Despite only being 5 chapters in this story is very well done each of the characters are written realistically and the reasons behind their actions are well explained and in character. The author deserves applause for making Dauf into an intimidating figure once again as opposed to a blithering dolt, and Riful is equal parts sinister and sweet as one would expect of her in the manga itself. This story is well written and a great idea in this tropers opinion, the one quibble i do have is there are a few spelling errors but that is easy enough to look past with a story like this.
Comment by capeclare
Despite only being 5 chapters in this story is very well done each of the characters are written realistically and the reasons behind their actions are well explained and in character. The author deserves applause for making Dauf into an intimidating figure once again as opposed to a blithering dolt, and Riful is equal parts sinister and sweet as one would expect of her in the manga itself. This story is well written and a great idea in this tropers opinion, the one quibble i do have is there are a few spelling errors but that is easy enough to look past with a story like this.