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To be honest, I find the whole concept of Military life in this game like it\'s under-played. Like it\'s something more of a chore and inconvenience for the students. The whole idea of suppressing their emotions and free will doesn\'t mix with the way the Garden is even run! All of the students just act like regular highschool students with no real emotional scarring, The Headmaster Cid acts more like a surrogate father to all his students then some rigid and tough military trainer and really? I find it hard to believe SeeD has ANY standards when it comes to emotional training when an airhead like Selphie is made one. (Not bashing on her as a character, I\'m just saying her attitude would NEVER gel in any kind of Military upbringing or operation.)
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To be honest, I find the whole concept of Military life in this game like it\\\'s under-played. Like it\\\'s something more of a chore and inconvenience for the students. The whole idea of suppressing their emotions and free will doesn\\\'t mix with the way the Garden is even run! All of the students just act like regular highschool students with no real emotional scarring, The Headmaster Cid acts more like a surrogate father to all his students then some rigid and tough military trainer and really? I find it hard to believe SeeD has ANY standards when it comes to emotional state-of-mind when an airhead like Selphie is made one. (Not bashing on her as a character, I\\\'m just saying her attitude would NEVER gel in any kind of Military upbringing or operation.)
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I\'m sorry, I\'m just saying I can\'t support this message of every main character suffering from suppressed emotions and the so-called \
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I\\\'m sorry, I\\\'m just saying I can\\\'t support this message of every main character suffering from suppressed emotions and the so-called \\\"conflict between childhood and adulthood\\\" when at most it only applies to one character(The Main Character sure) and for the wrong reason!
Changed line(s) 5 from:
To be honest, I find the whole concept of Military life in this game like it\'s under-played. Like it\'s something more of a chore and inconvenience for the students. The whole idea of suppressing their emotions and free will doesn\'t mix with the way the Garden is even run! All of the students just act like regular school students with no real emotional scarring, The Headmaster Cid acts more like a surrogate father to all his students then some rigid, tough military trainer.
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To be honest, I find the whole concept of Military life in this game like it\\\'s under-played. Like it\\\'s something more of a chore and inconvenience for the students. The whole idea of suppressing their emotions and free will doesn\\\'t mix with the way the Garden is even run! All of the students just act like regular highschool students with no real emotional scarring, The Headmaster Cid acts more like a surrogate father to all his students then some rigid and tough military trainer and really? I find it hard to believe SeeD has ANY standards when it comes to emotional training when an airhead like Selphie is made one. (Not bashing on her as a character, I\\\'m just saying her attitude would NEVER gel in any kind of Military upbringing or operation.)
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I\'m sorry, I\'m just saying I can\'t support this message of every main character suffering from suppressed emotions and the so-called \
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I\\\'m sorry, I\\\'m just saying I can\\\'t support this message of every main character suffering from suppressed emotions and the so-called \\\"conflict between childhood and adulthood\\\" when at most it only applies to one character(The Main Character sure) and for the wrong reason!
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