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There, I think that should about do it. Massively cleaned up the original grammar and formatting, and also added a few things of my own into the mix. Anyone who sees any further improvements is free to add them.
Nice job :) now it Is a likeable trope
It was still all over the place. I further refined it.
It's "We wear the mask that grins and lies, It hides our cheeks and shades our eyes". Cleaning up the grammar of a poem isn't the best thing to do.
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How well does it match the trope?