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--> [[spoiler:\\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, ready to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.]]
...
--> [[spoiler: But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the comet\\\'s light. Felt the fires roar up in the harbor - and then everything had \\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\'.]]

Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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--> [[spoiler:\\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, read to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.]]
...
--> [[spoiler: But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the comet\\\'s light. Felt the fires roar up in the harbor - and then everything had \\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\'.]]

Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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--> [[spoiler:\\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, read to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.]]
...
--> [[spoiler: But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the comet\\\'s light. Felt the fires roar up in the harbor - and then everything had \\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\'.]]
Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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--> [[spoiler:\\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, read to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the Comet\\\'s light.Felt-
the-fires-roar-up-in-the-harbor--and-then-everything-had-\\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\']]

Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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--> [[spoiler:\\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, read to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the Comet\\\'s light.Felt
the fires roar up in the harbor - and then everything had \\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\']]

Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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--> [[spoiler:\
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--> [[spoiler:\\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, read to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the Comet\\\'s light. Felt
the fires roar up in the harbor - and then everything had \\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\']]

Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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--> [[spoiler:\\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, read to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\']]
--> [[spoiler:Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.]]
...
--> [[spoiler:But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the Comet\\\'s light. Felt
the fires roar up in the harbor - and then everything had \\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\'.]]

Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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--> [[spoiler:\\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"//
--> [[spoiler:The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"]]
--> [[spoiler:\\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.
--> \\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\'
--> No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, read to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.
--> \\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\'
--> Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.
...
--> ... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.
...
--> But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the Comet\\\'s light. Felt
the fires roar up in the harbor - and then everything had \\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\'.]]

Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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--> [[spoiler:\
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[[spoiler:--> \\\"Makoto,\\\" Zuko gripped Teruko\\\'s arm, hoping she heard him. Hoping \\\'\\\'anybody\\\'\\\' heard him. \\\"She\\\'s going for Asagitatsu\\\'s heart. We\\\'ve got to stop her!\\\"
--> The marine\\\'s voice was distant, washed over by screams like waves on the shore. \\\"Sir, \\\'\\\'dragon\\\'\\\'... out there... no chance to get to the island...\\\"
--> \\\"No.\\\" Zuko swallowed, throat dry. \\\"Not in this world.\\\"]]

Who said he was going after Koh? And also I wonder if Zuko has yet realized [[spoiler:that Ozai is dead.]]

--> [[spoiler:Like a shooting star, a fire in her heart flared and vanished.
--> \\\'\\\'No...\\\'\\\'
--> No warmth. No comforting force of a will to power twinned with Makoto\\\'s own, a will that had faced neglect and indifference and burned all the stronger, conquering, read to \\\'\\\'take\\\'\\\' what his elder brother would never give.
--> \\\'\\\'No!\\\'\\\'
--> Emptiness. Her clan was gone. All of her blood who willed the human\\\'s destruction were gone.
...
--> ... Heart a blaze of cinders, Makoto spat fire.
...
--> But he\\\'d seen a flash of sky-blue wings, washed to gray by the Comet\\\'s light. Felt
the fires roar up in the harbor - and then everything had \\\'\\\'blurred\\\'\\\'.]]

Makoto felt it right away, whereas it was only after she caused the harbor fires to flare that Zuko got double vision, probably having gotten knocked back from the force of it. So... I personally don\\\'t think that he knows yet. And if he really doesn\\\'t now, who wants to bet that Makoto\\\'s gonna be the one to break it to him... while she\\\'s doing her utmost best to break him?
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