I see what the opening paragraph is trying to do, by saying this is a unisex trope, but would it be better to have the gender case stay consistent in the entire paragraph (including the next by example). I was just about to edit out all the female pronouns from the second sentence, until I realized there are two sentences for each gender.
I see what the opening paragraph is trying to do, by saying this is a unisex trope, but would it be better to have the gender case stay consistent in the entire paragraph (including the next by example). I was just about to edit out all the female pronouns from the second sentence, until I realized there are two sentences for each gender.