It's understandable that this author doesn't like Asuka. I have a bunch of characters I don't like, too. I dislike characters in a lot of ways - ranging from disappointment at how a character is managed, to sheer unadulterated vitriol at certain characters being poorly-disguised self-insert wish-fulfillment fantasy author avatars. If you don't like a character, do try to write a way for said character to lose the things that make them unattractive to you - doing so exercises your skill at writing character development.
But no, you just had to put Asuka through a pointless wringer and give her a pathetic end, all because you don't like her. True, I tend to save my most incendiary writing for said creator fantasy characters, but Asuka as a character isn't a lost cause. Some character development would have given her a better fate than what you've written.
All in all, you just took a massive dump on what would have been a decent crossover thanks to blatant and borderline misogynist character bashing.
P.S. I don't even like Asuka and her bad end in this story makes my fingernails curl.
Could have been decent, but the character bashing turned it to crap.
It's understandable that this author doesn't like Asuka. I have a bunch of characters I don't like, too. I dislike characters in a lot of ways - ranging from disappointment at how a character is managed, to sheer unadulterated vitriol at certain characters being poorly-disguised self-insert wish-fulfillment fantasy author avatars. If you don't like a character, do try to write a way for said character to lose the things that make them unattractive to you - doing so exercises your skill at writing character development.
But no, you just had to put Asuka through a pointless wringer and give her a pathetic end, all because you don't like her. True, I tend to save my most incendiary writing for said creator fantasy characters, but Asuka as a character isn't a lost cause. Some character development would have given her a better fate than what you've written.
All in all, you just took a massive dump on what would have been a decent crossover thanks to blatant and borderline misogynist character bashing.
P.S. I don't even like Asuka and her bad end in this story makes my fingernails curl.