Bakazuki
Since: Jun, 2009
Jul 21st 2014 at 8:18:28 PM
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About the description... it's pretty weak. It was forgivable when all we had access to was the pilot, but now that three episodes are out in one form or another, it could use a little tweaking. Especially to fix its two main issues:
- Length: Self-explanatory; it's pretty small.
- Over-emphasis on role reprisals: Leave that for the Trivia section and let the series stand on its own. A small mention is okay, but it shouldn't take half the description.
Anyone with a knack for writing engaging descriptions willing to give this a shot?
Apparently, somebody put a link to an unofficial blog in the main page. Considering the blog has no ties to the official content (and could possibly be self-promotion) I will remove it.
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