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At the end of the series, he lost, he had to call a truce with Goliath and the clan, that doesn\'t sound like a benefit to him
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Sure, but they turned out to be inferior, and over the course of the series never helped him to triumph over Goliath
At the end of the series, he had to call a truce with Goliath and the clan, that doesn\\\'t sound like a benefit to him
Sounds more like Goliath ended up the winner of their rivalry
At the end of the series, he had to call a truce with Goliath and the clan, that doesn\\\'t sound like a benefit to him
Sounds more like Goliath ended up the winner of their rivalry
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No I mean at the end of the series, he lost, he had to call a truce with Goliath and the clan
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At the end of the series, he lost, he had to call a truce with Goliath and the clan, that doesn\\\'t sound like a benefit to him
