overall story. It's rather juvenile really, like a kid who can't decide what superpowers he wants and then declares that he can do ANYTHING. I did enjoy the first few chapters, but quickly it became too boring to read and eventually grew to outright hate it. I wouldn't recommend this fic to anyone, even if you DO like godlike Harry fics.
Terrible story
It started out with an interesting plot and in the first few chapters it had showed some promise, but the chapters are overly long and often boring with inane details that are completely unnecessary. Harry gains far too many powers over the course of the story and often for extremely absurd reasons and the author has an extremely poor understanding of the Nasuverse save for the most basic knowledge. Female characters are written with little personality or development and seem to exist solely to become either part of his harem or people Harry scorns, almost all of the female characters have been derailed as a result.
God-like character fics can sometimes work and I do like some of the, but it just utterly fails here. The author tried to incorporate far too many things without much thought on how it would affect the overall story. It's rather juvenile really, like a kid who can't decide what superpowers he wants and then declares that he can do ANYTHING. I did enjoy the first few chapters, but quickly it became too boring to read and eventually grew to outright hate it. I wouldn't recommend this fic to anyone, even if you DO like godlike Harry fics.